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abazehere

@abazehere

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1061

Ch-18

Great update. This time from Maan's POV.

Maan is trying everything possible ,not jumping in to the conclusion .

After seeing the bonding between Geet and children he is regretting for not trusting Geet in past and accepting his wrong doing in the past as well in present.

It's better late than never...

Nicely written. ...you always write something that I had not thought of...

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abazehere

@abazehere

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1062

Ch-19

Good start Maan ... from Khurana foundations. ...Complete overhauling of Khurana foundation .

Maan remembering his past. Beautiful moments shared between Maan and Geet. Most important Maan for the first time shared his heart breaking past with any one...beautifully written.

Again misunderstanding...hope this time they will face each other and clear it.

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1063

nice part maan found the condition of kf and changed everything there.. he also started to realise about geet and the happy past moments .. geet was jealous hearing maan girlfriends and maan jealous of Romeo

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#1064

Maan escaped from the window and thinking about his past with geet. He kept following geet and found her in the park with the children. Maan saw everything and realised geet can never hurt him. He was shocked to know it as KF. wAITING FOR MORE😉

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#1065

hi thanks 4 da pm. Chap 18 -excellent update! terrifically written! Maan wants 2 be with Geet! he cannot concentrate! Maan wants her! he kisses her bt Shymlal interrupts! Maan livid! bt helpless! Geet leaves! Maan follows! he watches her! she is in an orphanage! Geet n Guddi share a lovely bond! Geet's thoughts well portrayed! her thoughts well portrayed! Guddi is 2 cute! Geet n the children mean a lot to each other! Maan emotional! he realises its Khurana Foundation! he is shocked!

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#1066

Maan is in guilt for distrusting geet and he thought abt his past. Awesome part

Looking fwd to read more😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#1067

hi thanks 4 da pm! Chap 19 - magnificent update, wonderfully written! Maan stunned seeing KF's condition! Maam resolves 2 make things better! he makes things happen! Maan has changed the place! hot food is arranged! the kids r happy! Maan made a difference! Maan thinks abt the past - he gave the ring 2 Geet! Maan sad when he talks abt hw his parents died! he doesn't want 2 spoil the evening! Geet wants 2 knw more! he tells her abt his parents! she consoles Maan! he tells her abt dadi! Geet assures Maan! Present - Maan dng tai chi! he thinks abt Geet! his thought well portrayed! Romeo mentions abt Sameera! Geet j! she wonders y she is upset! Geet livid! Romeo wants her help 2 propose 2 Tasha! she agrees! Romeo proposes n Maan sees! he is angry! Romeo senses the tension! Geet miffed with serial kisser Khurana! update soon

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1068

Chapter 18

lovely part. M Geet's unconditional love for those children was very touching. She found a reason basically to live again by loveing those kids. aan in his desire to follow Geet has seen something that has shaken him. He is shocked to know that the rundown place is infact KF. thanks for pm.

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1069

Ch 19:
The past on the beach is very beautiful, the way Geet made him confess about his parents and Dadima was very nice.
His heart now knows that his angel is totally innocent and does not have a cunning nature. She is pure and can be trusted totally...all he needs to do is figure out her feelings for him and move on with her..
Funny he cannot wait to make her his and she is trying to runaway from him...
Thnx

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1070

Part 19

Nice part. Maan shared his pain with Geet in the past and remembering that night made him realize that he has done wrong by not trusting Geet. He is still unaware of Pummi's deeds and thinks that Geet is upset because of his behaviour. Geet also burned in jeaousy on heraing about Sameera, pari and meera😆 waiting for next.