Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018)

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#601

Fantastic update yaar

Loved itt soo much...

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#602

Thanks alot for pm dear

Pls update next part soon...

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Nefret19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#603

Hi dear I happened to chance upon your story and have just started reading this one Mera Maasoom Patidev. Awesome start yaar. And the characterization of Maan & Geet is very different. I hate Maan's family for all the torture and hurt that they give to him. That Karan's mom is trying to kill him!!! OMG!!! Only Dadima and little sis loves Maan in the family. But why can't Dadima do anything yaar? Why cannot? Can't she go to the family lawyers?

Luckily Babaji sent Geet in Maan's life...And Geet is so adorable in her heroics:):):) Such an adorable pair...Both of them have fallen for each other in their own innocent ways:):):) Juilee is so adorably angry yaar! Super cute:):):) I am hoping that Maan & Geet would marry soon. But I am afraid of one thing...that Karan and his family...because of the ragging incident Karan is planning to avenge Geet for his insult...so if Geet marries Maan & goes into his family I am afraid of what he might try to do...Also Karan's parents...how they would torture and plan to kill both of them. But I am sure Geet & all her loved ones will be there to support and protect Maaneet. And Geet would teach each & every one of them a lesson in life that they would never forget...

Looking forward to read on this intriguing story dearie.

Edited by Nefret19 - 8 years ago

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kito

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Posted: 8 years ago

#604

great update karan ko acha sbk Mila h he get shock after shock his assignment burn but he told maan to do his all assignment poor maan but he did it karan misbehave with girl but geet come at right time and help her geet dont know he is karan Harman meet geet maan see him hugging geet and he fuming to see him he don't like him close to her geet see maan but he angry on her geet tell him sorry for not coming a listening this he also feel sorry and forget his anger he ask her about that man she Tell him that Harman is her Best friend but he is special than him maan very happy listening this heheee Julie geet jealously for each other waiting for next part

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#605

Waiting for next chapter !!!

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Kalpana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: taahir004
Waiting for next chapter !!!

😲😲😲

u did not comment on part 5..😕

but u asking next part..too bad bhai🤢

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#607

Karan using Maan's intelligence for himself and at the same time his mother gives poison

to Maan I just hate Karan and his parents

Geet meets Daadi at the Dargh and Daadi prays that Maan meets an Angel just like Geet

Maan comes to meet Geet and sees Harman with her he gets angry too wow thats so cute

Geet and Maan have connected on some level and I do think it will take time for Geet to realize this

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

😲😲😲

u did not comment on part 5..😕
but u asking next part..too bad bhai🤢

Yeah Taahir you're bad need to check your pms😆

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#609

Chapter 5

Fantastically Awesome

Oh Karan is the dumb one has always used Maan's intelligence so its Maan that is doing Karan's homework while Karan ill treats him

Daadi goes to the Dargh and prays for Maan there she falls a bit ill and Geet helps her promises her that her prayers will be answered by God

Daadi wishes that someone just like Geet could enter Maan's life I wonder what Daadi will do or how she'll react when she finds out that Geet and Maan are already friends

Geet though she is matured she has a kind heart praying to her Babaji and telling him about Karan and why she did the prank that was cute

Karan in college did he just see Geet and now having vile thoughts about her too

Maan sees Geet and her friend and it seems he did not like the idea of Geet having fun with someone else or was it his innocent mind telling him as he waits for her she is having fun

but I liked that entire scene and Geet without realizing telling Maan he is much more important than Herman

oh Julie and Geet meets face to face and both dislike the fact that the other is Maan's best friend

sorry I'm not sure how I missed part 5