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part 23



Maan stand near to Geet so he lock the view of other no one look to Geet exposed back …hegive one angry glare to meera like itswill burn her alive .

Maan…mummer softly make your hair properly Geet ….first Geet who is almost froze with Maan presence …pinky called softly when she found Geet froze step …..geet .geet

And that brought back Geet from froze stepshe somehow control her tear she don’t want to gather attention from any one to her she make the proper heir of her and she lost all courage to look anyone side she called softly excused me and went away from there …..

Maan turn tomeera side and mummer its very chip way to tease anyone kisi ko nude karne main konsa Joke hota hai Meera can u explain ,do u ever thought what imapact can been happen on person with your so called Prank . Miss meera prank aise hone chiye jisme karne wala aur jiske sath prank ho raha hai wo bhi khoosh wo bhi muskarye kisi ke ashu ko apne haapiness ki wajah mat banane do because that will be make you Devil from human …

Tum girl ish wajase I am only talking eles mera reaction kuch aur hi hota samjhi tum…not get lost from here before I change my mind and give complaint agaist you ….got it.

Maan trun to look pinky who almost froze with Maan outburst ….maan ask her where is she ….pinky only pointed to canteen side she almost get tongue cut situation .

Maan took big steps and almost run to canteen side …and there he found her in corner with something in her hand may be coffee cup ….he reach there and seat opposite to her ,he don’t say anything only ask for coffee to canteen boy …..

Geet know that he is one who seat in front of her but she don’t want to see his side …she feel so embarrassed to face him why one earth he have to see her like that and why on earth she attend such foolish program ku wo har baar wo gadhi pinky ke bato main aa jaati hai ..she took deep breath …and look to her coffee. Mug …..

Maan saw all her emotions and say softly we have to use our hand to drink the coffee or tea Miss Handa he say with such serious tone for second Geet get confused and give blank and shock look to him….

Maan make so serious face poor girl slowly took the mug and start to drink that coffee like obedient child she missed the humor of his words …

Maan nodded with her action she is way to innocent ….maan give her time to finish that coffee he also finish his one..

And waise main jo abhi bola tha wo ek Joke tha ….he give her teasing smile an d next moment Geet mouth open in perfect o shape with Big eyes ….

She once look to babaji a nd mummer deka babaji now he also pulling my leg ….

Maan cukle with her reaction and say Miss Handa humko program bhi attend karna hai eles serch team aa jayghi yaha humare liye ….poor Geet give him shy smile and both come out from canteen …

Maan - if you are not comfatable with dress why u wear it ….

Maan talk make clam Geet and her mood change before some time she feel like crying ….

Geet reply wo dress code tha and ye ek hi thik se ho raha tha and pinky force me so ….

Maan - ok ek baat bolu Geet kisi ko unke thought apne upper force karne mat dena kabhi fhir wo koi bhi ho even your friend ,family anyone and second things ..koi bhi dress jab app pehno to uska thik se carry karo with confidence, confidence is Key of our attitude its your scare face and hichkichat of dress who gave idea to meera to do such prank on you ….got it …

Geet give look to Maan …in so less word he give me teaching of life …she mummer thanks sir …Maan nodded and both went to event side ….

Same night all gather for dinner …including pinky who is still terrified with Maan so today she took almost mon wrat ..which surprised all ….after diner Maan say Good bye to alland went to sleep to his room and after fisnish all chore pinky and Geet went to Geet room.

Maan fisnih her pending work and called off the day and try to sleep after some time he sleep ……after some time his sleep broke with song and he found himself in theater and song showing on screen is madhrui Dhak dhak karne laga where she showing her back ….maan feel like his throat went dry with unknown thrust…..his finger itching to touch and feel that marble like creamy back …

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he want to feel how much soft is that same time he feel what if his finger give com mark there …and he somehow make courage and touch that marble back with his finger and next moment he feel like he touch some silk its so soft and silky …he feel her whole body on fire ..he want to feel it more but he lost all courage when he lesion an audible gasp and that girl turn her face to his side and called sir what are u doing ….




With gasp Maan wakeup from his sleep he is totally aroused as well drench in pasina ….



Edited by Mahimaan - 4 years ago
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Note



this story will finish in more 5/6 parts


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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 23

thanks for the pm

Terrific update.... well written

feeling for Geet

Maan's anger was justified

glad that Maan confronted Meera

Meera should have thought before doing this

of cos Pinky was surprised with Maan's outburst

great that Maan went to speak to Geet

liked his advice to Geet

so Maan cannot get that image out of his mind

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Hi mahi how are you?

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part 24


Past

First time in his life like this yes he know about his own feeling for Geet but dream like this Geet its too much how on earth its happen ..yesterday incidence make impact on him or what ….maan u have to stay away from her it’s not ….good for her ,,,,

Sleep went away from him and poor soul just start to make notes for next lecture …tomorrow he going to took surprised test ….

Next day Maan went to coolage he once look to Meera ….and next he announced for test he noted that adi and dev give murders gaze to her they got that its Maan punishment for yesterday so called prank of meera ….

He give the questions paper and he clear that who get less than 20 from this paper have to re – write it 5 time more …a gasp crossed from class ….all in deep thought what happen to sir he never done anything like this ..but few souls very well know why sir behaving ike this….

Next one hour went like that and all lmost finish paper …now all take breath that lecture get fiish now they can go away from t oday devil Maan sir … after collecting the paper sir went outside and all ind eep discussion what happen to their cool sir …kya hua over night main …adi is almost ready to jump on meera ,just than Maan sir entered in class with so many big big books….

He announced that next 3lecutre class he going to take …Geet gap him as a shock what he upyto……

He announced we taking debet now on topic XYZ u everyone have to talk about it for 10 min and repeted point nahi chlenge u have to make new point….and last banch se ye debt start hoga …

Now I am calling Mr. dev ……

Dev once bend to meera …..aur de paav saap/snake pe he is all ready now to bite.

Dev went to stage and start to present his point and he is good Maan know he is good and clever ….after him adi present some new point on same topic….

Next meera stand for talk she feel he fgoing to ask her but Maan give shock Maan ask first Geet than pinky …like this going on Maan put meera on last number now situation is verse because almost all point get covered of topic till now ….

Now meera turn very tense she get Maan intention …she come front side …..

She try to say one point but some student say its already discuss and its happen again and again ..poor girl start turn blank …she don’t know what to say she give painful gaze to dev …dev feel like someone hurt him he cannot stand for meera sadness…other side he also angry on her because she cross her limit yesterday ..he know it’s too much but maybe she deserved it we cannot play with girl dignity on name of prank..he bend his head like he reading something. Some tear apper in meera eyes …she mummer sorry sir I cannot know more point on this topic may be all point get finish …Maan only nodded and went to balck bord side and start to write he amost write 10 point of balckbord ….

He stop and turn to student and ask do u all discuss this 10 point …

All get shock more 10 point how …..

Maan saw all student shock face and say u have to STUDY for this because app log jitna bhi interpretation karo har ek topic wo kam hai for study sky is limit but u have to give preparation to study not other things …ya ifu have intrest in other things likes singing sport go ahed but stay focus….on it This is best age where u can develop yourself in best maaneer jaha ye age main anergy jad hoti hai along with grasping power your brian soak all knwoladge like tissue paper …so use it …its evey time better to use your time anergy in good things rather than useless things that may hurt other one or its hurt to yourself also so think about it…

Maan once give look to meera than to Geet and both girl get the meaning of Maan words hiding meaning …..

Meera bend her head and next Maan dismiss her as well as class also he want to teach meera a good lesion and he is success in it.

He went to rest room ….

Other sidemeera went to Geet side and ask her can they talk in private first Geet get tense but than she say yes …

Both girl went to garden side and meera ask forgiveness from Geet ….geet get stunt with her apologies …she never expected this …next shock for Geet is when meera ask for friendship poor girl mummer yes somehow and both girl return to class …where dev with tense expression seated along with adi he saw meera went with Geet and his hear running like marathon now this meera what she up to …..

When meera aong with Geet reach there dev almost run to meera side and ask in harsh tone what u upto ..he is good techer that’s why hegive u this punishment only ..eles koi aur hota to till now tum restigated go gai hoti MEERA ….dont u get till now what cheap prank u play on her ….dev pointed to Geet …

Who almost trun red in emrassment …..

Dev… I support u in your prank because they are all innocent tumne kabhi hurt nahi kiya tha…. Some time prank ka impact bahot deep hota hai meera … meera give painful gaze to dev …some tear appear in her eyes..she know dev is right but this is first time he scold her like this ….

U very well know jab tumko koi takleef hoti how much this hurt me meera fhir bhi apna bachpana chodne ko ready nahi ho tum…and becofre meera say anything dev went to class pick his bag and all and went from there without giving second look to meera ….he stop near Geet for while ….and say to Geet I am sorry on her behalf ….ho sake to maaf kar dena miss Handa than he turn and went from there without any other word..

Meera stand there all shock and full of tear her one prank don’t know hurt so many people she don’t know what to do …dev is really angry with her …he first time reacted like this.

Geet feel so bad for meera she already s ay sorry to her but now her best friend react like this …Geet went near meera side hold her hand and say …app cry mat karo we will talk with him …main bhi baat karungi unse he realy care for you that’s why he react like that jo humse pyyar karte care karte hai wahi log aise react karte hai ….

And next moment meera hug Geet as response …..

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for updating


Part 24

Fascinating update.... well written

can understand Maan's thoughts

so he decided to stay away from Geet

glad that she taught Meera a lesson

she needed to know what she did was wrong

liked that Meera apologised to Geet and asked for friendship

great that Dev berated Meera

loved that Geet assures Meera

update soon

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Last part



Present

So its that’s is my closed encounter with meera she get punishment form sir as well as Dev also I get know her letter her so call tough image is actually her protection she don’t want to seen as emotional weak in front of any one …she that time facing separation of her parent so she become like that.

Geet stop while talking with Mahi …Mahi want to heard about Geet past after encounter of meera ….

Mahi - why your sir so protective about u ma ? she is so clever to her age Geet and pinky give surprise look to her….mahi,please unka face sab kuch bol raha tha when she talk to u rude maaner unka face main dekha tha ma …Mahi say in clam voice …

Some tear drop form Geet eyes ….her voice turn heavy …he love me from collage time …

Gasp come from Mahi mouth she say in sad and strick tone maa app pagal ho kya why u not married to him…..

Geet give one painful gaze to Mahi …apne paayr ka pata hi muje meri shadi hone ke baad chala …..wiase Biji try to make this marriage but my luck slap me hard ……and u know reaming…..

Mahi took Geet palm in her hand and say softly abhi unko kahi jane mat dena ma …he is your destiny …..AND I LIKE HIM……next moment she hug Mahi she feel so light ….

Mahi ask for phone to Geet …Geet confuse with her demand but give her Mahi scroll the numer and dial one number name sir ….and put it on speaker ….maan pick in one bail its slef he ask with worried tone is Mahi ok kuch hua kya …tum to thik ho na I am so sorry on behalf of meera plase forgive me ,Mahi ko bol do…please talk to me I am so much worried for both of you.

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Koi toh toh na laage

Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Hai rom rom iktaara

Hai rom rom iktaara

Jo baadalon mein se guzre

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Koi toh toh na laage

Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Kaise tune ankahaa, tune ankahaa sab sunaa

Tu hoga zara paagal, tune mujhko hai chuna

Some more tear make its way from her eyes ….why he love her too much my he choose her …unko to koi bhi mil sakta hai na …..

Mahi took breath ans say in soft tone its Mahi and me and ma is good app thik to ho na PAPA app bahot ghuse main gaye thei yaha se and hum dono ko thik se baat karne ka time bhi nahi mila thanks to your both friend waise sham ko ma reaching in collage don’t worry ….she coming with pinky ….masi today …

Other side Maan trurn tootay silent till he is worried that how he going to patch up all mess and she call me Papa ..or I start to hear things like my imagination ……

When she don’t get reapsnose Mahi again called papa app sun rahe ho…….na and I know u are in praking itself so come hear today I want to go with u to home ..mahi say softly and cut the call….

Geet and pinky amost froze in their they don’t know what to do dew min pass ike that and running Maan entered in room a smile spread on his face which is reaching to his eyes …ge once look to Mahi and Mahi pointed place next to her …on bed ….maan took step to her and next moment Mahi throw herself in Maan hug we both need u papa we both need I want to cure papa …ho ga na aisa she ask to him…..

Maan cup her face and mummer I will make whole world upside down for make u fit and fine we going to fight against this and we going to win Mahi ….. Maan open one hand for Geet and next moment Geet come there and hod that with so many new hope ….

Pinky who come out from this emotional roler coast ..mahi u are such devil yaar teri age kya hai and u make so simple situation wow let me broutgh something sweet ….after half hour all settle in Geet new house which is in her job work place ….after lunch Maan bid bye to them he somuch want to talk Geet ,but Geet is Geet again turn to rat she avoided Maan totally.Her shy nature not helping her much …he once look to her he so much want to look in her eeyes door of her soul….but Geet is Geet …..

He thought for while he have to wait till night …..he went from there ….next few hour Mahi and pinky make hell life of Geet with teaing a nd Mahi choose one white sari for her …on which Geet argu for half hour because its have backless blouse and she is not ready to wear it but nmahi make her ready somehow …

At night Geet feel so tense last time that phisco of her dress after that she never such wear and today she officially call him papa ..she feel so shy to face him and upon this sari she once look to babaji like kya hai ye babaji ..my me her heart making so much that she herself hearing that don’t know why but she feel kuch to hone wala hai …she took deep breath and entered in function place a huss spread around her …she feel so concisions with such reaction …..

Maan who is talking someone turn to look why somany gaze turn entrance side and poor soul forget to blink ….there she standing in white sari appear like angle with minimum make up and Jewellery she looking like a pari his pari ……






Next moment he feel angry with all why they watching to HIS Geet…just than someone called Geet and she turn to that side give good view to her back…..she wearing what a black less blouse







her creamy back he almost went to that day in mind…..but he cannot stand to the thought that everyone looking to her ….he took long step to her and called miss Handa please in cabin I need some important matter to finish ….he say with so much control tone that no one get his desperation ….

Geet think for while she have to be alone with him….she feel her heart stop for while and she nodded and start to walk behind her ..

Maan who is first entered in room and ask her to closed the door …she get that he don’t like her attired now he is angry ..and next moment she start to talk non stop ye meri choice nahi hai wo Mahi ne force kiya us din ke baad I never such dress babji ki kasam she say innocently …..

Maan who is quite but his eyes full of passion ,which maing geeet more confused and nervous took slow step to her side and poor girl start to walk back at last her back touch to wall now there is no roma for her ….maan come really closed to her she again open her lips to say something but Maan put his finger to her lips and what u doing to me Geet u don’thave idea about it …I don’t oppisit wear such dress but I don’t want to share with u anyone koi tumko dek raha hai ye thought muje pagal bana deta hat Geet Maan bend to Geet side who stand there with closed eyes his closeness making her more and more shy ….this closness toomuch for her ….before she make courage to open her eyes he plant pick on her closed eyes …one bye one …a soft moan escape form her mouth …..thats sit Maan lost his all abilty to think and all next moment he make her turn to wall and put all her long hair to one side so he can see her marvel white back who tease him that day also and today laso ..its so flowless like silk ….

Geet who is verge of fainting w ith Maan action …she almost gasp ….when she feel his lips on her back … that blouse which is have only one strap Geet feel so much expose to him…she feel so much emotions shyness her own desire .his first so intimated touch …he place small small sound able pick on her back and his lipc touch near the that strap and before Geet react any way he open the hooks with his teeth …..poor soul gasp loudly Maan …..

Tu din sa hai, main raat

Aa na dono mill jaayein shaamon ki tarah

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Koi toh toh na laage

Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha

Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha

Chitthiyon ko jaise mill gaya

Jaise ik naya sa pataa

Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha

Khaali raahein, hum aankh moonde jaayein

Pahunche kahin toh bewajah

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe

Koi toh toh na laage

Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi Mahi.... thanks for the pm


Last Part

Magnificent update.... amazingly written

at least Geet confided in Mahi

sad that Geet realised too late and got married

nice that Mahi called Maan

lovely song

So Geet and Maan meet....

liked that Mahi called Maan as papa....

Maan awed and assures her that she will be fine

he is already an awesome dad

of cos Geet looks stunning

Loved Maan's reaction

not surprised seeing a possessive Maan

He immediately takes Geet away

Maan cannot control

passionate moments.....


is this the end?


waiting for an epilogue

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Posted: 4 years ago

last

amazing part

maan is very happy as mahi accept him as papa

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