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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: myrahluvsk

Awesome update
nice Maan has daughter

get well soon
waiting for update




Thank you myrah! For your good wishes too dear:-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Take care
Even me too not well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Take care

Even me too not well




Thanks dear and sending you lots of good wishes for your health:-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART ONE



It was Sunday's morning, clock showed 8 am, Maan was still sleeping peacefully in his room holding his princess protectively while she was sleeping cuddling close to him .It was their usual routine, Khwaish used to sleep only with Maan. Everyday Maan would come early from his office knowing very well Khwaish would neither eat without him nor would sleep and same follows for Maan. She was totally her Papa's princess with Maan being all protective and possessive about her, both loving each other immensely.

Khwaish stirred in her sleep, slowly she woke up and sat on bed rubbing her eyes with back of her palms, she saw her papa sleeping with his mouth open little. Lifting her palm she closed it, leaning forward she gave chaste kiss on his cheek wishing him good morning in her childish tone waking him.


She got up from bed and went to Neha for her help in getting ready. After getting ready she came back and found him still sleeping. Frown appeared on her face making her little nose scrunched up. Little Khwaish reached to the bed with her baby steps. She tried climbing up on bed by his side when her foot stuck into silk sheet and unable to hold herself she fell on him startling his sleep. Maan woke up due the sudden force of unexpected fall but had held unconsciously Khwaish protectively steadying her.


Maan got up and sat holding her in his lap, concernedly checking her for any injury same time asking her, "Princess Sambhal ke. Tumhe laga to nahi na?Tum thik to ho na princess?"


Seeing Maan's reaction and amount of questions he had asked in one breath, little khwaish started giggling but soon she realised she was angry with him.


"Papa aap abhi tak so rahe ho?" She said annoyingly in her cute voice trying to sound annoyed but failing miserably.


"Haan princess, Kyu ? Kya hua? Aur aap itni jaldi tayar bhi ho gaye? Baat kya hai?" Maan amused with her asked not understanding what she was trying to say.


"Papa? Aap bhool gaye. Hame aaj water park jana tha. Aap aise kaise bhool sakte ho?" She huffed realising he forgot about their day out turning her face away from him.


Maan realized what she was talking about. Maan kissed her cheeks lovingly making her face him, "Princess, Mai to kuch nahi bhoola, kaise bhool sakta hoon? Papa apni princess se related koi bhi bat bhool sakte hai kya? But MY PRINCESS, Aap bhool rahe ho ke Maine kaha tha, ham Aaj water park nahi jaa sakte, Aapko fever tha na kal, Aur agar aaj aap pani me kheloge to fever aur bhi badh jayega na beta. Aur mai aapki health ko risk me nahi dal sakta"


He told his reason seriously yet in a loving way caressing her hairs softly. Khwaish badly wanted to go to the water par, her face fell.


Maan who couldn't see her sad decided to cheer her up. He started accordingly, "But princess aapko sad hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai, water park nahi jaa sakte to kya hua, Ham ghar me hi bohot masti karenge, Khub khelenge. Today papa will be with you whole day, we will do bohot sari masti" speaking in a childish tone.


Hearing this Khwaish's lips curved up in beautiful smile. She hugged him in excitement same time expressing her happiness, "Yayy ...You are the best papa ,I love you" Saying so she kissed his cheek laughing at the same time.


Seeing her happy and hearing her sweet, melodious laughter echoing in the room. He was feeling like luckiest person on this earth.


"I love you too Princess, Chalo fir aap niche chalo, mai bas abhi tayar hoke ata hu". He said putting her down the bed. She turned to leave, when he called out for her, "Princess"


Khwaish stopped, turning back to him asked "haan papa?"


"Nahi kuch nahi "


"Okay" She existed room and he turned washroom's door knob to enter, when all of sudden he felt two tiny hands encircling him.


Khwaish has came running and hugged his legs with her tiny hands "You are the best dad in this world"


Maan was awestruck seeing Khwaish's love for him. Bending down to her height his touched his forehead against her closing his eyes momentarily.


"And you are the best daughter in this world Princess" he said kissing her forehead affectionately. There beautiful moment was disturbed with sudden knock on already opened door.


Neha stood their witnessing their bond. She told them, "Good Morning Sir, breakfast is ready, you both please come down"


Maan returned her smile and told her, "Neha tum Khwaish ko le jao, Mai bas tayar hoke ata hu." Turning towards khwaish rubbing his nose with her littleone he asked, "Okay princess?"


Smiling Khwaish replied,"Okay papa. But jaldi ana"


"Your wish is my command princess."


Lifting khwaish, Neha asked, "Chale khwaish, aaj breakfast aapke pasand ka bana hai, cutlets with your favourite..."


"Strawberry shake! Chalo chalo jaldi chalo" Khwaish screamed happily without letting Neha complete her line.


Neha and sansakar smiled at her antics. Neha took Khwaish downstairs while Maan went in washroom to take a shower.


Standing in a shower thinking, how truly blessed to have this angel in his life. She is so cute, pure, innocent, beautiful, sweet...Just like Her.


He cursed himself for remembering her again.


"Maan ye tu kya soch raha hai?" His mind asked him.


"Khwaish...khwaish is not like her."


"Tu khwaish ko uss se jod rha hai. Sab kuch janne ke bad bhi ? Jo usne kiya uske bad bhi?" His mind asked that why he was walking on same memory lane again and again.


"6 saal ho gaye. 6 saal. Damm 6 years."


"Kyu nahi bhool paya hai tu use? Usne jo kuch bhi kiya uske bad bhi?


Maan screamed at his reflection in mirror, "Nahi mai use bhool chukka hu, kuch nahi hai wo, kuch bhi nahi."


"Khwaish aur wo kabhi same nahi ho sakte. Kabhi nahi."


He felt his mind transferred to his reflection and asking him, mocking him "Khwaish ka nam tujhe uski yad nahi dilata?''


"Nahi?"


"Nafrat ...Sirf aur sirf nafrat karta hu mai usse"


Maan screamed loudly banging his hand on wall turning away from his own reflection.


Then he remembered khwaish's likings, her habits and her craziness towards strawberry milkshake. It was her favourite too. How come khwaish's habits, liking were so much alike to her? How? He still couldn't find the answer of these questions in these six years.


How?


Just how?

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Was That Just A Coincidence Or A Game Of Destiny???


To Know More, Stay Tuned For The Next Update.



Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
I am always staytuned to this story woh to tum hi ho jo khud hi bhul jaati ho hahha
ok loved it khwaish nd maan bonding is marvelous how much they love nd care for each other khwaish is so cute
its been 6 yr he is not with her wife or say khwaish mom
where is she aur kab hogi uski entry
what happened in their relationship that they r no more together nd maan hate her
get well soom
nd do give jldi update
nd thanks for updating today
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tania90

I am always staytuned to this story woh to tum hi ho jo khud hi bhul jaati ho hahha
ok loved it khwaish nd maan bonding is marvelous how much they love nd care for each other khwaish is so cute
its been 6 yr he is not with her wife or say khwaish mom
where is she aur kab hogi uski entry
what happened in their relationship that they r no more together nd maan hate her
get well soom
nd do give jldi update

nd thanks for updating today




I know Tania😳 and thank you so much for that❤️ Areee, I have so much to look after in my personal life that I tend to forget small things. I can't help it.
I always adore father-daughter bond in fictions so I wanted to write one too.
Glad you liked it.
Uski entry, probably in 3rd chapter. Thanks dear...I will give early update.
My pleasure sweetheart😳

Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da update! Hope u r dng well! Fab update! Maan n Khwaish share a lovely bond! she is so cute! Who is Neha??? Khwaish resembles her mom! Maan hates her! Y??? update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update
loved maan and khwaish bonding
maan hate khwaish mother per hate bhi ni kar pa raha he
esa kya hua jo dono alag hogaye he
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely update
maan loves his daughter so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part Two:


After this inner battle, composing himself Maan pushed all those thoughts aside. Taking a shower, he quickly got ready, knowing khwaish wouldn't eat without him. Rushing downstairs, he made his way to the dining table where Neha was arranging the breakfast and Khwaish was waiting for him.

Noticing Maan, little khwaish ran towards him and hugged him by his knees, "Papa... what took you so long to come... you know na I don't eat without you and my strawberry milkshake is waiting for me from sooo long".


Maan chuckled laughing little on Khwaish's antics and bending down he lifted her in his arms and placed an affectionate kiss on her hairs. Making her sit properly on the chair he gave her, her favourite STRAWBERRY MILKSHAKE GLASS.


"Nothing princess ...wo to mai bas planning kar raha tha ke aaj ham kya kya masti karne wale hai", while taking his seat, he replied her casually waiting for her reaction. As expected a wide smile appeared on his cute princess's face.

"Sachhi papa? Batao na kya kya karne wale hai ham aaj..." Khwaish was damn excited. Maan nodded in approval while saying, "Pehle breakfast finish karo, fir sab batata hu". Saying this he fed breakfast to her while having his own.


Maan's house was no less than a mansion... his princess's mansion. Even his mansion was on name of his princess...Khwaish. He had arranged his house according to Khwaish's likes, dislikes and comfort.

After breakfast, Maan lifted Khwaish in his arms and took her to the hall, which was looking no less than a disney park that time. There were almost all cartoon characters (Actually lots of people dressed in the cartoon's charcters) .Seeing her favourite characters infront of her, Little khwaish started jumping in joy and she ran towards Maan. As he lifted her up , she hugged him tightly letting him know how much his efforts made her happy. Maan was really happy to know his princess liked his surprise.

"To princess , Bolo pasand aaya suprise ? "Maan asked her as if wanting to reassure... "Bohot ... bohot ... bohot zada... aap bohot bohot acche ho papa ...Sabse jada acche ...you are the best" She said while kissing him on his cheeks. Maan was overwhelmed with his princess's confession .He was awestruck seeing his daughter's love for him. Being number 1 buisness man in India, Maan got uncountable awards till now, numorous complements, but this was the biggest complement he could ever receive or this was the biggest complement he ever wanted to receive.

"Mera to pata nahi, but meri princess jaroor sabse acchi hai", he said while putting her down . "Chalo ab inlogo ko ese dekhne ke liye thodi na bulaya hai". They started playing with the cartoon characters.

After playing with the cartoon characters, Maan had some other plans for Khwaish .


And as soon as they reached to the hall, icecream was waiting for them on the dining table, that too Khwaish's favourite one ...Butterscotch flavour. Khwaish's teeth widen in a broad smile seeing her favourite icecream. They ate icecream , Khwaish while eating icecream put the icecream on her nose, her dress ...her hands...all over her .She was looking damn cute. Maan adored the bundle of cuteness sitting in front of him.


After some time, Khwaish got tired and Maan easily sensed that. He said lifting her "Princess ab bas, Mai to bohot thak gaya ,Aap bhi thak gaye hoge na ,Ab thodi der room me chale ?" Khwaish too agreed on his statement and they went upstairs in their room. He put her on the bed and made her lay down on the bed.

Maan went into washroom to freshnup. He took a shower as he was tired a lot .When he came back he found his princess sleeping with her favourite icecream in bowl besides her. He smiled at her craziness and thought ,"Means she was eating Icecream again here too ,She must have asked Neha to send icecream again ". This made Maan remember something ,



Maan and a girl were standing at Icecream vendor's shop and it was 1 AM .The vendor handover Maan two icecreams of Butterschotch flavour.Maan gave it to the girl and they started walking , And Maan started his fake complaining, "Kya hai yar ye ,Tum aur tumhari late night icecream cravings,koi 1 baje bhi icecream khata hai kya?Aur wo bhi itni thand me .Wo bhi tumharra favourite flavour hi chahiye ,Ye 14 th shop hai ,Agar yaha nahi milti na ,To sach me mujhe khud hi icecream banakar tumhe khilani padti"



Maan frowned as they were walking on empty streets in delhi ...That too at 1 AM ...and In the chilling cold of December ending .



Voice:Ohho Maan ,Stop being a delicate baby ,Kuch nahi hoga .Icecream khane ka asli maja to thand me hi ata hai . Just look around Maan, Iss waqt sirf ham dono hai Yaha , Dekho road kitna khali hai ,Koi nahi hai yaha ...


Maan gave her ARE YOU SERIOUS LOOK ,"Ab road to khali hoga hi na,Sab tumhare jaise antic piece thodi na hai ,1 baje normal log na apne apne gharo me so rahe hote hai Na ki ese sunsan road pe Delhi se itna dur aate hai Sirf aur sirf apni favourite Butterschotch flavour ki icecream khane" .


The girl who was walking stopped and stood infront of him ,"Maan ,Mujhe to laga tha mere sath itna time spend karne ke bad maine tumhe thoda sa to romantic bana hi diya hoga" She smiled naughtily . "But I guess i was wrong .Tum to bas ...waise ke waise hi ho .Feel Maan...Just Feel ..Kitni acchi thandi hava chal rahi hai ,Feel the touch of this cold air ,And this icecream ,Aahh ...Its so amazing Maan, Its just beautiful".She said by wrapping her hands around her shoulders as if feeling the cold touch of the air [Guys don't think where the icecream gone , she finished it,U know na ...ICECREAM LOVERS ].



"Accha to mai unromantic hu ,To thik hai ,Abhi dikhata hu yahape kaun kitna romantic hai to ".Saying so,He leaned forward towards her but made a cute frown face as he realised he was stopped by something .He felt his soft palm resting against his chest .She had stopped him by keeping her palm against his chest".



Maan started blabbering "Kya yar tum bhi ,Abhi to itni achi philosophy class di romantic nature aur romance ke bare me ,Aur ab dekho kaun unromantic ban raha hai ,Matlab had hai,Pehle to khud hi mera romantic Maan wala mode ON kar diya aur ab ".


The girl was smiling at him mischievely, "Ohh ,Looks like ,Mr Maan Singh Khurana needs to eat lots of Badams ,don't worry Mr. Khurana I will do the honour ...So Mr Khurana don't you think aap kuch bhool rahe hai ,aapki punishment to abhi tak khatam nahi hui ...One arm distance ... Remember ...Kuch yad aaya Mr. Khurana".She grinned at him widely .And he looked at her helplessly with WHAT THE HELL look which caused her to burst in laughter And it caused him to get lost in her , in her melodious and carefree laughter ,in her beauty,in her innocence.


Khwaish's mumbling made Maan to come out of his trance. He rushed towards Khwaish ,and sat besides her. And he just smiled at his daughter, realising she was saying only ICECREAM PAPA ICECREAM BUTTERSCOCH KHWAISH WANTS BUTTERSCOCH .He kissed her forheard and sat there caressing her hairs, "haan princess, you will get your icecream tomorrow, now sleep princess". She again mumbled BUTTERSCOCH. Now this seriously made Maan laugh, "Hann baba , Butterscoch hi milegi , ab so jao". Khwaish smiled in sleep and here Maan too.



Maan got up from the bed as Khwaish went back into sleep and stood near his room's window, again blaming himself for remembering the things he don't want to remember. "Kyu ... Kyu kiya tumne esa ... Kya kami thi mere pyar me ... Jo tumne mujhe tumse nafrat karne ki saja di". A lone tear escaped from his eyes.




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I apologize for the delay and for mistakes, if there are any. I really couldn't steal time to edit it.

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