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APARNA

@ARJUNKIAPS

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#241

Amazing update.I read IOYSM and wired hearts in one go!!!I must say there is something super special in this story .I am totally hooked to its storyline!!!Maan is such an enigma here!!I had a good time reading wired hearts.thank u so much for the update

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SeAngel76

@SeAngel76

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#242

I realized something this evening, that I never posted my review. So awful of me! Anyways, here it goes.

So the interaction between Maan and Geet has shifted drastically! That is what I noticed most. They both seem hyper aware of each other. Geet has become more confident but also very sensitive about Maan's behaviour towards her. Maan seems to be everywhere and seems ever ready with a smirk, quip or jab. Of course, avoidance is not on the menu anymore.

So how do these two deal with their changing dynamic? Geet serves out the sarcasm with the side dishes of humor and crackling wit! On the other hand, Maan flashes his over-confidence and egotistic nature as a badge of honor! Enjoy this interaction immensely, because writing something this funny, hilarious and biting is very difficult for me, so hats off to you!

Then the little weird sentences that Maan would throw at Geet got me thinking that he is playing at something. I was not really sure as to what, but when Geet put it all together, it became clear! He was playing her but for what reasons? That I think is going to be amazing to read. I don't want to make any assumptions because this story has progressed and advanced leaps and bounds that always has unexpected results.

Every chapter has so many events, feelings, occurrences and twists. That's what is so great of your story that one is never disappointed. So I await your update whenever you are ready! I am still in awe and admiration of this challenging, taunting and mouthy Geet!

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#243

maan play

her come back

good part

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spicefactory

@spicefactory

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#244

'Aur is dil mein Kya rakha hain,
Tera hi Dard chupa rakha hain'

This was the song playing in my head, while reading the update... only I couldn't decide whom it was more apt for...

Beautiful update as always :)

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#245

Part 48 - What an update. He was really smart ass, a pro in his area and very well know what to do, how to do and when to do. He manipulated her to take the job. His all double-edged opinions were directed to her which she was unaware about it.

First he was expected her to come and ask about the finances about the project. And she was passed. It was like he making her learn how to handle a business with such tactics. He was teaching her how to manage things with employees or any other related matters.

Geet nowadays checking him a lot.

I liked his face she first taunted him that he was learning to make better himself. Lol.

He was burned when he saw that she asked vyan's help instead of him for interviewing the candidates.

Vyan was more smart to know what was going on in maan's mind. He pointed out that top-to-ceiling glass wall and he was looking at them only. It made geet to think about his intention to keep an eyes on her. Oh... He came to cafeteria to look what they were doing. Seems he was big jealous.

During Whole dinner he was drooling over her. Seems aag dono taraf lag rahi hai. Soon their love story will start, with lots of teasing, witty replies, taunts.

Fierce lioness that geet was. She realized he was playing with her emotions and used her for his advantage. She came back with hurtful-emotional-come back for him which hurt him immensely. Hope he will not take that as a challenge, knowing him that he won't accept any defeat and he very well know how to use other person emotionally.

Last line was bang. "We are even.

Now what next..?

Waiting eagerly for next part. Please update as soon as possible.

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#246

superb update

i fell hurt when geet hurt maan but this time maan dersve this he play with her

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#247

wow an update after a long time...

she called vyan n definitely maan did not like this...

y he paased that comment of stealing away of her...a man like him who never says anything before thinking...

bt y he told that thy r even...whats the meaning...maan didnot get his lov seven years ago...y its related to geet now...y th situation is even...

y geet brought th topic n i rreally eagerly waiting for nxt...as geet is now totally in lv wth him as she how checks out every time

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#248

Hope you are doing better
Thanks a lot for the update

I don't know... something is a miss don't know wat ... like it is incomplete.. I don't know what...
Said that I love the flow... I love how this part is only from Geets POV

Still keeps us wondering what Maan is thinking
Like it kept us wondering what geet was thinking then

Why did he manipulate her ... if he did it ... probably answer may follow ... or it is right there & I don't get it umm

Waiting for more

Thanks again

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#249

Light bulb...

Is it... his manipulation = to her mean words spoken now

Definitely her act in past was never part of the equation

But again if he thinks it was then they are no where close to even now