MANEET FF - TURTLEDOVES[DISCONTINUED]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the FF! waiting as well

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo for new story
maan loves his daughter but doesn't want her to like someone wonder who can be
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hi harshada..
congrats for new start ..
it seems interesting ...so maan has a daughter khawaish ...nice name ..maan love her a lot but don't want it to be like her mom ..want to know where is her mom ...geet ka intezaar hai mujhe ..

nice update
thank u ..
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Khwaish is angry on Maan for not fulfilling his promise. Maan pacify her and make her eat
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear
yr I m confused with title name what is it turtledove
prologue is interesting but sad to khwaish is crying
I guess geet is her mom
but y cant maan give her mom where she is nd that red color dilogue whose it is maans or geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi lovely title! superb prologue! well written! Maan loves his daughter so much! she is so cute! she is indeed daddy's princess! she is js like her mom! Maan doesn't want her 2 b like that! Maan upset! update soon
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Congo for new story
lovely prologue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting beginning!

Obviously Maan loves his daughter very much and he knows she needs a mother but he does not want his daughter to be like the mother.

Curious to see where you take the story.

Also, I never understood why ppl write summaries of what they just read! I wrote my view point not a summary! Strange.

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