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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: turbulence




Well didi, according to your hint, i have arrived at two conclusions.

There are two options regarding who the killer might be.

Number One - Maan himself could be the killer, hint is him safeguarding neha's photograph.

Number Two - Neha's younger sister is somewhere around, she survived and is taking revenge for her innocent sister's untimely death.

I hope one of my guesses would be right, but which one, even i can't say clearly.

I am eagerly waiting for the end of this story, hope there is more mystery to unfold.


Ahhh there u r!!!!!!
Your option was perfect but which one I will leave that to your imagination... 😉
U almost solved the mystery TILO...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

it show maan is killer buti think he's behind killer's


Hmmm let's see 😛
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mujhe khti hai sanju
kbhi khud ka devil pana dekha hai aapne

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Originally posted by: priya_21

mujhe khti hai sanju

kbhi khud ka devil pana dekha hai aapne

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part 8

Naina dragged geet with her following their frnds the look on naina face terrified them,she was shaking with the effect of running and her breaths were uneven she was more of gasping then breathing,when she felt they were alone naina left geet hand which made marks on her wrists with the amount of pressure the grip caused,geet totally ignored the pain but waited with baited breath for naina to spill the bean...for several minutes none spoke which eventually caused yash to broke the silence

Yash:naina,will u speak out,why we r here!!?

Still she was comtemplating her words to convey the things but without hurting geet,yday night argument was still fresh in her mind,she in no way wants to disappoint geet with more pain which they r alredy in,but she canttrust maan the way geet trust him blindly,she wants her frnd safe and sound after loosing three of her frnds she couldn't afford to loose the one who is more of sister to her than frnd.

Adi:naina u ok!?

This tym adi questioned seeing her engrossed in thoughts,pinky held her arm to give support,taking a deep breath she spoke directly looking at geet ,who was standing still...

.naina:I saw neha pic with maan sir!!

Pinky:neha!!!u mean...

Naina noded her head getting gasps from them but geet was still blank,she looked at something distant like she didn't hear naian words,

Seeing geet not reacting she repeated the morning incident,following yday night one too as they were unaware,even the argument she and geet had adi was first one to come out of schok with the events ...

Adi:naina,I agree with geet,mayb there r more to what we r seeing!?

Pinky:adi how can u say so!!??we lost pari yday and finding a bloodied knife in maan sir room was...

Yash:come on pinky,its just coincidence mayb ,maansir can never harm pari,if you think he did,then tell me why!?why he will kill pari!?

Geet:maan can never do that,I trust him!!

This sentence actually rubbed wrong side of naina,here she was trying to safe her and geet was ready to walk in trap,ok she was not so sure of maan couldn't geet give benefit of doubt to her words,the series of events showing maan was hiding something,she just wants geet safest along with their group.thinking to herself naina spoke in arude way..

Naina:fine then,I am wrong,ok I agree I was doubting on your maan,but geet what was he doing with neha pic!?

Geet:mayb he have a reson naina,he will for sure tell me...if not now...

Naina:geet plz,ok I am not asking to question maan,but plz just for yourself and ourself be safe with him if possible b on high alert plzz..

Geet was about to retort she in no way will behave that way around maan,when pinky all of a sudden screamed while touching her chain which she always wears...

Pinky:guys,u remember,neha always wore a pendant with letter M',I was soo fascinated by that thing,I made similar chain with pendant shaped A',for adi,when u guys asked me I said the name,but neha just said it was the name of the person she loved most,but she never took the name,neither we asked owing to her nature...

Adi:so,what is the point pinky...

Naina:she means mayb that M stands for MAAN.and we all knew neha did love someone...

Naina carefully placed her thoughts still looking a geet face which was more annoyed now,before anyone could speak the bell rang indicating them its tym they should move to their class,none spoke after that immersed in thoughts.but none noticed Arjun who came to apolozise naina for his behavior yday night,true what they did was un acceptable but death was never a punishment to them,he realized his mistake but now after hearing their convo,he took his steps away from them he heared them from the start their doubt on maan and a ghost of smile adorned his lips M pendant,well this was getting interesting M,the moment I lay my hands on you,god save the poor soul,u did play well ,u won their trust to a level they couldn't doubt u,but now...he shaked his head while moving away from the campus but before getting into the car his eyes did catch the glimpse of maan and sam,knotting hia eyebrows he moved towards them,thiking whats this new angel now!!??when he was at a feet distance he heared sam asking maan,who was blocking his way...

Sam:didn't u said your socalled gfrnd,where u were yday night,with whom and what r u doing,when she was crying her eyes out...she questioned him smirking

Maan:leave my way...

Sam:what if,I say what u were doing!?she asked winking.

Maan;smirked equally:she will never believe you,that too over me,she loves me a way too much u see...

Saying maan was about to move when sam said greeting her teeth

Sam:I will prove her,what I was saying..

Maan looked at her and gave a look like u r kidding and went away with a lopsided smile,but once he was away from her,his face turned pale,what if geet came to know...will she understand him...r ...he shaked his head with the thoughts eating him and went to class,while on otherside Arjun smirked thiking on maan words how true he was she did trusted him more than her frnds who was with her in all thick and thins,true love makes u blind...



It was dark chilly night he made his way towards the wodden house which was hidden in thick forest,he thumped himself on the hard bed ,his eyes were red like he didn't slept from days,he dare not close his eyes,the moment he thought of sleep his beloved face came infront of him,she was the one whohad given a family to him and she was the one who took it away too,she didn't took her life she took his life along with her parents who loved her most,the moment her death news reached her parents they lost their will to live, slowly the thought haunted them to the heights that costed their life,they were not only her parents ,his too once again he lost everything in life,it was not easy to loose your family twice,god cant b so cruel to him,more than god it was their fault who pushed his love,his neha to commit suicide,she did told about them but all thought it was her scaring nature which was making her more scared,she said the group did help her even they pick mostly on her,he ignored her words thiking its normal clg thing,but that was the worst mistake of his life...which costed him to loose her,when after yrs he was getting peace punishing the culprits,the love did enter again in his life,he was not sure how to respond to her love,but for sometym she did make him forget his revenge,why and for what he again entered the campus and played good frnd and lover,he did played he was in love,for sometym he was in dilemma btn love,life and revenge but now he choosed revenge over everything in his life,he was just hoping he will end everything soon...he will end every pain of his along with hers too...

Bohoth hua pyar aur dosti kah drama abh bas...this was the line he thought to himself before gave himself to darkness



precap :same
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part 8

Naina dragged geet with her following their frnds the look on naina face terrified them,she was shaking with the effect of running and her breaths were uneven she was more of gasping then breathing,when she felt they were alone naina left geet hand which made marks on her wrists with the amount of pressure the grip caused,geet totally ignored the pain but waited with baited breath for naina to spill the bean...for several minutes none spoke which eventually caused yash to broke the silence

Yash:naina,will u speak out,why we r here!!?

Still she was comtemplating her words to convey the things but without hurting geet,yday night argument was still fresh in her mind,she in no way wants to disappoint geet with more pain which they r alredy in,but she canttrust maan the way geet trust him blindly,she wants her frnd safe and sound after loosing three of her frnds she couldn't afford to loose the one who is more of sister to her than frnd.

Adi:naina u ok!?

This tym adi questioned seeing her engrossed in thoughts,pinky held her arm to give support,taking a deep breath she spoke directly looking at geet ,who was standing still...

.naina:I saw neha pic with maan sir!!

Pinky:neha!!!u mean...

Naina noded her head getting gasps from them but geet was still blank,she looked at something distant like she didn't hear naian words,

Seeing geet not reacting she repeated the morning incident,following yday night one too as they were unaware,even the argument she and geet had adi was first one to come out of schok with the events ...

Adi:naina,I agree with geet,mayb there r more to what we r seeing!?

Pinky:adi how can u say so!!??we lost pari yday and finding a bloodied knife in maan sir room was...

Yash:come on pinky,its just coincidence mayb ,maansir can never harm pari,if you think he did,then tell me why!?why he will kill pari!?

Geet:maan can never do that,I trust him!!

This sentence actually rubbed wrong side of naina,here she was trying to safe her and geet was ready to walk in trap,ok she was not so sure of maan couldn't geet give benefit of doubt to her words,the series of events showing maan was hiding something,she just wants geet safest along with their group.thinking to herself naina spoke in arude way..

Naina:fine then,I am wrong,ok I agree I was doubting on your maan,but geet what was he doing with neha pic!?

Geet:mayb he have a reson naina,he will for sure tell me...if not now...

Naina:geet plz,ok I am not asking to question maan,but plz just for yourself and ourself be safe with him if possible b on high alert plzz..

Geet was about to retort she in no way will behave that way around maan,when pinky all of a sudden screamed while touching her chain which she always wears...

Pinky:guys,u remember,neha always wore a pendant with letter M',I was soo fascinated by that thing,I made similar chain with pendant shaped A',for adi,when u guys asked me I said the name,but neha just said it was the name of the person she loved most,but she never took the name,neither we asked owing to her nature...

Adi:so,what is the point pinky...

Naina:she means mayb that M stands for MAAN.and we all knew neha did love someone...

Naina carefully placed her thoughts still looking a geet face which was more annoyed now,before anyone could speak the bell rang indicating them its tym they should move to their class,none spoke after that immersed in thoughts.but none noticed Arjun who came to apolozise naina for his behavior yday night,true what they did was un acceptable but death was never a punishment to them,he realized his mistake but now after hearing their convo,he took his steps away from them he heared them from the start their doubt on maan and a ghost of smile adorned his lips M pendant,well this was getting interesting M,the moment I lay my hands on you,god save the poor soul,u did play well ,u won their trust to a level they couldn't doubt u,but now...he shaked his head while moving away from the campus but before getting into the car his eyes did catch the glimpse of maan and sam,knotting hia eyebrows he moved towards them,thiking whats this new angel now!!??when he was at a feet distance he heared sam asking maan,who was blocking his way...

Sam:didn't u said your socalled gfrnd,where u were yday night,with whom and what r u doing,when she was crying her eyes out...she questioned him smirking

Maan:leave my way...

Sam:what if,I say what u were doing!?she asked winking.

Maan;smirked equally:she will never believe you,that too over me,she loves me a way too much u see...

Saying maan was about to move when sam said greeting her teeth

Sam:I will prove her,what I was saying..

Maan looked at her and gave a look like u r kidding and went away with a lopsided smile,but once he was away from her,his face turned pale,what if geet came to know...will she understand him...r ...he shaked his head with the thoughts eating him and went to class,while on otherside Arjun smirked thiking on maan words how true he was she did trusted him more than her frnds who was with her in all thick and thins,true love makes u blind...

It was dark chilly night he made his way towards the wodden house which was hidden in thick forest,he thumped himself on the hard bed ,his eyes were red like he didn't slept from days,he dare not close his eyes,the moment he thought of sleep his beloved face came infront of him,she was the one whohad given a family to him and she was the one who took it away too,she didn't took her life she took his life along with her parents who loved her most,the moment her death news reached her parents they lost their will to live, slowly the thought haunted them to the heights that costed their life,they were not only her parents ,his too once again he lost everything in life,it was not easy to loose your family twice,god cant b so cruel to him,more than god it was their fault who pushed his love,his neha to commit suicide,she did told about them but all thought it was her scaring nature which was making her more scared,she said the group did help her even they pick mostly on her,he ignored her words thiking its normal clg thing,but that was the worst mistake of his life...which costed him to loose her,when after yrs he was getting peace punishing the culprits,the love did enter again in his life,he was not sure how to respond to her love,but for sometym she did make him forget his revenge,why and for what he again entered the campus and played good frnd and lover,he did played he was in love,for sometym he was in dilemma btn love,life and revenge but now he choosed revenge over everything in his life,he was just hoping he will end everything soon...he will end every pain of his along with hers too...

Bohoth hua pyar aur dosti kah drama abh bas...this was the line he thought to himself before gave himself to darkness


precap:same as earlier
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