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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nav2010
Thanks fir new one. Can't wait to read more.

thanks fir ? If you are not interested or fed up... plz ignore..But don't give such comments which don't have anything related to story...

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zida

@zida

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

interesting start
geet is so sweet
pinky and geet pt is lovly
who is this man?
who is he watining 4?

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lakshmisalvadi

@lakshmisalvadi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Dear

Today I read ur fiction. Found it interesting. New concept. Would like to read more. Plz contd writing dear. U have got amazing skill of writing.love to read this fiction.

All the best

Love u

Seeta

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Sanjida Tamanna

@tamanna121

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Congrats dear on ur new story..
It was a nice concept..
First part seems like a introduction part..
Geet was a simple beautiful girl..
Her friend pinky & her bonding was very lovely..
They got to know about a interesting person from karmu chacha's shop..
A person was sitting in park bench..
Geet could sense that some strom was going in him..
It was a nice start..
Loved the update..
Thank u so much for pm...

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Congrats for new story..

Geet is interesting in teaching..

She and pinky are working at same school..

Both went to kamus chachas shop..

Geet could sense that person has some

Strom in his life..

Waiting for next update..

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Thanks for pm Sonia...
Nice part as always

Geet was in teaching profession,her father declined the job in city instead he moved to home land...
Geet was happy but rajji was not...
Pinky wants to b in another feilds but due to her parents she too choose to teach...
Was it maan...Who was waiting for someone in the park from ages!!!??
If so,,,then for whom!?

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Interesting update. Geet is working as a teacher after completing hr education. Geet family came back to.thir native place as they re fond.of.that place

Geet and.pinkys samosa story is nice

Who is the stranger sitting on the park the wjole day and wIting for some one. Is ot maan