PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 10

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PART-63

"jab se tum hare bare me suna hai..tab se muje pyar ke ehasas hoga ya hai...can you believe..can any one fall in love just hearing the name...yes..maan singh Khurana ...I just fell in love with your Name itself.."

First time when jiju , told about that you are the one who has send money for the fees. I started to think about you, ..

Pyar ke ehasas...the words are hauting him .

He took shiv pic into his hands...shiv holding very closely the other girl

Maan listen to me once...please ..one time...ek mauk do..please...these words are haunting him ..

his legs were shaking, as if there is no energy he settled on the couch .

He understood the grave mistake he did...the mistake which he cannot now rectifty ...the mistakes which costed him to part with his life,in his anger ...

But there are so many questions which he needs answers ..geet ..what I have done to you...holding diary close to his heart ...tears are coming out from his eyes...

Maan ..what happned beta...

Savitri dev was shocked when maan was sitting near bed ..on the floor.she immediately got up and sat ,her hands went on his hair...she was concerned... about him..in last 10 years, he never came like this..what happened to him .


Dadima he kept his head on her lap and started crying .

What I have done,apni haat se apni jindagi barbad kardiya.


What you are talking maan..is everything okay..


No dadima everything is not fine..why I did not listen to geet words..why I did not give her chance.. why ..

Maan ...ha dadima maina geet ko galat samja ...vuse mauka nahi diya ..fresh tears came into his eyes.

Maan beta..abhi bhi waqt hai..you can bring back your geet back..

No..she will not come back...I know I hurted a lot ..flashes of his rude behavior came into his mind ..the way he had broke her mangalsutr and and dropped her in the railway station in the rain , babaji what I had done ..

Maan you should not lose hope like this , with out attempting any thing how can you loose hope like this..it maybe hard, may be geet will not listen or will not like to talk with you, but you should

try to bring your geet back into your life, bring back daughter -in -law of this house.


Maan went into his room holding tightly as if his life depends on it , Sleep was long lost , he wants to read the diary , but scared to open it,

Do not know how many more things will open up ..

With trembling hands he turned the other page


I am so happy today maaan , you know we are becoming relatives officially.you are now my jijju brother so I have full right to love you, do not know when I am going to meet you,

Why geet why you love me so much, itna pyar..in return what I done..

At the same time his cell rang telling .His PA , he saw the time, it was already morning , he has so lost in the dairy that he did not see the time,

His Pa remind him the Meetings which he cannot avoid, he dragged himself to office with the restless heart , his mind was on dairy , his hands went on it.

"Maan would be belive it , iam going to be chachi.. ..but meera di..if I want to see baby , another 8 months I have to wait..muje nahi hoga..i cannot wait..jiju was lauging at me...he was teasing me, geet lagta hai...witout going through any pregnancy you want ready made babies,

Dekho na maan muje kaise tang kar rahai..he even telling me that

He will not show his baby to me... Even if he behaves you are there there for me .., I know you will support me,, haina maan ..i have full trust on you, you will never do like that ..you will never hurt your geet haina maan..

With the sudden shriek sound pa rushed to maan cabin.he saw the glass was broken and blood was dripping out from his hand..he immediately call the attendant to clean the mess, and with he first aid box he went near maan..

Leave it of and go ..

Sir it is bleeding ..i thing so some glass pierced into skin, let me check once..

No need, you just leave.

.Pa at once left the cabin, thinking what happened to him..

geet ye dard itna bhi nahi jitna me tum he diya hai.i broke your trust geet, I separated your Vicky from you..how could I do this to you..


Here geet got busy with the office work, she felt relief when maan not seen in the office, when adi told that maan went to Delhi..,

Other challenging she is facing in the house ..is issue about her marriage , she did not understand the issue which buried long before

, now again ma papa brought the topic, and who is this guy Rahul , I never heard about him, never remembered about him..and why the hell he wants to marry me, even when he knows that I am mother of a child...


next _ Part-64

Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Really nice one. But short , but I really enjoyed it. very good one. finely trust is out. Like button does not work.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
Finally maan gt to know truth dev/shiv married to meera not geet.
I just hope maan contact geet before rahul's drama.
Geet already suffered somuch now don't want her to suffer more.
Update soon
Edited by SONU_29 - 8 years ago
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Amazing update. Maan read the diary and got to know about Geet being sister of his brother's wife Meera.. He also got to know about Geet's love for him. He is broken and felt disgusted on himself for his behaviour towards Geet. Dadima told him to get her back. Maan felt that it is too late but Dadima encouraged him to try to win her back.
Geet is releaved to know that Maan is back to Delhi. But another problem at her home as her Ma and Paa are asking her to get married. Some Rahul is interested to marry her even after knowing that she is mother of a baby.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very much emotional
maan is repenting his deeds with geet
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hi thanks 4 da intense update, well written! Maan gets 2 knw the truith! Maan feels guilty! he didn't trust Geet n hurt her! wt will happen wen he gets 2 knw abt his daughter! update soon
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Nice update
Maan is reading the dairy and feeling the pain gave to pain
Hope maan go and try to understand geet before parents fix marriage with that rahul
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally maan get to know his geet was innocent
he mu hr and did big mistake fr not listening her
not even once
other side geet proposal she don't want to marry anyone
she still married maan didn't gave hr divorce

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