MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
nice update
maan angry on geet n ask who is she
but in night come to her place again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
nice ud
maan again and again in geet place like he's own it geet cooking fr him but assuring hr self that she's not doing it fr maan he left wen she was sleeping and left not and watch
both burn each other's note
geet working in hotel and geet didn't like man with maan is dealing she told him he's cheater maan didn't like hr interfering in his matter but again at night he's at geet place

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Mind boggling Update Nils.. 👏
Geet is fed up bcs of his frequent visits to her house.. Samajh nhi ata Maan wahin q jata hai 😳 😲
Oops her note to him.. blew his head 😆
Ego Ki waat 😆
I didn't know she's some pet manager in a restaurant.. Great. 😃
Another mulaqat.. Maan ignores her 😳
Waiting for next..

Btw CONGRATULATIONS for new job.. I know it takes all of our time 😭
Okay me stop being senti 😆
Hearty CONGRATULATIONS.

@_SharmeenLuvsGC- hehehe dear..i love you enthu...sorry for delay...enjoy the part
Im really enjoying this story.. don't be sorry anyone can be busy



Thanks a lot for your wishes dear...and special thanks for understanding
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Congratulations for new job👏. All the best.



Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: hira2010

Actually I love the way you wrote down
It's fun to read
So
Awesome update
As usual

Here you go

Woh tapkey hamrey ghar mein
Kya musibat hai
Kabhi hum unko toh kabhi
Apni bed ko aahai bhar k dektey hai
Na Janey konsi ghadi thi manhosiyat ki
K jab woh hum say Miley thai
Ab toh maaf karo
Neendey pori nahi hoti hamari
Humre bistar par sotey ho
Hum ko hi ankhey dekhatey ho
Socha tha k jaan choti ab
Par nahi tapkey woh humre
Nokrey ki jaga par bhi
Lai hai tarkey bhudha apney sath
Hum muskra k galiyah detey hai
Dil say ;)

I don't know how it comes out



Ek hi shabd lajawab...awesome creativity you have dear...kya khoob!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Lovely update the man the was lusting at geet she didn't get good visions from him even maan didn't like his stare geet was very uncomfortable but somehow leaves maan is fuming geet tried to warn maan as she vision him backstabbing maan but maan didn't heed geet shivered with his closeness geet was shaken she again dreadfully awaiting drunk maan visit she was frustrated but she still let him in maan was bleeding he had hurt himself geet was very worried for him
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
geet abb toh tu gayi...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Wow what an update. Love the way they collide with each other. She want to help him but dont want to be in touch with him in fear of future.waiting for more parts. Thanks for pm n treat update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Part 6
Lovely update.
Maan again ended up at geet's place and geet again took care of him but this time maan left a sorry note for geet.Maan got geet's note and was hell frustated.Again geet met maan at her workplace but maan paid her no heed.Geet felt disgusting after interacting with Mr khan and she got bad vibes from his stare.
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 7
Fantastic update.
Geet warned maan about Mr khan but he ignored her and drove off.In between geet collided on maan and she was affected by their proximity which made her feel uncomfortable.At home too she was sitting nervously and even drilled a peep hole but again maan came there .But his hand was bleeding and geet couldn't hold her back and tried to nurse the wound and as soon as maan's finger brushed her ears she came to know the reason why he was wounded.
waiting to know what will happen next.
Thanks 4 pm

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