Tere Bina/ Apna Sa Tu Ajnabi / Hi, do u want update ? 15 Sept

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Congratulations on new story

Prologue

Its Mysterious its Captivating

it seems like it holds a love story one that was wronged

Chapter 1

The Handa Family a reputed and respected family from a village had lost all the family wealth and the son Inder his wife Rano and two daughters had to live an ordinary life however this didn't stop Inder from instilling education into his daughters though living away from home he was always grieved until a chance came and he and his family returned home after nine years Geet been an educator and now with her friend Pinky who dislikes her profession as she wanted to become something different but with Geet been there Pinky gets a chance to relive her childhood days

at the store Geet meets this stranger and becomes curious and she also sees him at the park sitting alone and it seems as if he has been waiting for a close one for years he seems to be in a depressed state

now I'm eager to know about this guy too did something unwanted happened in his life

Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

nice intro Inder transfer's from his home town to Amritsar and their his daughters have further studies their and after nine years he transfers him self his hometown but raji not happy bcz she grown-up in Amritsar

geet loved teaching and she happy she continues teaching in there hometown pinky is hr friend and with gert went to shop's to have something chachu told about weird guy whom sit in garden hours pinky and geet also sat in garden

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

I have changed name to Tere Bina of the fiction , It has nothing to do with song..Just picked two words for story I don't write on already demonstrated movie tracks... This is whole mine concept..

Tu Safar Mera...Hai Tu Hi Meri Manzil

Tere Bina Guzara...Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Tu Mera Khuda...Tu Hi Duaa Mein Shaamil
Tere Bina Guzara..Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Mujhe Aazmaati Hai Teri Kami
Meri Har Kami Ko Hai Tu Laazmi

Junoon Hai Mera
Banoon Main Tere Qaabil
Tere Bina Guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil

Koi Kisse Ko Pyar Karne Se Nahi Rokk Sakta,

Wo Mile Ja Na Miley

Bas Yahi Glati Thi Uski

Aisa Pyar Karne ki,

Jo kabhi Mumkin He Nahi Tha

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Beautiful start
Awesome update
geet father reject best job he want to go his native place he is missing his native place
geet family accept her father wish but rajji don't want to go
geet ko job mill gaye teacher Ki
pinky n geet friendship was so nice they r thinking their childhood memory
they r gone for tea n samosa eat
geet is curious about man who is seeing only samosa
I think he is maan
waiting for next update

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Wow new story kya bat hai .geet from middle class .who is a stranger hope maan hi hoga. Congrats for new story loved it waiting for next part

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

starting was nice
geet is teacher study hard
Teaching is Best professional
pinky teacher can imagine eatting and teaching
geet interested in stranger man

Is that Maan age 35

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Krupa

@idunno

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

introduction of handa family, connection to hp 's village, returning back and geet enjoying. strange men, curiocity, guessing of geet and maan guessing his food and tears from eyes and geet thinking of his condition, i am sure he should be maan only.

kya hua hai ise?aise udas kyun baitha hai...?

waiting for next

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Congrats for the new story 👏

Loved geet's character... Lively girl 😎

Karmu chacha, geet n pinky conversation too good

Geet curious about the stranger

Is that Maan?

For what is he waiting... Waiting to know

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written! Geet is educated n is a school teacher! she is back to her hometown! she meets Pinky! Geet sees a stranger in the park! she is curious! update soon

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Congrats on new story with beautiful concept, geet being teacher belongs to a middle class family returns to her hometown & meets a stranger.
Waiting 4 nxt part