Tere Bina/ Apna Sa Tu Ajnabi / Hi, do u want update ? 15 Sept - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
start the story woth beautiful life of girl with small dreams , find happiness in smal thing...but interesting part is waiting
kaun hai wo jo intzaaar kr rha hai

hum bhi kr rhe hai wait

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Geet has returned home. Who is the stranger at the park. Who is he waiting for?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Congrats on new story tera 3 to 4 update I know tthw BHI chota hone Wala tha but still it's going on let's see how much u push this lovely concept so geet belonged to Amritsar but had to move away coz her uncle gamble all the money away but geet is eldeady and the most understanding kid she is mature and takes care of her whole family after many years back to her hometown where she worked as a teacher with her best friend pinky both went to their fav place where they used to go as a child there they got to know a stranger daily comes to park sits all day eats and pays and without saying anything leaves geet can sense his pain he seems to be waiting for something or someone
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Nice update dear Geet is a teacher and loves her work she is curious to see that stranger as discribe by Karun Chachaji and goes to part along with pinky there She sees him and felt odd he is staring at half eaten samos
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Congratulations for yet another story

Prologue is Captivating

it seems to innocent people in love and the man must have did something very wrong

Chapter 1

Geet's background is good , she is educated and now an educator too she had always known her dad wanted to be in his father's land the land that he grew up so when the chance came again she and her mother supported her father while her younger sister must have been annoyed going back to a village .
Pinky Geet's friend takes it difficult been in teacher's field as she wanted to do something different
the man in the park he seems to be waiting for someone close to him it seems like all he wants is to wait and maybe he is in a broken state too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Superb update
Geet is very ambitious girl but she is very obedient she never let her parents down islye wo job ko chodh kar apne parents ke saath apne home town wapas AA jaati hai but yaha bhi usse teacher ki job mil jaati hai
Loved pinky and geet's bonding
Both friends remember their childhood masti aur dono apne wahi purane karmu chacha ke shop par samosa khane jaati hai
Whai par geet ko karmu chacha se kisi stranger ks baare mai pata chlta hai Jo saara din park mai bitata hai
She is curious to know who is the stranger
Even we are curious dear
Beautifully written

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Posted: 8 years ago
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great start. geet's family had been very wealthy but because of her father's uncle , they lost all this . but geet's father has lot of respect. he got transfer in Amritsar , n he accepted as he wanted to give best education to his children but when they completed their education, he preferred to come back as he was missing his home town. geet become a teacher in reputed school. pinky was her childhood friend who also teaches in a same school. both friends went to the same place where they used to go in their childhood. who was that man in park. why was he sad. geet was curious to know about him. waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
interesting start
geet is so sweet
pinky and geet pt is lovly
who is this man?
who is he watining 4?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Awesome story...Geet who is a resident of BAJWARA, hosiarpur was shifted to Amritsar due to her father's transfer...now she is back to her hometown and got a job in the same school asca teacher where she studied...she is happy with her life... she along with pinky went to karum chacha's samosa shop remembering their childhood days...there she came to know about a stranger sitting in a park obvious to the things happening around him staring blankly into space...curiousity took over her and she went to park to look at the stranger...
i think he is maan who is in love with Geet but couldn't express it...may be due to her age as when she left the place she was just 15 -16 yrs teenage girl , couldn't reach her as he don't know her address and stil waiting for her to return which is uncertain...lets see if my guess comes out to be correct!!!
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
superb update
geet is a teacher and she get job in her home town where studies
she is very curious to know about the man
who is sitting in the park


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