Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 72

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

I know that last song didn't fit the situation, and I heard this after years. So couldn't hold back from posting this even when i'm meant to be relaxing my hand.

It's been so very long
But you're still here with me
And though I'm so alone
I'm thankful everyday
You're trying all the time
I know how bad it hurts
But we are on the line
That cannot let us burn

And if someone out there is a cure for this shit
I'd give my all to get to it

Every night I lay me down
Fold my hands and close my eyes
Every night I pray for time
One more moment, one more try
I, I, I want you to come back
Oh lay down here in my arms
I'd light up every dark on your way
Baby all of your pain you can lay it on me
Yeah
You can lay it on me
Yeah

And if I could let go of the hope, then maybe
I could settle for just being with you baby

Inna/Boiler Lay it on me

I mixed up the lyrics to match the story slightly lol. Maan though, is who I relate to as always lol. Though I hate, I still don't like him (ignoring your comment of the more I deny the more I'm making myself believe lol, personally I already know I don't like him even if the world i.e. you is set out to oppose lol). But he's been through a bad heartbreak, I agree to Geet's decision; she did what was right for her and no one can drag her down for it, not even Maan. But deep down he still wants her and from the looks of it, so does she now. But I love that he still wants her to share her pain with him and maybe one day he'll have the courage to ask why? Hopefully stand to understand her situation too. But I have faith in him. He is the type of guy that would wait for his beloved no matter what (even if he did waver a little in the middle lol), till the end of time. BTW I love this song.

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

And I'm back with a song, ok this isn't perfect for the current timing of the FF but here goes nothing:

As long as you love me
We could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
As long as you love me
I'll be your platinum, I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me, love me

I'll be your soldier, fighting every second of the day for your dreams girl
I'll be your Hova, you can be my Destiny's Child on a scene girl
So don't stress, don't cry, we don't need no wings to fly
Just take my hand

As you love me we could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
As long as you love me
I'll be your platinum, I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
As long as you love, love me, love me
As long as you love, love me

For all the show and prop, I still think it's Maan's song; he loves her quite deeply. However annoyed i am at him but can never loose faith in his love. He loves Geet too dearly, according to me. Certain actions and spoken words from his side told me so.

Now if I've read it wrong, then ofcourse you know who'll I'll blame, MAAN lol

Do write soon Marium, waiting since ages

Originally posted by: mayyo

Thank you so much Avi! Your words always have the power to make me feel like I am churning out a good story after all, when in fact I believe otherwise. You are too kind with your words.

And how do you do that? Figure out and sieve the good in Maan. Isn't that partiality?😆

Seriously though, your comments are awaited every time. Thanks for being here! 🤗

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Hi, came across this FF a few weeks ago and catching up on the prequel and sequel right now.

Very well written and gripping story do far. Your writing style is very realistic and can feel the pain and aching suppressed love of two friends who can stay away from each other yet won't admit of long term relationship (at leadt for Geet).

I feel Geet is as confused as a lot of girls who are brought up with Indian values of not having a boyfriend or love marriage and she does not have the courage to accept what her heart wants.

There is a big transformation between the old Geet vs the current more confident Geet yet she is not brave enough to accept what she wants. Just like how she was pushed to join Khurana Construction, she needs a push to accept that she loves Maan too. Who will give her that push? Does Maan now realize that's how she is wired and approach her accordingly? He is not a young, fragile boy anymore... he is a shrewd businessman and can make things go his way, if he wanted... as he said before people can be manipulated into anything and there is no such thing as fate.

In the last 2 chapters I can already see Geet's heartbeat raising with and around Maan... will she let that feeling grow on her further?

Once again, Lovely FF and please write it at the pace you have in mind just don't stop writing and continue soon!

Could you please add me to your pm list?

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

After finishing reading both the FFs, missing it more...

The last 2 parts were so well written with the catastrophic event and the hussle around it... it felt like I was watching a movie or news where people are fledging and a natural disaster is about to strike.

How will Maan and Geet get to know each other better during this 2 days refuge... i hope they get closer emotionally and Geet realises and accepts what she has in her heart. She definitely has a special place that's beyond love for Maan... I hope Maan makes her see that too. I wonder what is going through Maan's mind sometimes. I know you are writing this from Geet's pov, which is good but just want to know if he still loves her and waits for her acceptance or if he truly does not care about that part anymore... well what am I asking... I already know my answer. He of course loves her and will move mountains to be with her. I hope to see that happening now... c'mon hero time to shine further show your irresistible charm!

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Just read this all over again and can tell Maan still loves her ... but this time he is not going to admit and wait for her confession, even if it is forever.

Am I right?

Continue soon please

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

I don't know how soon Geet will fall in love with Maan but this story is completely taking over my mind... as i'm falling deeper into it. Right now enjoying reading your responses to the readers! Aur kyaa karen? Samay bitaane ke liye, gaalib ne yahi karne ko kaha hai

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Will they confess their feelings first or get physically comfortable first?

Remember the movie friends with benefits? They can have that going for sometime until Geet realizes what she feels?


They can be sharing a blanket in the stadium.

Once they reach her apt, Maan might finally say yes to her coffee offer and decide to sleep in her apt.

She might hurt her arm and Maan will become her PA helping her with all her chores and office work?


So many ideas... wish you are weaving some of your own too!

Originally posted by: TaranaGeet

Their closeness yet distances are pinching me so much. I hope Maan gets to read her diary someday... he will know it was only him in her mind all the time no matter what she says.

Also, we know what Maan went through after the fateful night... but what did Geet go through right after? Did she regret? Did she speak her heart when she said she did not love him? Or did she know she loved him but knew they don't have a future? Why hasn't she married yet? Did her parents not try for her to settle down?

Love the Maaneet moments always as that brings so much tension and anticipation. Why do people have to disturb everytime they are together? I can only imagine what Maan might be thinking when Geet was enjoying the waterfall and him watching her... if it was peace for her was it peace for him too? To see the one he loves in peace? He still loves her, right? Will he never give up on her or has he changed and moved on?