Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: SheenGcian

Amazing Update... both are stuck in storm..

Is that a chance to come close 😳

No past will haunt for time being.. love the way you described all the happenings.. my breath got stuck throughout the journey till stadium 😲

Last scene.. geet telling him about her parents and he is consoling her.. beautiful it is

Originally posted by: paponecon

oh horrible situation...hope that all will b ok...hope that this situation will bring them closer...after hearing last line...somehow a confession...omg...wtng for nxt...

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

Finally all caught up.

There are a myrqid of emotions i have gone through reading this story. There's a tinge of nostalgia and sadness throughout though even when they were happy.

It is because maybe this story is a continuation of one of the most beautiful young love stories, and maybe to know that the innocence and love he felt so purely right back then had to change due to circumstances to make him the man he is, it just saddens me.

Life is so weird no.

But then i think, would they have been better had she succumbed to the affection she had for him and gone into a relationship then not wanting to lose him? I am not an advocate of people going into a relationship with their decisions not being theirs.

I think the tap dance and how he pushed her after it had made me really sad.

Anyway let us place my despondent mind aside for now.

The recent chapters have taken the story to a rather interesting place.

It's in situations like these, people surprise each other. It's only tragedies and disasters that would tug in an emotional side of you that you don't even realize exists inside you.

Thanks for writing this story Mari.

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 52

Life is so unpredictable

A moment changes it

Years ago they had a chance to live the life they wanted

Geet unsure of herself

Did not concede

Now again a moment

Where they may not survive

To cherish it

Moments

That enlighten you

About

Kya khoya Kya paaya

That shows you its important

In the storm

When they are steps away from the end

With uncertainty

Are closer than before

Rememberance

And just one thought

A single assurance

I am with you Geet

Says all

Nothing needed

Brilliant writing

Thanks for the update

Sometimes our existence needs shacking

To come out of our hideous

Originally posted by: custodian75

Geet sees the man Maan has become so mature and responsible. Seeing things not in his control anymore has frustrated him. He feels responsible for his colleagues.

Geet has always admired Maan and now seeing his concern for his team has tugged her heart strings. I think situations like these make you vulnerable and having the person whom you like is soothing

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-52

I don't know is it your narrative style or me being too emotional, i felt every emotion through out the update.

Surprising was to see geet being sticked to maan no matter how grave the situation & in the end end up opening to him about her pain of loosing her parents. Something i wasn't expecting.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for updating!

Part 52

dynamic update! wonderfully written! the storm though expected was not expected so soon! admire that Maan wants to keep them all safe!

it was thoughtful of Geet to stay with him while the others left! liked her reply when he questioned her!

Geet will always be there for Maan!

will the storm bring them closer?

Loved how Maan consoled Geet when she spoke about her parents!

lovely moments

continue soon

Originally posted by: fict

Interesting update. Equation between Maan and Geet was already changing and with this storm episode, looks like Geet has crossed another block. Her inability to leave Maan behind is an indication of things changing. She being able to confide in him about her pain of loss and Maan offering her assurance of his support was another positive in their relationship. waiting for next.

Originally posted by: its_me

First of all... thank you so much for updating...

Now coming to the update...

Definitely short (or so I felt 😉) in comparison to what we are used to getting from you ... But surely awesomely written as always...

And...

I am so loving ... This Storm... In fact the entire situation they are in...

This is what they exactly needed... These kind of circumstances were actually crucial to bring them both closer... A situation where they both have to stick to each other and not even think of going separate ways...

It's one of the turning points of the story according to me...

The way geet stayed by Maan's side... Her opening up with him... Sharing her most personal feelings... It's definitely a big step...

But what I loved the most was... The last line... where Maan said that ... I am there for you...

Oh... just loved it...

Eagerly waiting for the next part