Belle of the Ball New OS 20/01/17 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Fairytale and maaneet... perfect combination...
its so beautiful...

Thank you Dreamer, they're such a dreamy couple 😉😆

Sneaky!

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

nice story
aysa laga ek big budget commercial movie ko kisi ne edit or cut kar zabardasti documentary bana diya ho😕

i mean this os was supposed to be a minimum of a short story yaar

ye kya kardiya..

all in all this was kind of reminder for me k tumhari kitni stories padni hai mujhe!!

do keep writing!😊

No way, shoot me. Did i just butcher one of your fairytales😲 (mixed emotion, the evil side in me is kinda happy don't know why and then the rest is confused)

I can't write OSs so this time i forced myself lol, thats why its so long or else if would have been a 3shot

Was it a reminder to stay away 😉

thank you (i think😆)

Originally posted by: taahir004

I had often wondered if I was the first guy that enjoys all Cinderella stories it always have this innocence kind of love maybe that's why I liked watching them

So Daadima has invited all the ladies to the Ball so her grandson can chose a fine lady for himself and wow the moment the Belle of Ball walks in he is mesmerized he falls in love with every little aspect of hers

yes the step mom and step sisters trying to play their last wicked game but the last game is only for Cinderella

Maan and Geet gets married and their life begins with love and happiness finally Geet has a loving family

Well maybe you are the first 😆 Well its a good streak to have 😃
here could be only one Belle though 😉
Thank you for reading

Originally posted by: cumberben

Sneaky!

I never knew you were a writer, well someone forgot to mention that to me 😛

It was a new era of Cinderella, the story was to the point

I enjoyed it a lot.

Geet like Cinderella suffered a lot but her miseries were different,

Sasha is..!

Loved your Maan here, he was

Keep writing and do tell me when you do so !

huh when did you jump in, n i'm the sneaky one, am I 😆
I'm not a writer, just a flimsy individual who scribbles alot of nonsense especially in front of the likes of you professional writers 😳

Thank you for reading thou and liking Maan's character

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Loved it..feeling as if im watching cinderella one of fav fairytale for girls..for one moment he was going to do wrong but our geet came in time ..(i love the blue dress)thnx 4 it

Thanks hun for double posting 🤗
Yep i suppose there isn't a girl out there that loves this story
Love the blue dress myself, i love royal blue anyway, half my wardrobe is filled with blue fancy dresses😉😆

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the OS! Thanks 4 a pm! Love fairy tales! Fantastic OS! beautifully written! a modern take on Cinderella story! Geet's dad died! she has 2 suffer so much! hate Rani, Tasha n Sasha! Geet works 4 KA! Dadi invites Geet to the ball n arranges a dress 4 her! Maan bolwed over! Maaneet dance! Geet left! Maan questions dadi! Maan goes 2 get Geet! Rani pushes Sasha! Geet refuses Maan! he confesses n proposes! Maaneet together! perfect end! 😊👏⭐️

Thanks Kwaish, i had wanted to write this even started but your persistence forced me to conclude this OS faster then I'd hoped for

so thank you

Originally posted by: hermosoanu123

Loved the note nd cindrella finaly got the prince charming ...loved it

Thank you, and Cinderella had to get her prince or else I'd would have gone crazy
Fan's like me live on these stuff 😉😆

Originally posted by: tabby999

Hi

Beautiful Os loved it

The note at the end was lovely

Thanks

Thank you Tabby 😃

Originally posted by: Commelina

Hello to the author there

This is my first time reading your work. And I must tell you your writing is simply beautiful.

First of all I need to confess my love for fairytales. And there are days when I go back and watch all the animated versions. Animated because they are cuter. Lol.

So when I saw a Maaneet version of Cinderella I was excited.

It is very well written. And I really annoyed reading it.

I was imagining Geet in a blue gown, Maan in tuxedo and I don't know why Janam janam song from Dilwale came to my mind. Tasha and Sasha as the evil step sisters and Dadimaa as the Fairy mother. That was innovative. Enjoyed reading the stepmom too.

And our Maan as the charming Prince that was like a dream come true.

I really really loved the last where he decided to go with his headt even when she said that she wasn't Geet.

You've put the story so well.

Geet Handa was celebrated as Geet Khurana.

And Pinky found her Prince too.

And not to forget I loved your note.

Thank you for writing this.

Thank you so much Commelina for reading. I had wanted to hide after this one but had to thank you for your lovely comment. Now the thought of a PM popped up, that would have sufficed too (i suppose next time I'll think hard before acting although this move itself took an entire month😆)

Thank you once again for taking me through the janam janam imagination, now i have it playing in my head too. Animation are way cuter, especially Bert, Mert and Luke ❤️ now in reality i doubt I'll say that 😆 cuz mice and cute don't go together in my dictionary lol

Thank you once again for the praises