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Priya21

@priya_21

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

i liked it

waiting for start

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maaneet14

@maaneet14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Thanks for the pm dear...superb prologue...I'm waiting to read forward to see what has actually happened...can't wait

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Character Sketch is very interesting

Maan's mother , Dev and Annie seems to be the same

she does not even have a good bond with Daadima

while Maan was always closest to his Daadima and Dad

he married Geet a 18 years old innocent girl never gave her love

just used her whenever he felt like now she is in coma and pregnant too

it seems that now Maan loves her spends time with her while his Daadima no longer speaks and wishes to see him

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Note for all

If you don't want to read, I gonna remove whole data from here. First I thought to keep it on IF but I think readers are not much interested. Today I ll remove everything.

I don't know what reader want, I am used to now these type of jolts. People always bring my morale down without response. So plz don ask me for further pws.

Just 50 likes on all updates. Including this. Now I ll update all other works according to my wish.When this is my fate. Not to expect much from u.Readers say loyal but they r not.

I gave 3 updates of three ffs in one day but such bad response. Even foR TTHW, I put my works on hold for 9 back to back updates.

Don't trouble me more now.

Thank you.

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Nice part and prologue geet is navie and innocent who is in comma becoz of main is regratting from his mistakes in past geet is preganent with twins but bone is dead beciz of miscarriage dadi hates main and his mom becoiz of them geet is in this situation nice continue soon dear waiting.baiting for the next part dear

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

hi thanks 4 da note! I always read n comment! thanks

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Character sketch is nice ..
But prologue is really interesting ..
So Geet is in coma and pregnant too ..
What Maan did with Geet that she is in this condition or is it Maan's mother cleverness that led Geet to bed ..

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

I always reads yours stories

liked and commented..

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Lovely CS but prologue is very painful, Geet is in coma and 7 months pregnant with Maan,s baby, Maan is by Geet,s side and now repenting for his behaviour towards Geet, poor Geet she is only 19 years old , Dadi has broken her relation with Maan, his mom and dad also, eagerly waiting for the story to unfold

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Loved the prologue

Geet is in coma and pregnant...

Maan has been a jerk in the past but not he is a totally changed person ..He regrets his past deeds..and loves Geet to no extent now...the story seems to be really intriguing...

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