MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 75

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Posted: 7 years ago
crazy conversation between maan and geet...maan cannot convince geet that he will not leave her and go ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
U can't blame maan too
As he said he is healing himself with the betrayal of sam
But his heart knew he always came to geet
Bcoz deep inside he loves geet
But still he couldn't put himself in a place to say he loves geet
Nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi all, thank you so much for contributing in the discussion. I am so proud of you all, you all read between the lines so beautifully...so glad to have you...lots of love


Part 53

G-Shut up I am not happy but I found that cute. I mean I always thought of you as macho...I mean I haven't seen you actually crying...never...O mean Tara...and all...drunk yes...but cry no...so...

M- I knew it was about that. Had I cried for Tara, I wonder what would have taken to convince you; maybe you'd have me streaking with sign board declaring "I love Geet

She starts laughing

Thode passengers dekhne bhi lagte hain

They land

Bhagte-bhagte finally he goes to office next day even though it was Sunday as itne din se saara kaam pending tha

Geet ne socha ki kuch nahi hai karne ko...usko to kaam par monday se jana hai...

Phone karke poocha ki aa jaun? They said ki nahi nahi you rest everything is fine here

Geet apna samaan unpack kar rahi thi ki ek diary si giri

Geet ne socha ki ye kis ki aagai

Khola to Maan ki handwriting

Ek baar socha ki nahi, nahi padhna chahiye it's wrong. Poochongi kya hai, if he has nothing to hide then he'll tell me and agar nahi bataya...toh I know what he is hiding anyways...his hidden feelings for Tara'

Geet rakhne lagi par diary mein se kuch parers nikalke gir gaye

Geet ne socha ki ye kya hain ye? Love letters or something?

Uthaya to dekha it is that picture which the ferry man took of them, looking away from each other to opposite sides

And then wo to dikh gaya...she didnt mean to pry...

Geet ne socha meri photo hai main hi le rahi hoon

Wo pic hatai to ek paper mein pencil sketch dikha Geet ka

She is shocked

It's the latest sketch of her looking angry and frowning and pouting in the airplane seat when he said I have to go to toilet excuse me

Geet ka muh khula hua!!! ki what??!!! what is this!! why is my sketch here and when did he draw this and I was not pouting like a kid...I am more mature

Phir socha ki ye to mera hi sketch hai toh main lekar chuppa deti hoon warna mera baad mein mazaak udayega ye dikha kar

Geet ne sketch hataya to next dikha wo bhi usi ka...

She is confused ki mere sketch kya kar rahe hai.. yahan par...

She sits down diary side rakhi ek ek hata kar dekha

The next one she sees is of herself as the Native American woman Miara'

Though Maan never saw the vision as Geet saw but he tried to draw what Geet said and what he imagined...

Geet looks at the sketch

She frowns pehle to ki chehra to uska hai par...

She whispers phir a small smile comes over her lips

Miara'

Next sketch is of Geet as Sundara

She knows it's Sundara

Geet nishabd ho gai dusri pic dekh ke

She is bewildered...can he read minds or the telepathy between them actually does exist

Next sketch is of Geet standing on the deck of the cruise ship just before when she told him that she was going to leave him and threw away the mangal sutra and the ring and asked him for the divorce, just before tthat when he had come behind her and she had turned looking as if she had swollen a hot acid... lonely at end of world

She looks at the sketch and the scene floats in front of her ice. How she felt when she had thrown her mangal sutra and ring

She feels a lump in her throat

Next is the sketch of her in the hospital...looking at the flowers smiling being happy

She smiles again as she remembers the gesture...smiles that he remembers and notices these tiny expressions too

Then there is a sketch before when the police had comes and Geet had looked so frightened

But more than that there is something more; somehow it gave the feeling that he wanted to help her not be so frightened

Then there is this one of Geet slipping off her nighty in tht doorless suite. Its blurred one as if drawn more from imagination and with some reality coz he had turned away before he had seen much

Then there is the one of her sleeping...curled near him...her head resting on his arm

Geet never expected there would be so many sketches of her

Geet ne excitement aur khushi mein diary khol hi li...

There is not much written inside the diary mostly random sketches...its more like a scrap book

Though he did write that:

I met this crazy girl today running in front of my car and then stopped me, got my car stolen'

She is smiling

She murmurs jhootha'

Then there is just one page, there is just one word...'Geet'...The day he got to know her name; and the cartoon she drew of him stuck under it

She touches her name; as his hands which have written her name have given it a new meaning

She notices the pencil is smudged and a bit darkened as if touched many times. She touches it and as thru some force she could feel his touch

Then there is one sketch of her sleeping on the sofa with her gloves and all on

She wonders...he remembered so many details after getting wasted

And in Diary its written

"My Geet thinks she is psychic witch or something..."

"... i think maybe she is..."

But under it is the sketch of hers with her dogs...smiling and being happy when he saw her at the hotel where she worked at

He did refer to her as my Geet' even after she said I am a clairvoyant and I have visions...you should run in opposite direction

She is reading "My Geet again and agian

She looks at her sketches made by him and thinks she never saw herself look so pretty...she never knew she could ever look so nice or is it him who makes her look good

Then there are some sketches of the time they were together...the first time they went out

Geet is actually surprised...that he remembers he actually remembers every small details

There is the one, of her looking at him just before they had made love with passion and fire in her eyes. She looks sexy and hot even thought she is wearing normal clothes; but to Maan the clothes just look a bit too molding and hugging to her showing her curves to perfection, her lips slightly parted...

Geet didn't even know she looked like that but to him she did...and so the events afterwards happened

She is looking at a new side of herself

She is surprised that she had these many side to her or was it all just Maan's imagination?

Soon after Tara came, Maan wrote

"Tara came back!! Who ever thought she would.."

But that's all he wrote

Geet kuch pal ke liye ruki

There was sketch of Geet looking heartbroken...it was badly drawn

Phir 2 sketch ke bad likha hai ki

"Geet is always sad.. I wish..."

Bas itna hi hai...

Uske baad sketch hai Geet ka when they woke up after his bachelor's night. The first moment just before they had realized that it's Tara outside...the look on Geet's face...a slightly scared slightly trusting... big eyes...

Geet crushes the paper slightly as she remembers her sorrow when her hopes were crushed, when Tara accused her and Maan was mum even if they did wed

She shuts her eyes for a moment and a tear dampens the paper

They got married and he wrote "I got married to my Geet instead of Tara" and there's a sketch of her in the bridal suit...he wanted her to be happy marrying him so he drew her a happy bride a smile on sweet lips but sad well of eyes

She looks at the sketch blankly. She herself doesn't know she ought to be happy or sad. Her fingers slightly touches 'my Geet'

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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan noticed her every expression
he can do sketch that must be surprised Geet
even all is only her pics her small small moment he captured all
and their past too !!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
but I'm still mad on him for keeping mum when Tara was abusing her badly
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update... maan expressed his feelings through his sketches.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb
Maan spills his heart in sketches
My Geet is what he has addressed her throughout n for which Geet is happy
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet has always been there
Noticed by maan
It can be easily seen in his sketches
Nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
splendid update! well written! thanks 4 da pm!

glad Geet saw the sketches! each sketch is of Geet! she is surprised and happy esp when he addresses her as My Geet!

his feelings are conveyed on the sketches!

update soon

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