Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 71

Originally posted by: purrple_orchids

Lovely update!

Thanks for the pm

Hoping for a sooner next update😊

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Storm is causing quite a uproar, though we've just recently been hit with pest from the west and beast from the east (storm Emma) which resulted in a few incidents and casualties (I assume the elderly where hit the worst like any other winter) but the snow this year was something else, waist deep snow; we where literally snowed in. Last time we had it this bad was in 2010, but without the strong winds or the coldness so it wasn't as bad. However it was nothing like your story lol

This sounds typical but I'm scared of thunder claps like Geet and all Indian show actresses lol but it jumps me up big time. Geet thinking of family and Maan being in that list, atitally shows his position or value in her life, though right now she hasn't give it a thought but going by your last reply I'm assuming she will.

The word briefcase reminds me of my dad lol, he has this beige briefcase which he used and still has. That's the only man (or person) I personally know that has one lol, though my brother carries his own but it's more business/laptop bag ideally a briefcase lol but no one calls it that. So daddy comes to mind with the mention of geets briefcase. You might be thinking this girl has officially lost it lol

Maans care and responsibility towards his staff is to another level. I liked that, though it is the stupidest decision ever what good would arguing over the phone do; but Geet managed everything. I defo liked geets authority over Maan and him silently following her orders though reluctantly but still. For that reason only (and many more) I say that Geets the brain and maans the Beauty lol

The journey to the stadium and the whole buildup of the chapter reminded me of movies like 'the day the world stood still' 'world war z' and 'I am legend' like it's a national crisis type situation but very well written and the emotion and outplay was intense. Geets being the support and then breaking down all made sense and added dimension. Needless to say I liked Maan being there and being her pillar.

Gosh this whole update reminded me if a childhood dream of wanting my town to flood, especially my street lol so I can jump out of bedroom window and into the water to play with my friends. Obviously back then I didn't realise the implications of the work involved, all I knew was that out town was never going to be affected by floods since we lived at the highest point in the country which seemed unfair but now I'm grateful lol. I also didn't realise that with flooding water would seep into the house. How gullible was I?

Thank you for a great chapter and can't wait to read what the storm does for maaneet
Can't really say anything for Maan in this chapter other than he us a bit of fool and a hero embroiled into one but my Geet is a shining star


ThAnks Marium

Originally posted by: saf24

Soo sorry for the late response. This was such an awesome update. I like the responsibility that Maan feels towards getting his staff safely away from the danger. I also liked that Geet was the only one that could get through to him and the fact that she waited to leave with him. The ending part of the chapter with Geet opening up to him about the loss she felt was beautifully written. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: sgmiss2003

Loved the update. It made me so emotional.Geet talking to Raya as she was worried. Maan has come long way. Being so responsible. Good to see Geet staying with him rather than going with the staff. Geet remembering her parents was really emotional. I really liked that she shared it with Maan. They were there for each other in this hard time. Being the real selves. Thanks for this amazing chapter. Well written.

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Hope this storm brings them closer, and realize their feelings.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

I couldn't leave without you." iam shocked to see her admitting this to him. Her admitting this to herself also surprises me.. However i am happy to see this happening😃

Ufff the last line just did something to me.. Eagerly waiting for her reaction😊

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 52 - So storm came two days early and made everyone run for their life. the hotel were supporting enough to send them away to safe place for few days. Same way maan was worried for his colleagues who were his responsibility. He has to make sure that everyone was safe and all together.

Geet didn't stop herself showing her emotions in front of maan. She was genuinely worried for him. She waited for him to come with her in the last bus when others already left. Her worried looks for him made him little calm and go with her.

We vent out our emotions once the tension alleviates from us. She could see how miserable everyone's situation and her strong faade faded away. Liked how maan supported her even though he was tensed and helpless.

Last line was so assuring that gives hope that soon both will be together.

Originally posted by: dqno1

First of all I want to applaud you for the scene creation 👏

It was superb; like watching a film in front of my eyes.

The panic, the rush, the urgency captured so very well that it felt real.

Amazing work considering that all we have are words and the nature of them to create that panic, that response in the reader.

Now coming to the resident fence dweller 😆

How the mighty ran off the fence and pulled him to safety, pushed him to the right direction when all he kept thinking about was others.

Oh and that line; A world without him in it was not one she wanted either.. haiye at last my jhalli is alive.

Her eyes are well and truly opened.

The crisis has shattered both their hard stances on keeping it status quo.

He can't see her hurt or hurting for what is lost either; he never could.

He won't open for his sake but to see her in pain, he puts himself out there to be hurt again.

I am here for you.

So hard to say when you have been shattered but so easy when you can't stop loving someone.

He has always tried to give her what she wanted; that distance, that professionalism, that space.

And now she wants comfort, care and he is there,

I feel fulfilled by this chapter.

Romance at its peak as far as I can feel.

Truly I have no words for this guy.

Love it so much.

Thank you for updating.

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

And I am back with another song, this one is close to my heart and likely so, the walls are falling lol and quite figuratively too with my dang heart slightly warming for Maan in tinsy winsy

And I am back with another song, this one is close to my heart and likely so, the walls are falling lol and quite figuratively too with my dang heart slightly warming for Maan in tinsy winsy bits lol

Born as a boy I'm taught to not feel,

so I only found a way to suppress it all

My walls are tall

[Chorus]

But the wind has changed

My walls are weakening

They're gonna fall soon

And I'm gonna need you

It's been night for days

And I don't feel the same

They're gonna fall soon

And I'm gonna need you

Ruben walls

I think his charade, his act, his indifference towards Geet is falling and so are the walls he built between him and Geet especially after the last few updates. The two dates clearly show how he has changed and maybe even against his will. He couldn't even stand to be around Geet at first and now they are so comfortable around one another. I can't wait for them to be in love, in real love where both accept one another wholeheartedly and make each other know of it. I do hope when Geet opens her heart, Maan is there to listen and for some reason I reckon this would happen soon with them being locked in the stadium due to the adverse weather. However a bigger hope would be for Maan to share his grief with Geet, that's when he will truly open and need her. In actual sense, they would only then be able to proceed in this relationship. I can't wait for you to update.

Thank you for this awesome story and do update when you can Marium (before I turn mad visualising this Maan and Geet in every song I hear lol)

OK back to relaxing before mum catches me and forces a punishment, cant leave without my phone just for the sack of GF lol, she won't get this but I couldn't help but post it here as usual; music and maaneet make a great combo lol

Hope to see you soon