MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update, well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
wow Maan is angry but abt her warning or his actions
MSK will be mad with khan i guess

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Congrats !!😃

Superb update!!
Maan almost daily ends up in geet's place
and when he read Geet's note his anger raised at its peak!!
eagerly waiting for next part!!
Loved the update :D
Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Actually I love the way you wrote down
It's fun to read
So
Awesome update
As usual

Here you go

Woh tapkey hamrey ghar mein
Kya musibat hai
Kabhi hum unko toh kabhi
Apni bed ko aahai bhar k dektey hai
Na Janey konsi ghadi thi manhosiyat ki
K jab woh hum say Miley thai
Ab toh maaf karo
Neendey pori nahi hoti hamari
Humre bistar par sotey ho
Hum ko hi ankhey dekhatey ho
Socha tha k jaan choti ab
Par nahi tapkey woh humre
Nokrey ki jaga par bhi
Lai hai tarkey bhudha apney sath
Hum muskra k galiyah detey hai
Dil say ;)

I don't know how it comes out
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
That one for maan
This one for poor geet hehehehheh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Mind boggling Update Nils.. 👏
Geet is fed up bcs of his frequent visits to her house.. Samajh nhi ata Maan wahin q jata hai 😳 😲
Oops her note to him.. blew his head 😆
Ego Ki waat 😆
I didn't know she's some pet manager in a restaurant.. Great. 😃
Another mulaqat.. Maan ignores her 😳
Waiting for next..

Btw CONGRATULATIONS for new job.. I know it takes all of our time 😭
Okay me stop being senti 😆
Hearty CONGRATULATIONS.

@_SharmeenLuvsGC- hehehe dear..i love you enthu...sorry for delay...enjoy the part
Im really enjoying this story.. don't be sorry anyone can be busy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Lovely update geet by touching maan sees their future which makes her uncomfortable she staggers away cursing for touching him she couldn't help but stare at him he grumble when geet goes away geet scold him she prepares food extra for maan and sleep maan leaves his watch and a note maan also gets geets note telling him to stay away from her both burn each other notes maan is walking volcano and all his staff really terrified going near him geet is a pet manager in the same hotel maan comes for meeting geet is looking cute and sexy but seeing maan she crib though maan didn't see her but has a smile maan client oogling at geet making her cringe with disgust
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Lovely update first geet saw a vision about herself so she was little scared hmm atlast maan is sorry but that note which she gave previous day again make him angry maaneet is same place lets see if maan notice her or not thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

PART 7

The man nauseated her

Foul black ugly churning liquid... slime, Geet thought with the nervous smile intact, no outward reaction except

The man was staring hungrily at her

M-Mr Khan

His deep voice interrupts

The man has to leave her hand and look away

Geet pulls her hand banck and manges not to rub her hand clean

Aur jab Maan bole sabka attention has to be on him

She didn't look away

She was wary

Maan again indulges in conversation while sipping his drink and asking for a refill

She stared at the man, ready to run or jump in front of Maan to defend

She thought, she must be going mad and then anyway she didn't

She didn't realize when Maan raised the glass and pretended to take a sip and when he placed it back, all the while glancing at her stealthily

G- We are well equipped with things for your pet...

She says her usual pitch in a mechanical voice

Manager bhi Geet ko look de rah hai wondering if she is in one of her stranger moods hoping it doesnt affect the client

Maan suddenly looks at her directly for some seconds

Then without even moving his glare, he says to manager

M-Would the gal care to leave, we are middle of something very important

G- We will send someone to take care of your dog.

Geet turns around and manages to walk away, not run

Maan to kar raha tha ki Maan ko bhi pakad kar sath le chale away from that man.

He had no good intention towards any one

She doesnt know what he will do but she feels he wouldn't do anything good for Maan and whatever their matter would be, he would cheat double-cross backstab Maan if it would suit his purpose

Ab kuch ghanto mein meeting khatam hui

Geet was lingering around the parking lot with a huge dog with her

Dog chup chap Geet ke bagal baitha hai without leash

Maan aaya

It starts barking growling snarling, leaning forward, charging to have a go at him

Maan ne to dhyaan hi nahi diya apni tashan mein

Geet follows him telling the dog-shhh

The dog follows besides her growling slowly and softly whining

G- Hey Goldilock!

Maan ruka

He curled his fists

The dog starts barking sensing Maan's mounting tension and anger

M-BRUNO !

Maan roared

Itna bada dog bheegi billi bann gaya whining and hiding behind Geet

She puts hand on the dog's head

The dog sits and goes sedately happy, stops whining growling everything and in fact ignores Maan

Maan starts walking and gets in his car and Geet blurts

G- That guy...be careful...he's not good. He would ...just stay away from him

He looks at her...teeth clenched and jaw stiff

She turns to leave

But feels a sharp pull and Maan ke chest ke saath collision

She stiffens up, her eyes wide open, a shiver running through her body

His face just an inch apart and his breath on her

G-D..D...Don't

M-Who the hell, are you?

He hisses dangerously

G- No one...forget...f...forget me

She says shivering tension running through her body

She wanted to lean against him so badly, single thread of self-preservation keeping her away from him

M-Don't you dare...

He hisses murderously

He leaves her with a jerk

She releases a breath and sinks to ground taking huge gulps of air

He sits in his huge car and drives off in speed

5 minutes later she stands up shaking and grabs the dog for support and comfort

She goes back in, completes her work and goes home stopping for chips, peanuts, tea, milk and grocery

She is shaken by the incident.

She only knows how she stood back, even his scent was intoxicating

She opens the freezer and takes a peek inside

Sees his watch

Looks at it for five minutes then slams the door shut

Ab raat hui

Geet was nervously sitting in front of TV, glaring at the gate

Aaj Geet ne drill kara ke peephole install karwa liya tha

The night was silent

Kadmon ki awaaz aai...unrythemic footsteps

She rushes to the door and looks out of the peephole before someone can knock

Peephole se saamne ka dikhta hai par wahan to koi nahi

She keeps looking

Aaj wo already glove socks scarf sab laga kar baithi thi

She hears some slight mumbles

G- W...Who is it?

-hic-

G-Look, you better go away . This is not wise. Jao. Please jao

She hears drunk laughter and a drunk smirk

G- Jao Jao Jao

She says kicking the door

There is no answer just some mumbles...not directed at her just drunk mumbles

Geet can't keep herself from opening the door

As they say, curiosity killed the cat; she knows she is going to end up in same fate someday. Why can't she just let some drunk outside her house be?

He is sitting on floor with his bottle between his legs leaning on to wall

G- Why? Don't you get it? Can't you even try? I don't have enough money to buy another place!!

He is drunkly looking at her with a trance smile

G-Stop drinking

He takes a swig. It drips off, but it isn't alcohol. Its darker...it's red

It's his blood, his hand is badly bleeding

Geet looks and almost faints

Not wanting to touch as her brain tells her ad even befoul that though completed, she was on her knees holding his bleeding hand choking back a lump in her throat

He was drunkly glaring at her

G- This is madness...don't you see madness? Come with me

Holding his shirt from front she pulls him

He raises his hand and wraps a wild strand of her hair on his finger and puts it behind her ear

She feels the shiver all over her body

With his hand touching her ear she knows now why his hand was bleeding

M-G..G..Geet...

His lips curve in a drunk smile as he looks at her and tilts his head at an angle

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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Superb update
Looks like Maan has developed this habit of showing at Geet's door every night.

The Maan seems to be suffering from.dual personality.

Waiting for next

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