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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 54 (Last Part)

And then he wrote that

Geet is still so sad... its my fault.. I dont know how to make her happy'

But there are no more sketches...

She shuts the diary

There was no mention of Tara; just one entry about few years ago about Pratham ki he met him...and there are a sketch or two or of scenery...mountains...there wasn't much for him to write to put to remember...nothing new to record

Before that there is one entry about the fact that Tara ran away with Pratham

There are some events ki he is trying to convince Tara to marry him and stuff but no sketches...and it's more like he is writing about some other two people and not himself and Tara...there is no my' before Tara

Stuff like:

Asked Tara out for dinner. I don't whether she will come'

And there is like weeks between entries...

I am trying to convince a girl called Tara to date me'

Then about Pratham that

Met Pratham again, he is single once again'

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Maan kaam kar raha tha office mein

Intercomm baja

Receptionist-Sir

M-Yes?

Receptionist-Sir, Mrs Khurana has come...should I send her in?

M-Yes. Don't stop her outside again

Bolke khada hua, goes to open the door for Geet wondering what's wrong... if anything was badly wrong he would have felt it, she would have called so he isn't worried

Geet aai...thodi lost si..pehli baar Maan ke offce aai naa she didn't realize ki ye sab ab uska hai

Maan ne gate khola to saamne Geet

She is bewildered...wo idhar udhar dekhte hue aarahi thi..aur saamne Maan...she almost bumped into him

He holds her hand ki ao ao anadar ao

Brings her inside, gate band kiya

M- Kya hua hai? Tum yahan achanak?

Geet dekhti hai thoda coyly

G-Main baith jaun?

M-Haan-haan

He makes her sit

Pulls the chair next to her

M-Kya hua?

G-Kuch nahi...aise hi...was just...missing you

He looks at her closely

M- You...were missing...me? Are you ok?

G-Why...can't I?

She pouts cute wala

G-You were not?

M-I was not what?

G-Not missing?

M-Of course I was...I mean...what is this about?

He asks touching and checking her forehead

M-You seem different

She chuckles and impulsively and quickly pecks his cheek

She pouts again...

G-You don't even shave properly

M- I was in hurry...though I did brush properly you can check...

He says sliding her out of chair into his lap

Geet blushes a little

G-In the office?

She wraps her arms around his neck

M-Why not? I locked the door

G- Cameras?

M-hmmm...no. No cameras

He puts his lips on hers and gives her a small kiss

M-Yes I was missing you...I was wishing we were on a Greek beach...loitering around

G- Oh I wish so too

She brushes her lips to his

He says kissing her back

M- .Maybe we just go somewhere on the weekend?

He pulls her away a little looking deep into her eyes

M- You are going to stay aren't you...

She smiles touching her nose to his

G-What do you think...

She says in low whispering voice

M-I think you won't...you'll stay with me forever... and I do mean ever...but then I don't want to take you for granted...

G-Good boy...

She bites his ear...slightly

He moans and runs his hand over her chest kissing her neck

M-well...you'll stay?

He asks in between his kisses

She nods

G-Forever

M- Geet I want to confess something...

He says sitting on the floor on his knees

M- I...I know...I am such an introvert...can never express my feelings...even to myself...but one thing I realized...you kept on asking me what I had with Tara...I couldn't answer you...convince you properly...I asked myself the same question...What I had with Tara...It was ego...sometimes you can be stuck at something that it becomes part of your ego...you don't even realize you don't need it anymore...that you never needed it...like a child who is adamant to have a toy but can't have it...but sees that as his defeat and chases it and chases it till he is a teenager and then when he actually gets it...he realizes he never wanted that toy for himself...he wanted it for satisfying his ego...sometimes your need to satisfy your ego is so high that you become blind to your real feelings...then at last you realize that ego is only destroying you...but in my case when I realized...it was too late...I had already hurt you in worst possible manner...I apologize Geet...

His eyes are moist

She looks into his eyes

G-Shhh shhh...I know...I know...I am sorry too...I...

M- Shhh

He hugs her tightly

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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update
finally geet decide to stay with maan knowing he only loves her
maan also confess his feeling n hearrt to geet
both are happy
lovely story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Last part

tremendous update! well written!

all ends well!

Maaneet together! glad Maan confessed!

awesome end!

thanks for a wonderful story!

so post epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
are we going to get an epilogue?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan confessed he was with Tara only to satisfy his ego
N apologized for it
Nice part
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Posted: 7 years ago
I love the ending
finally his clear justification which I liked
even liked that he still fears she would go
that's good he should take her for granted
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Posted: 7 years ago
loved this story...one of interesting story here
it's was full unexpected twist and won't lie you made me cry many times
so many times I wanted to kill Maan
will miss it but happy to see happy ending
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue tou milega na 😲
Awesome ending Nilz 😳
Will miss this story.. she was a psychic and he was lost..
Both get their much deserving happy ending 😳
All the best..
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely end..
hope to read epi soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm. Lovely update.
Love confession of maan is so beautiful. It is very hard for introvert ppl to open up about their feelings n if they are doing so for someone then it shows that person means alot for them. So is geet valuable for maan not tara. Happy endings but seems unfinished. Plz give an epilogue to complete it.

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