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So so sowwieee 🤗
I'm already feeling bad you have to read this whole thing... 😆 You can skip it if you want 😳
Well... I had to really comment on this OS cause I can't stop re-reading it. Like literally. 😆 ❤️
Challenge? You rock in every challenge or subject... <3 ;)
☺️ ☺️ The beginning is crazy and wild, like us... I mean... like them. 😆 I mean... you know I can't ignore commenting on that part :P 🤣 The rest of that part is also ☺️ And she can't move... 😳 Erhm, I guess she wouldn't be able to sit down for a week 😳 😳 ;)
Ishhh... always loved the way you portray a possessive character ☺️ It's like I can't even breath properly reading the lines 😆 Love your possessiveness, baby ❤️ 😉 :)))
Okaaay, the shower part is love! Many flashbacks going through my mind right now... pretty
grey ones. 😆
Those many shades of him... he can be caring and sweet too... aww, that was adorable! ❤️ Loved the way you described this part, his possessiveness, desires, her understanding and innocent nature... and damn, his awesome-sauce lines made it even better! 😆 You never fail in impressing me, you know that, right? ☺️ 🤗 And the way he was taking care of her after that... aww... hope there was a cuddling session going on, iykwim. 🤗
The flashback part is so effin' amazing - I'm literally trying to focus so my comment can be easy to read though if I let my mind typing this comment... umm forget about it! 😆
Maan is so lost without his girl - he just can't imagine his life without her Love is such a strong and beautiful feeling... being away from that person makes you miss her so much - like every second of your life. 😳 ❤️
He has lost it the moment he found out about her RL... people tend to lose control in such situations and you pulled it out amazingly ❤️ Enjoyed the way he picked her up and left no other choice for her 😆 And of course Adi was always there like a true buddy helping with the luggage and taking the driver's seat... 😆 How could she dare ask him who was him to take her like that? 😲 ☺️ :))) The upcoming moment is damn sweet... both in a sweet sleep ❤️ He's finally finding peace having her by his side, so close to him 😳 I can totally understand this Maan dude! 😳 :))
Her entry in his house - perfectly described We can already see the amazing bonding btw Daadima and Geet... made me smile aww 😳
Hahah Daadima and Maan such an awesome duo... 😆 This daadima likes takkar k pyaar too, hai naa? 😉 🤣
Omg, this next part - Maaneet in their bedroom - well, Gosh ☺️ Stop writing like that... too hot to handle... like... you know me. 😳 😆
Oh, things thrown on the floor... dard wala love 🥺 😆 Reading this story, I know why it is so dear to me. 😆 ❤️
Aww she can't see him hurting himself like that so he confessed her love for him 😳 Truly truly beautiful part... Geet becoming Maan's Geet, his blood filling her forehead, their official wedding ❤️ So many feelings reading it... perfectly described
Loved loved loved the FB 🤗
And oh Geez, of course she likes him showing his possessiveness, blushing etc ☺️ Pretty fair, isn't it? 😉 😆 Reminds me of... something. :P <3
Aww THEY are pregnant 😆 And he feels it... he feels she is preggy. ☺️ 😆 Why do all this remind me of something else? 😲 😳 You know what... <3 😆
Very very lovely... that was so cute I couldn't stop smiling! You know me right... 😆 <3
The After 5 years part is love <3 <3
Omg they are baby making machines... 😲 😆 Again reminds me of something else :P ❤️ :))) Swarg and Swara... lovely names <3 I'm used to "different" ones 😆 Haha Daadima is having an "aish" time putting all the responsibilities on their shoulders... 😆 She's got full trust on them. <3
Awwiiee... seems like they are planning a football team 😳 😳 😆 Okay, this is getting too... us... I mean... so similar :o :)) <3 I'm gonna die because of too much cuteness 😆 ❤️
"You will keep me pregnant all the time" ☺️ The last part of the OS is amazinggg 😆 ❤️ Love it to the core... My favorite subject I must say 🤣
Yaaay, you never fail in making me happy! 🤗 I'll go crazy one day... wait, I am already :)))
And here my not-so-long comment comes to an end. 😆 Trust me, I could just go on and on with hearts and kisses till I make it match the length of an OS. 😆 <3
You rock, jaan ❤️ Your work is so mesmerizing... I just love that subtle touch you give to your every story My besbest best. 😳 🤗 I love your work so much and absolutely admire the fact that, even if you're very busy, you still manage to give us such amazing stories somehow 🤗
Keep it up and take care baby 🤗
ilysm ❤️
Edited by Aishuuu. - 9 years ago
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