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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

HELLO GIRLS
U GUYS KNOW ME FROM DEVASTATED WHICH IS MINE AND PEARL COMBINED WORK
FOR NOW ISTARTED NEW ONE
HOPE U LIKE THIS ONE TOO
THIS STORY IS BASUCALLY A TAMIL MOVIE
WHICH I TURNED WITH MAANEET TOUCH
Thanks guys

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

GEET jerked open her hears,sweating furiously,again the same dream ,same her body lying lifeless on ground,,hearing cruises and accusing,, she tried to close her eyes and ears but no wain,,her words kept ringing in her ears
She desperately needed some one to console her but her hostel room was empty ,she searched for Meera her room mate but soon composed herself knowing she was still not back from her 2 days vacation.
At the same tym Meera stopped her car in petrol bunk,it was raining like cats and dogs but the deserted bunk gave her more creepy feeling.she was about to step down when some one came to her window scaring the hell out if her.
Boy: need any help.
Meera taking a deep breath seeing the creepy guy: yeah,make a full tank,saying she forwarded her card through the slit of window opening.
The guy took the card gave a look to her and went for his work,after few min he came back saying her card was working,she had to come to office to pay amount to owner saying he left.
Meera getting no other option went to the alone room far from her car making herself drench in rain,as soon as she stepped inside,the guy closed the door and came towards Meera ,before he could take any advantage,she pushed him hard on the wall and escaped from there in her car,the moment her car zoomed from the bunk,the guy came out side and shouted with all his energy.
Guy: SOMEONE WAS HIDING IN YOUR CAR...rrrt

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

IGNORE MISTAKES
Buddy me for pm

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 1
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 9 years ago

So Geet n Meera r friends. I think Geet really loves her that's why after such a horrible dream ( yet to be revealed ) she was searching for Meera when she already new she ll come after two days..That boy tricked Meera to come inside n as u wrote I thing precap is it a preplanned or just co-incidence...Congrets for ur new work n looking forward for it...Coz I think as a reader I ll remain active instead of writing own fictions.. 🥳

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masti_maaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice prologue..looks like some thriller story

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So Geet n Meera r friends. I think Geet really loves her that's why after such ahorribledream ( yet to be revealed ) she was searching for Meera when she already new she ll come after two days..That boy tricked Meera to come inside n as u wrote I thing precap is it a preplanned or just co-incidence...Congrets for ur new work n looking forward for it...Coz I think as a reader I ll remain active instead ofwriting own fictions..🥳</font>

Aww no no I am waiting for your work don't even thi k of not posting babe
Thanks dear for your comment

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: masti_maaneet
nice prologue..looks like some thriller story

Almost yes
Thanks dear

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Aww no no I am waiting for your work don't even thi k of not posting babe
Thanks dear for your comment

For me it doesn't matter who is a writer new or old ...My close one or I m reading that writer first time.. Just story attracts me.I never remain partial.If story attracts me I promote it too..I am a very bad reader n commenting on any ff I think after 6 or more months...Due to up n down in my life I had no excess to internet too...

I hope I ll remain on ur ff regularly 😆

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IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

For me it doesn't matter who is a writer new or old ...My close one or I m reading that writer first time.. Just story attracts me.I never remain partial.If story attracts me I promote it too..I am a very bad reader n commenting on any ff I think after 6 or more months...Due to up n down in my life I had no excess to internet too...

I hope I ll remain on ur ff regularly😆

😊
That's absolutely fine
Just guide me as u r amazing and i myself was a great fan na na AC of your work