PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Geet know about Maan
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
sorry for late comment
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read all updates
very emotional updates
geet recognize maan but how
also ready to marry rahul
maan is thinking how to expose rahul in front of geet
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Posted: 8 years ago


UPDATING


UNTIL THEN SMALL TEASER


since morning I am feeling very low...this downpour has increased my anxiety, ajebesi bechaini...aisa kuch hone vala hai...trying to control my breathes ,i tried to close the window doors which are making sound .how the time has changed everything..the girl who use to love these rains, and used enjoy these now hating them...who told time heals everything.. only savior for me is the work , I tried to concentrate on the blue prints..



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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful teaser! will b waiting
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previous ~ part-72


PART-73

When maan reached the house ..he saw both kids settled with their daddu...playing chess..

He saw manasi is trying hard to save her king,

No..do nt not this, move this..saying that he played the next move making check mate.

Vow uncle ..we made it.just one move..not only saved the our king and kept check mate, saying she hugged maan..

Maan felt blessed when manasi hugged like this,.

kya baat hai balvant you played very nicely...with one move..you changed whole game..very good..but what happens to you, why you took so much time for coming dropping geet in the office and coming here , kabhi kabhi , you behave so strangely..with out telling you will go somewhere.. did you joined in any where .

maan was looking at raam he do not what to answer for that question , to his rescue ,they heard some falling sounds from kitchen .

anjali..beta..what happened..are you alright ..

uncle I will see..

when maan entered the kitchen he saw, Anjali has fallen on the floor, all the utensils are scattered on the floor.

Maan immediately took her into his arms, and made her lay on the couch,

What happned to mama...ma.., kids gathered around her, even raam became anxious seeing her like this.

Vo uncle, it is better, we will take her to hospital..

Ya I will call priya and tell that you will be coming

Maa maa what happned to anju, yash directly went into priya cabin,who was checking anju..

Seeing his son concern, priya smiled...inwardly

Ma is everything ok.i have to check yash, waiting for the reports to come.

Yash literally snatched the reports from the hands of the nurse.and before she could go, he immediately hugged her, thank thank you kissing her on the cheek..

Yash what you are doing ...seeing anju angry face he realized what he has done,

Even maan was surprised ,seeing yash behaving like this

Anju it is not like that...

Then what ...vo kya hai na , itna good news de diya tum ne, I coud not hold myself, saying that he hugged and gave kiss on her cheek..

Hearing their mother voice, yash gave a smile trying to compose himself...

Seeing yash happiness for becoming father again,his thoughts went on geet, how many things he had missed in these 10 years,..

When geet came out of the K.C office she got surprised seeing kids in the car with maan ..

She glared at the maan ...she expected after their morning talks he would leave and go away, what he wants , why he is behaving like this...and now he brought kids along with him, now cannot talk before them..

Pari why you came here.vo maa I want to see your office, and mummy is not well, she is sleeping,

What happned to ma...seeing her concern..

Kuch nahi geet..vo...vo..he do not know how to reveal this news to her..at the same time manasi came to his rescue..

Pari ...why cannot you wait till we reach house...will you both tell what is going on...

Maa you know papa told..now i became big girl...chotta baby is coming, so I have to care of mummy now..

What .geet smiled hearing those words,

Maan lost in that beautiful smile,which he is seeing after so many years..

Anju..anju ..iam so happy for you...this is the time for you..yash se seva karvaneke...di apko pata hai ...he loves me lot , and will take care for me lot ...ha I know ..how much you love him..cannot tolerate any word against him...

Why everyone is bent to brain wash my love .she the only one in the whole house who loves me..glaring at geet...seeing rasgulla in his hands yash ...you brought for me..nahi I brought for the neighboring aunt..

Yash...then what anju..this is for you like them..na..so cute...she immediately hugged him...

Geet was adoring. Them...at the same time she saw maans eyes staring at her...at one second both of them lost..one in the guilty..for not able to be with her in this journey. Not there for pampering her, he was not there beside her, when she needed him the most .the other with broken heart...she saw his guilty face...but..kya kabhi usko me maph karpayi gi...kay is thuthe hua dil ko rahe mil sakti hai..kya is dil ko kabhi jud jaya gi...no geet me kabhi har nahi manu ga..tumhari is tuthe dil ko me jaruru jodne ke koshi karuga... till then I will not loose hopes...

dii..what happned where you are lost...vo kuch nahi..she smiled.

since morning I am feeling very low...this downpour has increased my anxiety, ajebesi bechaini...aisa kuch hone vala hai...trying to control my breathes ,i tried to close the window doors which are making sound .how the time has changed everything..the girl who use to love these rains, and used enjoy these now hating them...who told time heals everything.. only savior for me is the work , I tried to concentrate on the blue prints..

with the door knock geet was surprised ,who could be at this hour...at too in this weather

Rahul sir..app..is waqt...papa is not in the house, he went for check up to hospital ..

I know that geet...that is why I came..he immediately locked the door .

Geet got scared seeing his actions.. sir what you are doing ...

I cannot take it anymore..how many days I have to wait...from the day one I saw you I need you...I tried to control my lust which wants you day and night, the best thing is that to marry you, the only thing which keep you with me,I tried to be good infront your family members, and gain their confidence, but happened to them I do not know, even my marriage proposal, to my bad luck even the old ,man got admitted in the hospital, now I cannot take any more...I want you...badly ..

Geet was shocked hearing all these, sir..what ...you are telling..please go away from here...she tried to come out of his grip of his hands which are on her arms, she pushed him, and came out of his grip and started to run away.

No geet you cannot run away from me like this, even pari ran away from me like this ,.i do know how could this old man could get able to get these hot and sexy girl as daugthers , even that pari..before I could lay my hands on her , she ran away and met with that accident

Geet was shocked with this new piece of information,her eyes went on the cell phone which is on te table, she wants to grab that one, and call yash.

Maan was surprised when Rahul called Raam, more than driving he was concentrating on their talks,

No Rahul beta I not at home,, iam going to hospital with balvant, noting to worry, it was routine check up, no today is there some parents and teacher interaction ,so yash and anju went to school taking kids with them...ya sure beta , you can come next time to meet ...

Balvant what happened why you stopped, in the middel, is everything okay,but maan was not listening , his mind was on their talks, why rahul called at this hour, geet is alone in the house, before he could think further, he took his phone.

Who is there near house for security ...what ..why you did you not called me before...iam reaching in 10 min...

He immedaitely made a u quick uturn and gave acceleration to the car, making making car to speed up..

Raam did not understand what is going on..what maan is talking..nor he could not understand his sudden actions, and his outburst..

Beta is everything okay...seeing his hands on shoulder, maan understood he is not alone, and raam is there beside him, and at present his actions are answerable.and he cannot avoid that.

Uncle ..do you have faith on me..

I do not what I saw in those deep blue eyes...I want to trust this guy, the way he saved me from clutches of death...I could sense his pain..

Is everything okay beta..

No uncle it is not, we have reach there, before ..anything happens..

Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Anju is pregnant and the family members were happy for her
Maan was happy for them but was sad he couldn't cherish geet's pregnancy and her moodswings when she needed him the most . He was determined to win geet's trust and love back
Rahul planned well and tried to force thyself on geet to fulfill his desire
He spilled beans abt his deeds and his hand in Pari's case too which shook Geet to the core
With rahul's call to Ram abt his whereabouts made maan feel restless and could guess abt Rahul's intention too
Maan was determined to rescue Geet from Rahul's evil eye before something bad happens
Thanks for the update
Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update. please update next part soon. I wish this part was little longer.
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting update ...
wow ..anju is expecting nd everyone happy to know the gud news .
although i felt bad reading how maan regreting realizing what he missed over these past years ..
last prt was scary ..that cheapo rahul forcing geet finadng her alone at home ..
hope maan save her on time ..

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