MANEET FF - TURTLEDOVES[DISCONTINUED] - Page 4

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Interesting beginning!

Obviously Maan loves his daughter very much and he knows she needs a mother but he does not want his daughter to be like the mother.

Curious to see where you take the story.

Also, I never understood why ppl write summaries of what they just read! I wrote my view point not a summary! Strange.

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Thank you so much:-)
Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Congrats for new story. Maan loves his daughter a lot it is very clear by his acts but why he don't want her to be like her mom? Waiting for update.

Thanks my dear khushi
Let story itself reveal

Originally posted by: hinal_pm

Nice prologue! Love the name khwaish! Waiting for more

Thanks dear.
Hope you will like the rest too

Originally posted by: .CookieMonster.

Awesme cocept
cont soon

Thanks a lot dear!

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Go ahead:-)

ok tum na jaldi theek ho jao
then phir hamain regular updates chahiye woh bhi long wale 😉

Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

nice

Thank you Aparna

Originally posted by: tania90

ok tum na jaldi theek ho jao
then phir hamain regular updates chahiye woh bhi long wale 😉

Thats so sweet of you Tania:-)
I can promise you regular and long update once I get fine but jaldi thik hona...is not in my hand sweetheart. Its kind of little bit serious this time

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#993399">eagerly awaiting updates </font>

Sorry for making you wait khwaish:-)

Originally posted by: tania90

harshu yr
update to kr
start krke khud chli gyi
ab hum tang ho rhe hain

Sorry Tania:-) Zillion times sorry:-)

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Thats so sweet of you Tania:-)
I can promise you regular and long update once I get fine but jaldi thik hona...is not in my hand sweetheart. Its kind of little bit serious this time

koi na theek ho jao ache se
phir de dena
but kya hua tumhe