MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 73

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Posted: 7 years ago
his marrying tara so irritating
he was really dumb
geet's anger justified
but in this life they deserve to be happy ending
thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part
Maan want to be with geet n have a family
Geet que about maan accepting to marry Tara
Hope this convoy didn't make geet mad at him
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Posted: 7 years ago
yes Tara was in every birth to separate them even this time too
I think they are more strong now and Tara can't do her way
may be they will get their happy ending
now his topic on marrying Tara even im still angry on him for that
usne Geet ko kitna rulaya...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter



@Vaidhumom: Thanks for liking the fic...hope to see you as a regular reader

@keepdreaming: Thanks for being the sweetheart you are...and showering me with your love through your recommendations...this little convo made my day


your every story is unique from Jaded Prince to blind dating and now this ...keep writing
p.s do post index of your story if possible
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan Geet still arguing on tara when both knows that chapter is close they mov on
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh no they are back to square one again fighting 😆😡
I don't know if I'm feeling angry or pity on them 😆
Nice to see some part of your life in this chapter 😃
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 52

G-And it was ok to go back on my commitment?

She looks away disgustedly

M-As far as I remember I made no promises. I wasn't in hurry to make promises like I did all those years ago with Tara. I wanted to take my time with you, heal myself first

G-No promises? No commitment?

She makes a face as she is in front of the filthiest creature

M- Well that is what the truth is. If you hate it so much, if you hate me so much then I hope you do it to your core

G-The truth is that you are an escapist and you may again leave for another better lady. Truth is you are not man enough

Maan gives Geet a long hard look

She doesn't care

M- A pity you didn't think of all that last night so you could have avoided this regretful pillow talk

She narrows her eyes

G-What a dreadful jerk you are...how dare you say such a thing like that...bringing that topic...and you should be grateful I allowed a pervert like you

M-Grateful? I see how it is then...you need not dole out your affections any more...to make me feel any more grateful. I am who I am. I never said I wasn't this type of man; if you fell in love with me...if you came to me last night, you came with your eyes open

G-oh my! You make it sound like I am desperate for you, when I am not

M-No you are not; what you want is a divorce. And when you don't want a divorce you make me grateful. Don't do me anymore favors in future dear wife

G-Yeah...I guess you don't need my favors...you will have many other women to do the same

M-I never was with Tara and I hadn't been with a woman since Tara except you. If you think I am that loose a man, you really have either a myopic vision or really low self esteem

G-Well...you were with no other women coz you were always too drunk to help yourself on your feet

M-You mean you prefer if I had been with others rather than being drunk?

Geet looks away outside the window

M-Cant decide? Or you wish that I hadn't grieved that long ...That's what sticks in your craw that much isn't it? It took so long to get over Tara while over you I got so easily when Tara came back...and of course my saying that I wasn't over you is a statement you don't believe. Tell you what; lets meet after 5 years, let's see how I am then, am I grieving you more than I did Tara? How much more difficult is it for me to get over you than Tara? And if the result satisfies you, maybe you can think about coming back

Geet rolls her eyes

G-Yeah like you will be that stupid to do that immaturity all over again

M-of course I might be a drunk invalid then

G-Shut up..Maan!

M-well what do you have to lose huh? As it is today you don't believe that I wouldn't leave you; maybe some years later you will believe me and if you think I will find someone...then I will find someone and according to your theories I would leave you to go to her. It's a win-win for you

Geet chup, lips in a thin line with a frowned face

Maan bhi chup hai

Phir bola

M-You have as long as you want to decide what you want

G-Decide what?

Geet ne Maan ki taraf dekha

M-If you want to stay...you know how I feel for you... if you decide to leave... I'll give you a divorce with hope 5 years down the lane you'll come to check on me

G-Yeah...check on you blah blah...you are talking like a school kid

M- You are the one with all the doubts

He shrugs

She doesn't answer

G-I heard you were crying on the cruise...why?

M-Why should I answer you? You don't believe what I say anyway

G-Shut up and answer!

M- I don't think you deserve an answer after what you asked me earlier

She gasps

G-I don't deserve an answer?

M- You don't

G-Who else are you answerable to then?

M-You seem to have plenty of answer to that question... apparently I am a loose man who easily falls for women the moment I am sober

Geet takes a deep breath

G-ok...I am sorry I sad that. Now answer

M-I have learnt from you that a sorry is not enough

She pouts as he is irritating her

G-Stop that

She hits his arm

M-Excuse me...

Maan uth kar bathroom chala jata hai

Geet doennt let him

Pakad liya haath

M-You want to come too?

Geet pulls him

M-Let go of my hand Geet I need to use the restroom...where am I gonna go? Jump off the frigging plane? You don't scare me that much

G-You can go after a while, sit now

M-You don't know that. If I went earlier you would have called me an... escapist...

She pulls him with all her might

Maan jerks her hand away and goes

He comes back in few minutes

Geet mooh banake bathi hai

Maan bhi aakar baith gaya

G-Kitne arrogant ho tum

M-Not wanting to wet myself in public...how does that make me arrogant?

Geet can't help but giggle

M-Go to sleep...rest for a while

He says running his hand through her hair

She looks at him then keeps her head on his shoulder

G-Answer

Her face is close to his

M-Something got in my eye...men don't cry

G- Ha ha ha that was the lamest excuse

M-Do you know why to call it an excuse then? And who said I was crying anyways...

G- That greek guy Xerus

M-I don't know who this guy is

G-You don't know him? He is Talos's friend

M-Yeah well he doesn't know me either...look Geet; what does it matter? People can cry on will, if I shed some tears or not doesn't mean anything

G-Maan...don't give me these big theories...I just want the reason..honest. Fine..you don't wanna share...then ...great

M- I thought you were going to leave me forever...you took off your wedding ring and said you wanted a divorce as soon a swe get back

G-So?

M-All that made me pretty sad

G-You were crying because of that?

She looks at him with amazement

He shrugs

She can't suppress her giggles; haath se mooh chupake has rahi hai

Maan mumbles sadistic'

She gasps

G-I am not! Why are you saying that?

M- You are pretty happy with the news that I was actually crying... what does that make you in English dictionary?

G-Shut up I am not happy but I found that cute. I mean I always thought of you as macho...I mean I haven't seen you actually crying...never...O mean Tara...and all...drunk yes...but cry no...so...

M- I knew it was about that


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Hey Guys, need a help from you. Can you tell me the IF's PM limit. I mean how many people can I PM in one go?

Secondly and more interestingly, I have a question for you readers;

Do you think Maan truly loves Tara or Geet. If yes why, if no why. Lets have an interactive discussion

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Hehe their convo is fun
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..

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