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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats once again! Awesome cs! emotional prologue! superbly written! Feeling 4 Geet! She is in a coma n pregnant! Maan repents! he is waiting 4 his jaan 2 wake up! Maan hurt Geet so much! he recalls the past! Dadi supported Geet! dadi upset n hit Maan after wt he did 2 Geet! she broke al relations with Khuranas! Maan married Geet bt loved Sam. why did he marry her n ruin her life? Sam n Maan intimate! she aborted his child! update soon

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

this is interesting
liked it
so now maan is is love with geet
but geet is comatose
continue soon...

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

superb and intersting

maan did notgive right geet claim him but he use her

now she in the coma and pregent also

what happen she in this stage

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Congrats on new story!!!
Very interesting...poor geet pays for maans rudeness. ..

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turbulence

@turbulence

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Interesting concept, dear. Really an innovative idea.

I always think how on earth you get such good themes up your sleeve! Seriously, sonia, non-fiction writer to ban jao yaar.

Maan's selfish nature and his mother's pride cost him his baby's life. Poor geet, she's such a naive n endearing baby doll. She didn't even know she lost her first baby. Now maan is repenting for his sins and fallen in love with geet. He wants his love back. But no doubt, he will have to work very hard for that.

At least daadi maa was there with geet, so she felt the presence of family around her. Maan's mom samira and dev are absolute rascals, they don't deserve family and loved ones. Can't blame samira as she is not legally maan's wife. She has all the rights to decide her own priorities.

I am already hooked and glued. Looking forward to reading this story. Please update soon.

Also tell me if you are planning to update any of my favorites, i hope you remember those, dear. Looove you and your stories a looot!!!!!!!!!!!

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Congrats for next story..

Interesting start..

Poor geet she is in coma and pregnant..

Waiting for update..

Thank u for pm..

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ambeern

@ambeern

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Congrats on the new story

Prologue seems interesting

Can't wait for the update

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Nice one dear it's interesting eagar to read the story continue soon dear

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Almina shaikh

@almin25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Walllahhh what a ff diii 😊
tussii kamaaalll hooo 😃
m soo much loving it,cant tell u how much 😉
The prologue itself is so catchy,which expresses so much of things,abt maaneet relation,sameera,his parents,dadima all in one go 😊
waiting to see how it all happened,and how maan did fell in love with geet.
Do pm dii on nxt update waiting all excitedly for the frst part 😊

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

very shocking prologue
what happened to geet ?
at the age of 18 she was pregnant
if he didn't like her why the hell he bed with her
geet was in coma & 7 months pregnant
dm cut all relations with khurana family

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