||Maneet OS: ~A Happy Ending~ @23/10/2016||

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello guys, well this OS is a sequel of one of my story Felt By Heart. This story was a challenge for me and glad i finished it though after a lot of time in between... i hope the challenger liked it so far...


NOTE:- this OS can be read separately, not necessary that you should have a background from Felt By Heart. it has no direct connection to the story apart from one or two things here and there which can be neglected. I wrote this story keeping Felt By Heart this concept in my mind.
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if you are interested reading this piece of work, here is the link Felt By Heart


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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome is
maan so possessive for geet he can't bear other man near her
in past he didn't let her go and married her
now they are so happy together with kids
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da awesome OS! well written! Maaneet married! Maan is so possessive! Maaneet have twins! Maan names them after her siblings! 😊 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it .how to read the original ..felt by heart. Please give link
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Originally posted by: sree10

Loved it .how to read the original ..felt by heart. Please give link

sent pm 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So so sowwieee 🤗
I'm already feeling bad you have to read this whole thing... 😆 You can skip it if you want 😳
Well... I had to really comment on this OS cause I can't stop re-reading it. Like literally. 😆 ❤️
Challenge? You rock in every challenge or subject... <3 ;)
☺️ ☺️ The beginning is crazy and wild, like us... I mean... like them. 😆 I mean... you know I can't ignore commenting on that part :P 🤣 The rest of that part is also ☺️ And she can't move... 😳 Erhm, I guess she wouldn't be able to sit down for a week 😳 😳 ;)
Ishhh... always loved the way you portray a possessive character ☺️ It's like I can't even breath properly reading the lines 😆 Love your possessiveness, baby ❤️ 😉 :)))
Okaaay, the shower part is love! Many flashbacks going through my mind right now... pretty grey ones. 😆
Those many shades of him... he can be caring and sweet too... aww, that was adorable! ❤️ Loved the way you described this part, his possessiveness, desires, her understanding and innocent nature... and damn, his awesome-sauce lines made it even better! 😆 You never fail in impressing me, you know that, right? ☺️ 🤗 And the way he was taking care of her after that... aww... hope there was a cuddling session going on, iykwim. 🤗
The flashback part is so effin' amazing - I'm literally trying to focus so my comment can be easy to read though if I let my mind typing this comment... umm forget about it! 😆
Maan is so lost without his girl - he just can't imagine his life without her Love is such a strong and beautiful feeling... being away from that person makes you miss her so much - like every second of your life. 😳 ❤️
He has lost it the moment he found out about her RL... people tend to lose control in such situations and you pulled it out amazingly ❤️ Enjoyed the way he picked her up and left no other choice for her 😆 And of course Adi was always there like a true buddy helping with the luggage and taking the driver's seat... 😆 How could she dare ask him who was him to take her like that? 😲 ☺️ :))) The upcoming moment is damn sweet... both in a sweet sleep ❤️ He's finally finding peace having her by his side, so close to him 😳 I can totally understand this Maan dude! 😳 :))
Her entry in his house - perfectly described We can already see the amazing bonding btw Daadima and Geet... made me smile aww 😳
Hahah Daadima and Maan such an awesome duo... 😆 This daadima likes takkar k pyaar too, hai naa? 😉 🤣
Omg, this next part - Maaneet in their bedroom - well, Gosh ☺️ Stop writing like that... too hot to handle... like... you know me. 😳 😆
Oh, things thrown on the floor... dard wala love 🥺 😆 Reading this story, I know why it is so dear to me. 😆 ❤️
Aww she can't see him hurting himself like that so he confessed her love for him 😳 Truly truly beautiful part... Geet becoming Maan's Geet, his blood filling her forehead, their official wedding ❤️ So many feelings reading it... perfectly described
Loved loved loved the FB 🤗
And oh Geez, of course she likes him showing his possessiveness, blushing etc ☺️ Pretty fair, isn't it? 😉 😆 Reminds me of... something. :P <3
Aww THEY are pregnant 😆 And he feels it... he feels she is preggy. ☺️ 😆 Why do all this remind me of something else? 😲 😳 You know what... <3 😆
Very very lovely... that was so cute I couldn't stop smiling! You know me right... 😆 <3
The After 5 years part is love <3 <3
Omg they are baby making machines... 😲 😆 Again reminds me of something else :P ❤️ :))) Swarg and Swara... lovely names <3 I'm used to "different" ones 😆 Haha Daadima is having an "aish" time putting all the responsibilities on their shoulders... 😆 She's got full trust on them. <3
Awwiiee... seems like they are planning a football team 😳 😳 😆 Okay, this is getting too... us... I mean... so similar :o :)) <3 I'm gonna die because of too much cuteness 😆 ❤️
"You will keep me pregnant all the time" ☺️ The last part of the OS is amazinggg 😆 ❤️ Love it to the core... My favorite subject I must say 🤣
Yaaay, you never fail in making me happy! 🤗 I'll go crazy one day... wait, I am already :)))
And here my not-so-long comment comes to an end. 😆 Trust me, I could just go on and on with hearts and kisses till I make it match the length of an OS. 😆 <3
You rock, jaan ❤️ Your work is so mesmerizing... I just love that subtle touch you give to your every story My besbest best. 😳 🤗 I love your work so much and absolutely admire the fact that, even if you're very busy, you still manage to give us such amazing stories somehow 🤗
Keep it up and take care baby 🤗
ilysm ❤️
Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was freaking awesome...
Loved it so much..
Thanx for writing this one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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plz gv me d link to d original story..
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