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indiegirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Hi dear nothing is lacking in your story please continue with your thought process it is shaping up nicely. Thanks for all the pms, little slow in replying as kids are home for Christmas break and I hardly get any time to get on IF.

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Interesting n different concept
Geet feels someone presence bt she kept in goring it n u have wonderfully shown how sad n shaken up event geet is
Hope everything is fine n it's all geet dream

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Part 4 very engaging, nice to know that Geets parents wee around and she is ok, Geet was so scared poor thing... the mystery of the old man continuous and the atmosphere is also very strange, the whole aura of the village is very different... looking forward to Masn's entry in the story hopefully some of the things will start changing...
Thnx

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

So everyone went to temple

Geets Bad timing or fate!? :/

New neighbor :I

Maan : :D

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

All the parts read in one go, just awesome, amazing, mysterious and intriguing, just loving it,

Geet is so scared with the experiences which is happening around her, still confused is it her dream or reality, eagerly waiting for next

Pls add me in ur blog list

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

First of all very sorry for being late...Nowadays , I rarely come here...But now I have finished reading...I would say that there are 3 kinds of writers in this forum who writes:

1)Cheesy love stories with mushy romance

2)Serious issues...and very very entertaining

3)Different...extremely talented , but still there likes are less compared to others as they write something hatke...

U are the 3rd kind...and I love it...

Geet's character is somewhat like me...I also like my den , my small cosy bedroom...and I hate when someone tries to invade my privacy and drag me out...Like Geet , I also don't like changes...and like to stay in my room rather than going out...So , it is only me who always stay home to look after the house and my dear cats while everyone goes out for party...

I can understand how Geet is feeling...She has to leave her comfort zone to somewhere else...It is like u are going to another world , and u don't know whether u will fit in or not...But Geet has no choice...poor baby!! She found her new home quite interesting...I can sense there will be an interesting adventure waiting for her...

On her 1st day she was welcomed by someone...Who is this invisible force that dashed to her? I hope it means well!...She was getting intrigued by the strange symbols ...What does those symbols mean?

Oh god! She is a late riser like me...LOL...I also hate getting out of bed soon...OMG!! She is so scared to see no one around her...Where are her parents? Then that old man...What did he meant by "It's happening?"...Thank god , her mom came on time...She went to the temple...She should have left a note for her...I would have been mad if my mother did the same thing to me...Poor her, she was so scared...

So , new neighbours? Hope they will add more mystery to these events...She was still very disturbed , but I am sure , her nature is not like letting go...She would be highly intrigued and would try to decipher those symbols...

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angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

ITS NOT ABT THOUSAND BUT ONE WHO TRULY APPRECIATES U

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angeldream14

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Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

what is gone start

this is so misty

when will it be a bit clear

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sonaly

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Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Nice story. Please update soon, we are waiting...

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angelwords

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Posted: 8 years ago

#120

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