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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

lovely update
maan still looking for that girl
all are worried for him
finally he met her
but she is mute
maan promised he would never let her go

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turbulence

@turbulence

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Awesome update sonia.

In the first part itself you have related the links between the past n present so well.

Hospital saved maan so dev gave them donation.

Maan fears no one will believe him about geet.

Geet was mute, couldn't speak so maan never got to know her well. But they shared lovely moments

so she conceived.

Maan is so desparate to find out geet and his little baby. Only the locket remained with him as a last memory.

Dev n maan went to the cafe n ordered their drinks, lol, waiter's face was worth seeing.

Daadi was angry as maan wasn't answering the calls but then he is lost in his own pain.

But he again bumped into a soft beauty and the water bucket splashed, while giving money he got to know she is geet.

Lovely how listening to the baby's mention and looking at the locket brought back maan's memory.

Now he remembered his geet and baby properly. He wants his family back. Hope they come together soon.

And about the question, sonia! I think you better keep this one limited to 4 parts and epilogue. That will be ideal just like pyaar ko ho jaane do.

This way, you can concentrate on your other stories properly.

And my sincere request, please geet ko cooking pe mat lagana yaha is kahaani mei.

Let her be the way she is. She is already in pain, not properly educated but even though msk ki wife hai, working as a waitress.

All in all, lovely and awesome beginning. Please continue soon.

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Nice part dear
Thanks for pm...
Maan was still searching geet and when he found her he was angry and annoyed.
Other waiter said she is dump and alone taking care of 4 yrs baby...
Maan joined all the dots and found out it's geet , whom he was searching...he claims her life as his...
Dev and dadi r doing everything to get maan sane...they thought the girl was illusion but it's not...
Waiting dear

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geet_v81

@geet_v81

Explorer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awesome update sonia.

Loved dev and his antics.

finally maan able to find her.

Like he think she was really dumb

he have a son also.

Please continue in IF only... dont shift it to blog.

Thanks for the update

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Wonderful start di!!

Loved it

Each and every episode of maan's life is beautifully penned

Maan gave donation to the hospital which played Cupid in meeting his angel

The angel who came as a ray of light in his lightless and melancholy life

Dev was worried seeing his brother maan's tangled life inorder to make him feel light both went out

Maan bumped on a girl who was mute and came to know her name as Geet

Her antics made maan feel confused and her story made him feel an ache in his heart

Her pendent ,touch and her antics made him realise that geet was his angel whom he was searching for and whom people claimed her to be his chimera his virtual reality!!

Looking forward to know what made geet to distance thyself and her baby from her love her maan

Was maan's status and richness made geet feel inferior that she left him thinking that his family won't accept a mute girl!!?(Just a guess)

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Edited by anu5 - 9 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Thanks for the pm di!!

Will be waiting to read the next update

Regarding the question di!! I would like it either way . which ever way u feel comfortable di proceed with it

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Aww.

What a start.

Finally maan found geet.

Waiting to see wat he will do now.

Dev is such positive & funny character .

Thanks for pm

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Res... Itna acchaa .. Update .. araam se Lamba reply karungi ...

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sairab

@sairab

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Wonderful update.

So maaneet hv a kid also. Maan ko sab cynic kahte hai. Par woh hai nahi aur woh use stapith bhi nahi kar paraha hun. Nd he cnt say about deir union. Nw he cn bcoz he met geet nd knw about her lif also gt pendant dat he remembering. Bt he only needs tu mehsoos her tu recognize her.

Geet also shocked tu see him. May b she fear tu be recognized by him nd he wl take her child away. So she was searching fr chain was dat much important fr her. Y she rubing her stomach. Was she trying tu say dat job s her way of food. Dnt make issue.nywys maan made pro.ise tu make her nd baby cm back tu his life.

Dev love him very mu h nd cn du nythng fr him. Is Geet dnt hv ny family. Nd ha was maan in coma back dat tim. Nd maan was right she s mute. Was she go away as she knw about maan. Y ddnt de hospital staff ddnt saw her or ny cctv footage fr her existenc der. Was she a worker in hospital dat time.

Waiting nd ha i thnk short wala hi achha hoga. Oderwise may be lose de essence of story