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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#931

thanks for the pm and wishes! Happy New Year! wishing you and your family a prosperous year! stupendous update! seems like Maan was waiting 4 Geet to call! Geet stunned that an old man can be so lecherous! poor girl is all alone! glad Maan called her! interesting convo! nice of Maan 2 help her iro of transport etc! wonder why he did not deny for dovorce! so Maan has an admirer! Geet relieved to reach home but has now realised she has 2 tell her parents abt her divorce! this will not b so easy as she thought! continue soon!

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#932

Awesome

Maan missing Geet but not admitting

Geet safely reached home but wT she

will tell her family y she's here with out Maan

maanseem confused he was worried about hr

but he didn't stopped hr bz he thought jane wale kabbie kisi ke kehne pr roktey nahi

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#933

Just logged in after a few weeks and saw so many updates Reading chapter 49 - this is probably the first time in any story that I want Geet to be with someone other than Maan. The relationship between Geet and Ayush just makes me feel so much! The last few chapters you have written have been sheer poetry ! It's as if we can see the characters in front of us and feel their emotions, their grief and despair - like we are watching a move! So beautifully descriptive and so intense ! You have grown leaps and bounds as a writer! Think about publishing this story via Amazon !!
Going to read chapter 50 onwards now

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#934

Another beautiful update Congratulations on getting to 50 ! Loved the imagery used in this chapter And the bomb named Ayush that was dropped in the end

Originally posted by: Commelina

Thank you😃

This is really an achievement. Didn't know I had it in me.😳
I had no confidence as a writer when I began, but because of you people, your encouragement I have improved a lot. So thank you to one and all.❤️

😉 😉 😉

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AISHAJS

@AISHAJS

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#935

Brilliant update. So stubborn the both of them...

Thank you 🤗🤗

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#936

part 53 - firstly , love the title 😆
Absolutely love the style and tone of the letter! Geet is hilarious and cute at the same time - "Nayan sukh prapti " 😆 though she's masking a lot of pain :-(
And such a sookha reaction from Maan 😕 what a stubborn man!

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#937

wow so waiting for it
beautifully written
really loving both pov
maan isnt that unaffected as he act he is somehow hurt by her sudden decision
he reading her lrtter again I guess this time he will understand her fully

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#938

i hope maan understand her this time

oh god divorce

Happy New year to u too dear

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vydehi

@vydehi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#939

Another beautiful update. Geet is emotional. She is very naive. Maan probably understands that it is not as easy as she thinks to end this relationship. So, he seems to be taking her divorce decision easy. He also noticed Aayush's feelings for his wife. Geet on the other hand is innocent. She has no idea about it. Her letter was beautiful, straight from her heart. Nothing to hide. I assume he is going to retain it and not throw away later. It will probably find it's place among his precious things. What is going on in his mind? Is he going to go to HP to get her?

Edited by vydehi - 7 years ago