ABHIMAAN YAA SWABHIMAAN?? EPILOGUE Pg. 96****08/11/18 - Page 21

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maan was shocked wen Gayatri asked to donate his sperm to hr and got collapsed maan doubt hr as geet
geet make all tense by hr illness
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so glad it was maan geet/ gayatri chose to have the baby with...what destiny right...maan gets another chance to right his wrong hopefully...but will he be allowed to???
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Nice part...
Gayatri is suffering she wants a test tube baby...
Maan was schoked
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I'll be posting triple updates. Thereby giving you all glimpse of Maan and Geet's past as well as Gayatri's family history. Also Meera and Vicky agree to get married to one another.
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CHAPTER 10 (a)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Khuranas and Kapoors came out of Dr. Sudha Raghupathi's cabin depressed, dejected and in a state of shock. Initially Maan was thinking that Gayatri has fallen for him and telling him cock and bull story about "test tube baby" so that Maan will marry her. But now seeing all three women's pale and glum faces due to shock, concern and worry, Maan realised that Gayatri was telling the truth. As doctor had shooed him out of her room while explaining Gayatri's condition he now needs to find from his mother, Garima what is the exact problem with Gayatri? Rest of the day passed in stress and worry for Kapoors. Khuranas were also concern about Gayatri's health but they were also in delima about how to talk to Kapoors regarding Meera and Vicky's wedding alliance at this stressful time? Getting grip on themselves Savitri Devi called Ram, Priya, Meera and Avinash or Avi (who had landed few hours back in India) for dinner next day at Khurana Mansion. Initially Kapoors refused but with Savitri Devi's persuasion and practical talk they finally agreed.

Avinash was shocked to see change in Gayatri as she was looking very pale and listless. He even once tried to joke with her saying, "What happen to my babydoll? When you left US you looked like a doll and now you like a buddhi (old woman)!"

"BUDDHI? Avi tumne hummei buddhi kahaa! Abb dekho hum kya karte hain!" Gayatri said running behind Avi holding a cushion in her hand to beat him. Ram, Priya, Meera, Ramu and Dulari started smiling seeing this Tom and Jerry chase after very long.

Kapoors also asked Gayatri to accompany them to meet Khuranas but she refused saying she is feeling weak. Hence, Kapoors did not pressurize Gayatri to come to KM. But before leaving, Ram told Ramu and Dulari to stay near Gayatri and immediately call them if Gayatri's condition deteriorates.

Location: KHURANA MANSION (KM)


Kapoors reached KM. Ram and Priya were awe struck with the class and granduer of KM.



Rishabh and Garima came to the main door to welcome Kapoors impressing them further. Soon both Kapoor and Khurana elders gelled with each other and were talking like long lost friends as both families were Punjabi; and Ram and Rishabh had attended same University in Delhi. Although Rishabh was 5yrs. Ram's senior. Khuranas made sure that Kapoors are not stressed thinking about Gayatri's ill health and tried to make atmosphere light with jokes thrown in by Vicky and Avi thereby finishing dinner . Maan was not at home as he was busy giving final touches to a new project deal to be soon signed. Elders were at home with each other but four younsters were looking at each other with different expressions. Vicky was looking at Meera with mischievious and seductive look; Meera was throwing daggers of hatred at Vicky; Avi was smitten by Annie; and Annie was blushing under Avi's loving glances.

Once everyone was sitting in informal living room with their respective teas and coffees, Rishabh broached the topic after getting approving nod from his mother and wife. "Ram aur Priya bhabhi hum sab chahte hain ki hum Meera ko iss ghar ki bahu bannayen." (Ram and Priya bhabhi, we would like to make Meera the daughter-in-law of Khuranas.)

"BAHU?" "MATLAB?" (DAUGHTER-IN-LAW? MEANING?) Ram and Priya gasped.

"Hum chahte hain ki Meera ki shaadi Vicky se ho jaaye." (We would like that Meera and Vicky are tied together in holy matrimony.) Savitri Devi elaborated.

"SHAADI? VICKY SE? KABHI NAHI!" (Marriage? With Vicky? Never!) Meera was the first one to come out from shock and stood up in anger.



"KYUN NAHI? Mere mein kya burai hai? Tumhei kya lagta hai ki tum jaise nakh chadhi (snobbish) patalchidhi (skinny) se koi Rajkumar shaadi karega?" (Why not? What's wrong with me? What do you think that a prince with marry a snob and anorexic girl like you?) Vicky questioned in anger.



"WHY? YOU..."

Before fight could accelerate Savitri Devi said, "Humare khayal se aap sab ghar jaa kar aa paas mein baat karke hummei battaiyega." (I sugest you all talk about this matter in privacy of your home.)

"Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor while you are thinking about Meera and Vicky's wedding alliance, I would also like to know the truth about Gayatri as well as tell you all a truth about Geet." Maan said who had just walked in from work.



"Tumhara matlab kya hai beta?" (What do you mean Maan?)

"Mr. Kapoor..."

"Mujhe "uncle" bolo beta." (Please call me "uncle", Maan.)

"Uncle mera yeh jaan naa bahut zaruri hai ki "Kya Gayatri hi meri Geet hai kya"?" (Uncle its very important for me to know, "If Gayatri is my Geet?")

"Tumhari Geet" matlab?" ("Your Geet" what do you mean?)

"Please Uncle tell me the truth." Maan said firmly.

"Gayatri ek Rajsi parivar se hai. Uske maa-baap, dada-dadi, nana-nani, bhai- behan koi bhi raj parivaar se nahi hai magar uski padh nani raj parivar se theen. Chahe Rudra aur Parvati bhabhi ne kabhi bhi Gayatri ko Rajkumari yaa rajparivaar ke taur-tareekon se nahi palaa thaa magar Rudra aur Parvati jaante the ki agar Vijaygarh mein koi waaris naa bacha toh naa chahte huye bhi Gayatri ko Vijaygarh ka rajya sambhalna hoga warna wahaan ke Sahukaar uss rajya ko harap lenge. Gayatri ki padh nani ke rajparivar mein abb sirf ek hi waaris bacha hai. Iss liye agar Vijaygarh ke waaris ka dehaant ho gaya toh Gayatri ko Vijaygarh ki Rajkumari bann na padhega."(Gayatri belongs to a royal family. But her mother-father, grandparents and siblings i.e. no one belonged to royal family only her great-great grandmother from her mother's side came from a royal family. Although Rudra and Parvati never brought up Gayatri in royal protocol of a princess but it was a unspoken truth that if ever there is no heir remaining in Gayatri's great-great grandmother's royal family, Gayatri will have to handle the royal duties of the Kingdom of Vijaygarh. Now that the last heir to the Kingdom of Vijaygarh is ruling the Kingdom and on his death, Gayatri will be forced to accept the title of "Princess". If she doesn't do so then a handful of greedy money lenders will ursurp the Kingdom of Vijaygarh.) Ram paused to catch a breath.

"Iss liye Rudra bhaisaheb, Parvati bhabhi, inhone aur maine Diwaanji ki salaah par, jab Gayatri solah saal ki thee uska naam aur roop badal diya. Usko "Geet Handa" ka naya naam de kar usse Delhi padhne bheja. Gayatri ke khubsoorat aankhon par mota chashma pehnaya; Gayatri ke lambe baalon ko moti choti mein baandha aur usse cotton ke saade salwaar kurte pehnaaye jisse uski khubsoorati dhakki rahe aur woh surakshit bhi rahe." (That's why on Diwanji's suggestion, Rudra, Parvati, Ram and I changed Gayatri's name and her physical look when Gayatri was 16yrs. old. We gave her a new name of "Geet Handa" and sent her to Delhi to study. We covered Gayatri's beautiful eyes with thick glasses; tied her hair in a thick braid and made her wear simple, modest and shapeless cotton salwaar kurtas in order to hide her beauty and keep her well protected.) Priya continued.

"Magar iss sabke bawajood bhi hum uski suraksha nahi kar paaye. Saath saal pehle, jab Rudra aur Parvati ka ek sadak durghatna mein dehaant ho gaya thaa aur Gayatri depression mein thee, tab kissi ne uske bholepan ka fayada uttha kar usse garbhvati banna diya. Priya aur mujhe jab Rudra aur Parvati bhabhi ki mauth ke baare mein ek saal baad patta chala magar tab tak bahut der ho chuki thee aur Gayatri ki izzat nilaam ho chukki thee!" (But despite of making all these changes we were unable to protect her. Seven years back, when Rudra and Parvati met with a road accident, Gayatri went into depression and in those lonely and weak times, someone took advantage of her innocent, naive, gullable and vulnerable nature and made her pregnant. Priya and I came to know about Rudra and Parvati's death a year later but by then it was too late as Gaytri had lost her honor and dignity!) Ram concluded about Gayatri's past but broke down in tears. Priya, Meera and Avi tried calming Ram. Savitri Devi ordered some dessert and fresh tea and coffee. Once Kapoors' had calmed down, Ram remembered and asked Maan, "Beta, tum Gayatri yaa Geet ko kaise jaante ho?" (Maan how do you know about Gayatri or Geet?)

"Uncle aur Aunty, aaj jo mai aap sabko bataanewala hoon uss se aap sabko bahut dhakka lagega. Ho sakta hai inko batton ko sunkar shyaad aap mujhe police mein dena chahen; yaa meri aur Khurana parivaar ki shaqal tak naa dekhna chahen; aur apni beti ki shaadi iss ghar mein karaane ka soche bhi naa. Aur kuch baatein aisi bhi hain jisse sunkar mere parivaar ko bhi dhakka lagega. Magar mai phir bhi aap sabko poora sach batlana chahta hoon!" (Uncle and Aunty, what I'm going to tell you today will shock you. After listening to my words you may want to hand me over to police, or would never like to see Khurana family or my face; and definitely not get your precious daughter married in Khurana family but still I will tell you the full truth.) Shocking Kapoors and Khuranas equally.

"Maan beta, tum ek baar phir se soch lo. Yeh tumhare chote bhai aur Khurana khandaan ki izzat ka sawaal hai." (Maan please reconsider your decision as its a question of Khurana family's respect and your younger brother's marriage alliance.) Savitri Devi cautioned.

"NAHI DADIMAA! Yeh Maan Singh Khurana jo humesha sach bolta thaa usne ek baar apni zindagi mein jhoot bola hai. Aur uss jhoot ke kaaran naa to sirf meri aur mere parivaar ki zindagi tehaas-nehaas hui hai magar mera pyaar, meri patni aur mere ajaname bacche ki bhi zindagi tehaas-nehaas hui hai. Meri uss galti nahi gunaah ne mujhe sikhaya hai ki kissi bhi rishte ki neev sach par honi chahiye naa ki jhoot aur fareb par. Kyunki jaise ek mazboot building bina mazboot neev ke khadi nahi reh sakti waise hi agar rishte ki neev hi khokli hogi to uss rishta ka wajood bhi khokla hoga." (NO DADIMAA! Maan Singh Khurana has always spoken the truth but just once I lied in my life. Due to my that lie, not only my and my family's life has been ruined but also my love, my wife and my unborn child's life was ruined. My that mistake no my that crime has taught me that foundation of any relationship should be based on truth and not on lies and charade. Just like while constructing a strong building, it foundation has to be very strong similarly while starting a new relation its foundation should also be strong not weak and hollow due to lies. Because a relationship whose foundation is based on lies, its existence is also very weak.)

"Maa, Maan sach keh raha hai. Ram aur Priya bhabhi ko poora haq hai Khurana khandaan ke har sadasya ka sach jaan ne kaa apni ladki ki shaadi karne se pehle." (Maa, Maan is absolutely right. Ram and Priya have full right to know about good and bad of each and every Khurana family member before they decide to marry their daughter into Khuranas.) Rishabh also supported Maan.

Maan along with Vicky's help narrated the whole story i.e. Maan and Geet's meeting, Geet's falling in love with Maan and then Maan's bet with Dev. Hearing Maan's narration, Kapoors were first deeply shocked, then disgusted, then furious and finally humiliated by Maan's this callous, selfish and ruthless behaviour. Ram and Priya could have never imagined in their wildest dreams that son of such cultured and affluent family could behave in such an inhumane manner with a girl. Before Maan could continue, he recieved a tight slap on his face shocking both Khuranas and Kapoors.

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Wow awesome update yaar

Well I can fully understand what doctor said becoz some way or other i am also facing similar situations

Well lovely story and update
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Wow awesome update yaar

Chalo maan confessed and accepted his faults but who slapped him meera or geet
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CHAPTER 10 (b)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Maan recieved a tight slap on his face shocking both Khuranas and Kapoors.



"Maan Singh Khurana tumne meri beti ko ek vai...(unable to even say the word) banna ke chodh diya hai. Tumne kabhi socha hai ki agar mera beta, Avinash tumhari bholi-bhaali behan ke saath yeh sab kare jo tumne Gayatri ke saath kiya hai toh tumhe kaisa lagega?" (Maan Singh Khurana, you have made my daughter a pros...(unable to even say the word). Have you ever thought if the samething my son, Avinash does to your innocent sister, that you have done with Gayatri, how will you feel?)

"UNCLEEE!" Maan thundered.

"Uncle nahi "Mr. Kapoor" kaho. Tum mujhe "uncle" kehne ka haq kho chuke ho." (Not uncle, say "Mr. Kapoor". You have lost the right to call me uncle.) Looking at his family, Ram said, "Priya, Meera aur Avi, abhi ke abhi yahaan se chalo. Iss aalishaan bangle mein mera dam ghutta hai." (Priya, Meera and Avi, let's leave right now. I can't even breathe in this affluent mansion.)



Before Ram could step out, Maan said, "Mr. Kapoor, aap bina poora sach jaane jaa rahe hain." (Mr. Kapoor, won't you like to know the full truth?)



"Aur kya hai battane ko iss sharmnaak harqat ke baad?" (What else is there to know more after your disgusting behaviour?)

"Mr. Kapoor, Geet mere saat ek raat bitaane ke liye sirf tab tyaar hui thee, ki jab mai uske saath sab reeti aur riwaazon ke saath shaadi karne ke liye maana. Iss liye hum dono ne mandir mein jaa kar sab reeti aur riwaazon ke saath shaadi ki. Geet aur maine saat phere liye, maine Geet ko mangalsutra pehnaya aur uski maang bhi bhari." (Mr. Kapoor, Geet only agreed to spend a night with me if I married her with all Hindu rites and rituals. Hence, we went to a temple and got married according to all Hindu rites and rituals i.e. Geet and I went around the fire 7 times, I tied a mangalsutra around Geet's neck and then filling her parting with vermilion (sindoor).) Maan said showing Geet and his one and only wedding photograph as a proof.



"KYA?? Iska matlab pichale chhe saal se Gayatri shaadi shuda hain aur hummei patta bhi nahi hai?" (WHAT?? Gayatri was married for past 6yrs. and we didn't even know?)

"Aapko kabhi shaq nahi hua uske gale mein mangalsutra dekh kar?" (Didn't you suspect seeing Geet's mangalsutra?) Savitri Devi enquired.

"Mujhe shaq toh hua thaa. Aur jab bhi mai uss mangalsutra ke baare mein poochti Gayatri humesh kehti ki Rudra bhaisaheb aur Parvati didi ne usse buri nazar se bacchane ke liye pehnaya hai." (I was suspicious but whenever I asked about it Gayatri always said that it was put in her to ward off evils by her parents.) Priya answered.



"Agar tumne Geet se sachi shaadi ki thee toh usse choda kyun?" (If you got married to Geet with all Hindu rites and rituals, then why did you abandon her?) Ram demanded.

"Maine Geet ko nahi choda Mr. Kapoor, woh hi achanak ek din gayab ho gayi." (I didn't abandon her Mr. Kapoor, she only one fine day disappeared.)

Maan further narrated his meeting Gayatri six years later and her looking like identical to Geet but that was where similarity ended. Gayatri did not recognise Maan but told him that she is Gayatri, Geet's cousin. Gayatri also informed Maan about Geet's demise in child birth along with the demise of the baby!

Rishabh continued where Maan left, "I WANTED TO SEND MAAN TO JAIL FOR RAPING A GIRL! But Garima said according to the law it can't be considered as rape as it was on mutual consent. Besides this it was also too late to convict Maan now as who will testify on victim's behalf? As neither was Geet (that's what we thought at that time) nor her baby is alive. There was also no proof or witness of Maan and Geet's marriage. Court proceedings are only based on proofs and witnesses hence we couldn't do much."

"Anyway, now that Geet is alive she can testify against Maan." Garima suggested. "I'll call you once papers are ready." Garima was going to get her office bag when Ram said,"Theriye Bhabhi!" (Wait Bhabhi!)

Making Khuranas surprised. "Abhi bhi hum Maan ko sazaa nahi de sakte kyunki Maan ke crime ka koi witness nahi hai." (We still cannot prosecute Maan as still there is no witness.)

"Yeh aap kaise keh sakte hain bhaisaheb? Geet toh..." (How can you say that? Geet is...)

"Geet yaa Gayatri apni poori yaadasht kho chukki hai." (Geet or Gayatri has lost her full memory.)

"Matlab?" (Meaning?)

"Rudra aur Parvati bhabhi ki death ke ek saal baad mujhe unki mauth ke baare mein patta chala jab Gayatri ki tabiyat bahut kharaab hone lagi toh Diwaanji ne mujhe ghabra kar phone karaa. Priya aur mai jald se jald Bharat aaye aur hummei Gayatri ki pregnancy ka patta chala. Bahut baar poochne par bhi usne apne bacche ke pitah ka naam nahi battaya. Sirf yeh kaha ki bacche ke pitah ne sirf uske saath apna mann behla kar Gayatri ko chodh diya. Din beete gaye aur Gayatri kamzor par kamzor hoti jaa rahi thee. Kuch kamzoori pregnancy ki wajeh se thee aur kuch kamzori apne pehle pyaar ko khone kaa dukh." (After a year of Rudra and Parvati bhabhi's death, when Gayatri's health started declining Diwaanji called me SOS. Priya and I came to India as soon as we possibly could and we found Gayatri pregnant. Despite of our continously asking who was her unborn baby's father she did not reveal his name. Gayatri only said that the her unborn baby's father used her for satisfying his lust and then left her. With each passing day Gayatri was getting weaker and weaker. Partly the weakness was due to her being pregnant and partly she was emotionally weak due to loosing of her first love!) Ram said glaring at Maan. "Jab hummein koi aur chaara nahi dekha to Priya aur maine Gayatri ko apne saath US le jaane ka socha. Hum log Gayatri ke US visa ke kaamon mein busy the ki ek din ek ladki jiska naam Naintara thaa Gayatri se milne aayi. Naintara ne kaha ki woh Gayatri ke college mein uski senior hai. Kyunki hummei US Embassy jaane mein der ho rahi thee humne zayaada pooch-taach nahi ki aur Gayatri bhi usse jaanti thee. Jab hum laut ke aaye toh humari poori duniya hi badal gayi." (When we found nothing working, Priya and I decided to take Gayatri with us to US. Priya and I were busy in applying for US visa of Gayatri, when a young girl named Naintara came to meet her. Naintara said that she was Gayatri's senior in college. As Gayatri knew Naintara as well as we were getting late for going to US Embassy, hence we didn't enquire much. When we returned our whole world had changed.) Ram stopped remembering the tragic past.



Just then Nakul came running,"Chote Maalik, chote maalik aapka phone." (Sir, Sir call for you.) Rishabh took the call and said, "Haan haan, kal dus baje theek hai." (Yes, yes tomorrow 10:00a.m. is fine.)

"Maan, kal Government officials aa rahe hain Noida aur Delhi ke beech jo naya highway bann raha hai uske blueprints dekhne." (Maan, tomorrow Government officials will be arriving to see the blueprints of new highway to be constructed from Noida to Delhi.) Thereby stopping further conversation. Ram also wanted leave so Rishabh was calling their driver to drop Kapoors when Vicky said,"Dad mai chodh aata hoon." (Dad I'll drop them.)

"Theek hai beta." (Alright son!)

"Mr. Khurana aapko taqleef karne ki zarurat nahi hai hum taxi se chale jaayenge." (Mr. Khurana, please don't inconvenience yourself we will book a taxi.) Ram said feeling very awkward taking help from his enemy's family.

But Rishabh insisted, "Ram yeh Delhi hai aur abb raat ke 12 baje hain. Tumhare saath duo ladies bhi hain. Khurana parivaar chahta thaa ki aap sab aaj raat yaheen rok jaayiye magar Ranawat Mansion mein Geet akeli hogi, iss liye hum aap sabko rok nahi rahe." (Ram this is Delhi and its midnight. There are two ladies also travelling with you. Khuranas would have liked that all of you stay with us in KM, but as Geet is alone in Ranawat Mansion, we will not insist.)

Soon Vicky along with Kapoors left. Initially what had turned out to be a relaxing evening full of fun and laughter ended with hostility and sadness. Throughout the drive back home, only Priya was talking to Vicky. Rest of the family were sitting quitely in anger. On reaching Ranawat Mansion, Ram, Meera and Avinash got out of the car without even wishing Vicky "Goodnight" only Priya wished him and asked him to send a SMS once he reaches back to KM.

AN HOUR LATER
Ram, Meera and Avinash had changed and were in bed. Priya went to see how Gayatri was and found her to be sleeping peacefully, thereby relaxing Priya. Then Priya went to her room freshened up and changed into her night dress and came out of washroom to see Ram propped against pillows trying to read a book but he had not even turned one page since past 45minutes. Gathering her courage, Priya said, "Har kahani ke do pehlu hote hain aur har vykoti ka har situation dekhne ka nazariya alag." (There are two sides to every story! Similarly every individual has a different view point to each incident.)

"Tum kehna kya chahti ho?" (What do you want to say?)

"Hum sab Maan ko sazaa dene ke saath-saath poore Khurana khandaan ko bhi sazaa de rahe hain."(In order to punish Maan, we all are also punishing Khurana family.)

"Matlab?" (What do you mean?)

"Gunah toh Maan ne kiya hai, toh ismein Savitri Deviji, Rishabh bhaisaheb, Garima bhabhi, Vicky yaa Ankita ka kya dosh hai?" (Crime is done by Maan, then how are Savitri Devi, Rishabh bhaisaheb, Garima bhabhi, Vicky and Ankita at fault?)

"Tum kehna chahti ho ki mujhe Maan ko maaf kardena chahiye?" (You are saying that I should forgive Maan?)

"KABHI NAHI! Magar aap baaki parivaar ko kyun beqasoor hote huye bhi sazaa de rahe hain?" (NO! NEVER! But why are you punishing an innocent family for Maan's crime?)

"Geihun ke saath ghunn bhi pissti hai." (While grinding wheat even few innocent insects are ground.)

"Hum insaano ki baat kar rahe hain ghunn ki nahi." (We are talking about human beings not insects!)

Ram thought something and said,"Tum chahti ho ki mai Meera aur Vicky ki shaadi ke liye "haan" keh doon?"(You want me to give my approval for Meera and Vicky's marriage?)

"Haan. Kyunki Meera ko Vicky se accha ladka nahi milega." (Yes. Because I feel Vicky is the best life partner for Meera.)

"Tum yeh kaise keh sakti ho? Jiske bhai ne meri Geet ki izzat saare aam nilaam kardi toh woh Vicky pati ke roop mein kaisa hoga?" (How can you say that? The boy whose brother has ripped my Geet's honour and dignity to shreds, how will that boy Vicky be as a husband?)

"Aap bhool rahe hain ki Maan, Geet ka pati hai." (You are forgetting that Maan is Geet's husband.)

"KAISA PATI? KAISI SHAADI? Uss Maan Singh Khurana ne meri Geetu ke saath kayaron ki tehara shaadi ki sirf apni hawas poori karne ke liye."(HUSBAND? WHICH HUSBAND? WHAT MARRIAGE? That Maan Singh Khurana married my Geetu like a coward just to fulfill his lust.)

"Acch ek baat battaiye, agar aapko Maan ka sach nahi patta hota toh kya aap tab bhi iss shaadi ke khilaaf hote?"(Fine. Tell me one thing, if Maan had not told his truth to us, would you even then oppose Meera and Vicky's wedding?)

"Nahi. Mujhe bhi Vicky humari Meera ke liye sahi lagta hai. Magar woh Maan Singh..." (No! I like Vicky for our Meera. But that Maan Singh...)

"Aap teeno ko Maan par bahut gussa aa raha hai, yeh jaan kar ki Maan ne Gayatri ke saath kya kya kiya. Aur yeh gussa aana jaayiz bhi hai. Magar iss gusse ke kaaran aap sabne yeh nahi dekha ki Maan ne apna yeh ghinona sach hum sab ke saamne bina hichkichaiye batta diya. Woh chahta toh chuppa bhi sakta thaa yaa Meera aur Vicky ki shaadi hone ke baad battata. Tab hum kya karte siwaiye maayoos hone ke. Magar Maan ne bina darre apna sach sabke saamne rakh diya aur har tehara ki sazaa ke liye bhi tyaar hai. Maan ne sach battaya bina parwah kiye ki uske aisa karne se Khurana khandaan ki badnami hogi aur uske chote bhai ki shaadi bhi toot sakti hai." (You three are furious at Maan after knowing his truth. That anger is correct. But under the influence of that anger, none of you have noticed that Maan told his disgusting truth in front strangers without even sugarcoating it. If he wanted he could have hidden it or revealed it after Meera and Vicky's wedding. If he had done so, we could have not done anything but felt helpless on finding the truth. But Maan without any fear revealed his heinous crime and is willing to bear any punishment. He did not even once think that by his telling the truth his family's prestiage will be ruined or his younger brother's matrimonial alliance will be rejected.) Making Ram speechless hearing the truth.



Seeing her husband calming slightly, Priya continued, "Bacche agar galti...(Ram glared at Priya) mera matlab hai ki agar bacche gunah karte hain aur usse qabool bhi karte hain toh hum badhon ko unki sahita karni chahiye naa ki unse peeth modhni chahiye. Abb hum sab ko yeh dekhna chahiye ki Maan aur Geet ko wapis ek kaise karen." (Children often make mist...(Ram glared at Priya) I mean children may do crime but if they confess it we elders should support them after their confession not alienate them. We elders should now also think how to make Maan and Geet one again.)

Unknown to Ram and Priya their this conversation was heard by their children.


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Whole night no one slept peacefully in Khurana or Kapoor household. Kapoor family were trying very hard to forgive Maan but were unable to do so. Khuranas were feeling guilty that their future heir of Khuranas has humiliated their eldest daughter-in-law. Khuranas were also disappointed that they were not being able to finalise Vicky's marriage with Meera. After Maan's revealing his truth now chances were even more feeble of Vicky and Meera's wedding to take place. Maan was drowning in his own guilt, Ram's reaction to Maan's confession made him realise the true impact of his crime. Throughout the night Ram's phrase kept on echoing in Maan's head, "Tumne kabhi socha hai ki agar mera beta, Avinash tumhari bholi-bhaali behan ke saath yeh sab kare jo tumne Gayatri ke saath kiya hai toh tumhe kaisa lagega?" (Have you ever thought if the samething my son, Avinash does to your innocent sister, that you have done with Gayatri, how will you feel?)



Only person who was sure of what is to be done with her life with rising sun and arrival of a new day was Gayatri (Geet). Late last night, Gayatri had got up feeling thirsty. Seeing water jug empty, she went to fill her water jug when she heard Ram and Priya arguing. Gayatri had nearly fainted on hearing about Maan being married to Geet during the course of their arguement. Gayatri also came to know about Maan and Geet's love story from Meera; and also that Maan was still deeply in love with his wife, Geet. Hearing the whole truth about Maan and Geet's love story; and Maan's love for Geet, Gayatri became emotionally broken as in this short time span she had started loving Maan Singh Khurana or "Gayatri ke Maan"(Gayatri's Maan) as she liked to call him. After knowing the full truth, Gayatri came to her room and cried her heart out and when she fell asleep she doesn't remember.

Gayatri had been attracted to Maan since she saw him for the first time in her office at RNI. But the moment she heard him mention her cousin Geet, she tried to distance herself from Maan. But it was easier said than done. She use to continously make excuses to meet Maan i.e. Gayatri came to RNI head office despite of being sick just to get a glimpse of Maan; then meeting Maan again by going to his home on the excuse of seeing his sick grandmother; or going to his home on excuse of enquiring about his sister's health (which she could have enquired on phone just as well!). When had her attraction for Maan changed to love for Maan she doesn't know? Gayatri had understood that there is a deep emotional relationship between Maan and Geet, so she gracefully tried to withdraw herself from his presence but her heart said that as Geet is no longer alive there is some hope of relationship between Maan and herself. Finally unable to control her emotions any longer and before leaving from his life forever, for one last time Gayatri decided to meet Maan and ask him for a favour. Doctors had wanted her to concieve soon if she ever wanted to become a mother? And Gayatri desperately wanted to become mother. Initially, Gayatri had thought of keeping a marriage proposal in front of Maan. But after overhearing Maan's talk with a detective to find Geet, Gayatri decided to requested Maan to donate his sperm for "invitro fertilization". But now after overhearing Ram and Priya's arguement, that there was a strong possibility of Geet being alive, even "sperm donation" doesn't seem possible! Gayatri lost all hope of carrying in her womb gift from her "Gayatri ke Maan"!!

After Gayatri bathed and got ready she went downstairs to the breakfast table putting a fake smile for her family. She was welcomed by raised voices of Ram, Meera and Avinash whereas Priya was trying to calm all the three."Chote Papa, kya pareshaani hai?"(Ram papa, what is the problem?) Gayatri asked in a high pitched voice to be heard above the din, startling the four Kapoors.

"Gayatri, see Mom and Dad want me to marry into the family of THAT Maan Singh Khurana.What gaurantee is there that the younger son of Khuranas, Mr. Vikrant Singh Khurana (Vicky) is not without morals like his elder brother, Maan Singh Khurana?"



"Didi, there is gaurantee of nothing in this world not even life. One is alive now and in next second he maybe dead. Yes Mr. Maan Singh Khurana commited a sin by being intimate with a girl just for winning a bet, but he did it after making her his legally wedded wife. And crux of any marriage is a physical relationship between husband and wife for progeny."

"But it was not a true marriage it was only a means to fulfill his lust and win a bet."

"Yes it may have been so for Mr. Maan Singh Khurana but not for his wife, Geet. For her it was a bond for next seven births."

"Gayatri, how do you know all this? You were not even present there." Avinash questioned.

Gayatri realised that she is saying too much in Maan's defence under the influence of her love for Maan. Hence she controlled herself and said to Meera, "Didi, you are not marrying Mr. Maan Singh Khurana but his younger brother, Mr. Vikrant Singh Khurana (Vicky). If you truly "like" Mr. Vikrant Singh Khurana only then say "yes" for this matrimonial proposal. Also remember, if you"like" Vicky and are only refusing the proposal due to his elder brother, Maan Singh Khurana's crime, then that's not being fair to yourself or Khuranas.No two siblings are same. Just like you are calm, cool, responsible and mature whereas Mr. Cassanova is irresponsible, careless and a big flirt."

"GAYATRI ki bacchi!" Avi got up from his chair and was about to attack Gayatri when Ram's firm and strict voice said, "AVINASH SIT DOWN AT ONCE!"

Looking at Ram and Priya, Gayatri said, "Chote Papa aur Choti Maa, hum aap dono se umar aur tajurbe dono mein kam hain magar hum sirf itna kehna chahenge ki ek sadasya ke gunaah ki sazaa poore parivaar ko matt dijiye. Aur agarek parivaar ka sadasye nirlaj harqatein karta hai toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki poora parivaar nirlaj hai." (Ram papa and Priya maa, I'm younger to both of you in age and experience. However I would just like to request you both to reconsider your decision. That just because one of the family member had commited a crime, we cannot punish the whole family for it. Similarly if one family member behaves indecently we cannot consider the rest of the family indecent.)

TWO HOURS LATER

Location : KHURANA MANSION, NEW DELHI
Ram, Priya and Avinash entered KM, carrying baskets full of fruits,dry fruits,



chocolates



and sweets.



Khuranas were surprised to see smiling faces of Kapoors especially after last night's show down. "Ram beta, aap yahaan kaise? Kya Maan ne phir kuch galat kiya hai?" (Ram, how come you are here? Has Maan again misbehaved?) Savitri Devi said glaring at Maan.



"Dadimaa mai toh..." (Dadimaa, I've been...)

"Nahi Maaji, Maan ne abhi kuch nahi kiya. Hum Vicky beta ka aaj "Roka" karna chahte hain agar aap sab abhi bhi Meera ko apne ghar ki bahu banna chahte hain toh?" (No Savitri Deviji, Maan has not done anything. We would like to do Vicky's "Roka" ceremony today. If Khurana family would still like to make our daughter Meera, Khuranas' daughter-in-law?)

("Roka" ritual is the first in a long list of rituals. In the first instance called Roka or Rokna, the family of the bride visits the family home of the groom with a lot of gifts. The bride is usually not present that day. Roka ceremony is usually performed on a mutually convenient date backed by 'shubh muhurat'. This is a simple function, which is attended by family members and close friends. There is normally an exchange of gifts and cash. This ceremony has always been a low-key affair.) (Courtsey: Google)

The stressful and tense atmosphere of Khurana Mansion at once became jubiliant. Savitri Devi had tears of joy flowing from her eyes. She said, "Garima, jaldi se Ram, Priya aur Avinash ka muh meetha karao. Ram beta, aaj hum bhi soch rahe the ki Meera beti ka 'thaka" karne ka. Humne to kal hi panditji se aaj shaam ka muhurath bhi nikalwa liya thaa."(Garima, please quickly get sweets to feed Ram, Priya and Avinash for giving such a good news! Ram, we were planning today evening to come and meet you so we could do Meera's 'thaka". I had asked yesterday our family priest to take out auspicious time for doing thaka which he took out for today evening!) Just then Vicky came after his bath. Savitri Devi kissed his forehead and blessed him and then said,"Aaj hum bahut khush hain ki humare Vicky ki shaadi tai ho gayi." (Today I'm very happy as my Vicky's marital alliance has been fixed.)

"SHAADI? Magar..." (Marriage? But...)

"Beta, Meera shaadi ke liye maan gayi hai." (Meera has agreed for this marriage my son!) Priya said caressing Vicky's head. Vicky was made to sit facing east and both Ram and Priya did all ceremonies and customs required during roka. After the roka ceremony was over, Priya kissed Vicky's forehead and said, "Maaji, Bhaisaheb (Rishabh) aur Bhabhi (Garima), aaj se Vikrant humara hua!" (Maaji, Bhaisaheb(Rishabh) and Bhabhi (Garima), from today Vicky is ours!) Vicky went and touched all elders feet. Ram and Priya touched Savitri Devi's feet. Ram hugged Rishabh whereas Priya hugged Garima. Annie was seeing that Ram, Priya and Avinash were served tea, coffee, snacks and sweets. After excitement of elders calmed down, Annie went with Garima in the kitchen to organise lunch for everyone. Rishabh went to attend an important business call; whereas Vicky and Avi were busy chatting and Savitri Devi and Priya were talking about what all will be needed for pre-wedding ceremonies.

Maan was standing far away and seeing all the excitement among the two families and realizing that all these small joys were snatched from Geet by Maan's marrying her in a hurry! Seeing Maan standing alone, Ram came and patted Maan's back affectionately and said,"Maan jo chhe saal pehle tumne kiya thaa Gayatri ke saath usse bhulaya toh nahi jaa sakta hai magar woh dard kuch kam kiya jaa sakta hai." (Maan what sin you have done with Gayatri six years back is very difficult to forget. But we can reduce the pain.)

"Kaise Mr. Kapoor? Aap jo kehenge mai karne ko tyaar hoon." (How Mr. Kapoor? I'm willing to do anything?)



"Pakka?" (Promise?)

"Haan. Aap bolke toh Dekhiye?" (Yes. You please tell me what you want?)

"Pehle toh tum mujhe aaj se "uncle" bolna shuru karo kyunki abb hum samdhi banne wale hain. Dusara ki tum Gayatri se dobara shaadi karlo parivaar aur samaj ke saamne." (First you call me "uncle" as we are soon going to become relatives. Secondly, get re-married to Gayatri in front of family and society.)

"Jabse maine Geet ko RNI ke office mein pehli baar dekha thaa, mai tabse Geet se dobara shaadi karna chahta thaa parivaar aur samaj ke saamne. Magar jab Geet ne kaha ki woh Geet nahi Gayatri hai, maine apne kadam peeche modh liye. Agar Geet mera matlab hai Gayatri shaadi karne ke liye maan jaaye toh mai aaj hi baraat le kar aa jaaon. Magar woh nahi maanegi kyunki abb Geet mujhe bhool chukki hai." (I have wanted to get married to Geet in front of family and society since I saw her first time in RNI's head office. But Geet said that she is Gayatri and not Geet so I stepped back. If Geet, I mean Gayatri agrees to marry me, I will come with baraat today itself and marry her. But I know she will not agree as she has forgotten me.)

"Geet ko mannane ki zimmewari meri magar tum wada karo ke tum apni baat se peeche nahi hatoge!" (Convincing Gayatri is my responsibility but you promise me that you will not go back on your words!)

"Mai aapse wada karta hoon Uncle, ki Geet ko mai apna bannake hi rahoonga. Aur usse uska haq dila ke hi rahoonga. Geet "Khurana khandaan ki badi bahu" hai aur usse woh haq zarur milega. Aur saath hi saath mai Dev, Rahul aur Naintara ko bhi unke kiye ki kaddi sazaa dilaonga." (I promise Uncle, that I will definitely make Geet mine with all respect. I will see that she gets what's rightfully hers. Geet is "Khurana family's elder daughter-in-law" and she will definitely get that status. Also Dev, Rahul and Naintara will get what they deserve and that is severe punishment.)

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