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Wonderful update dear, loved it, eagerly waiting for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Mahi, please post Part 21

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 20



Fascinating Update



Maan is just so happy and he feels

now finally he and Geet will be together

I'm only hoping that this time Geet does not hurt him so deeply

because this time Maan will not be able to take it

Meera is angry on both Adi and Pinky because they knew everything

about Geet

Mahi will be discharged in the evening and Maan is so looking forward

again to been with both Geet and Mahi

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Posted: 5 years ago

Will they be able to close the gap and move ahead?

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Posted: 5 years ago

kindly update this ff as well

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Hey Mahi... where are you?

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Mahi want an update....... thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago

part



poor geet almost run to mahi room she know that she have to face now a Golgappa mahi ....and pinky and adi cannot handle when she took such avatar so with hurry geet reach to mahi room and open the room door with thudding heart and praying to babaji .



their the pinky walking around the bed and adi seating with holding his head ....



geet mummer to drama alredy ho chuka hai babaji bacha lena aja ...



ok ok we have happy news we are going back to home in evening and so we have the golgappa treat for today but condition is no human being have to become gol gappa so who is interested please tell me i have to make preparation na ...geet say in one breath and look mahi side with lots of hope .




other side mahi who were well know its her cute and innocent mother defense for her angry mood and every time she is success in it . ...a soft smile appear on mahi face and adi pinky look littel devil with O shape mouth they trying to coo her anger from last hour and she give so much trouble to them and geet one golgappa treat solved all probelm.



now pinky fern in anger its not fair mahi every time within second u cool down with geet to hum ek ghante se kya kar rhe theay can u explain



mahi make serious face and say in plain tone because she is my cute mother and anything for her .....


geet cannot control herself and giggle on mahi ans .....



pinky and adi look to daughter mother deo and joins to their laugh ....pinky took mahi in her hug and say u naughty girl ma ki chamchi ...


same time geet mobile beep with maan massage



she read the massage and get tense



" i talk with meera and she become volcano and dash out from cabin me feel tense "



geet almost lost the color of her face ...and she mummer why she is always a Bandit queen ..


geet is always not comfortable around meera because of her bossiness



mahi notice geet tense face and ask what happen ma ....


geet reply kuch nahi beta wo office se massage tha...


mahi nodded on geet nas


other side in cafe maan and dev chatting with enjoying coffee dev feel happy with chatting and so full of life after ages he looking him like this .



other side meera in bathroom trying to control her tear waise to she is verge of crying in front of Maan ...but what about her tom boy image so with angry fake face she dash out from office cabin and reach to rest room so she control her emotions she is so happy for him and ya for that chuihiya also. she control her somehow and make her way to cafe she very well know both of them enjoying their coffee .


meera almost dash their and almost dash to dev who almost slip his coffee



dev say with gritting his teeth slow down meera what are u doing its will hurt me yaar

meera once glare to dev and than maan



dev now enough meera let celebreate his happiness come on don't be spoil spot ok ...



maan put his plam on meera palm and say please meera i want to enjoy this moment



meera nodded ....she also want to be part of his happiness bas apne tear ko anger main cupa rahi thi



dev no one know that u cry now take chill pill ...dev wink to and meera eyes winded in shock

she some time think how much dev know her in and out



meera some how manage her emotions and say i am happy for u maan .waise kab jana hai humko hospital


maan look once to meera and send her one serious gaze no prank meera specially in front of Mahi.....



meera nodded i will promise ...



maan ask them to meet near hospital around 6 o'clock they agreed on it .


around 6 pm maan waiting impatiently he want to meet geet early and there is no sine of meera dev ....both arrived 10 min



maan almost fuss on both can't come on time ..


.

meera reaply oh oh oh lover boy for 10 min so much drama ....abhi hum log ke sath main tu tu main main apka time vest nahi ho raha kya



she ask with smirk ....



maan groan in frustration and start to took step to mahi room side ....with smile dev and meera start to follow him ..



other side mahi amking trouble to adi pinky and geet she want to go early at home ..and dont know why they doing delay like they are waiting for someone..




at last mahi say in serious irritating tone when going to finish this hide and seek game ....app jinki rah dekh rahe ho wo to muje dikne wale hai jab wo yaha aayenge .than what to point in hide ...



before geet reply anyting ...


meera reply who entered in room with maan and dev



meera - you are right miss Mahi but your moter is such darpok jinko bolne se jada hide karne main maja aata hai ....


what to do na ....meera tonted geet

Edited by Mahimaan - 5 years ago
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Superb update dear, loved it. .....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 21

thanks for the pm!

amazing update! greatly written.

at least Geet manofys Mahi.

Maan messaged Geet about Meera.

great that Meera is happy for Maan.

Geet and Meere meet

update soon

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