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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Interesting and Fabulous start

Geet has some power which enables her to know about any person
she dislikes this power but now she has ended in front of Maan's car he a person that once was happy but failed in love now has no emotions for sentiments of love

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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting start
maaneet both r different
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Posted: 8 years ago
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geet saved maan on right time.
maan is angry on geet as his car is stolen.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice ud
geet saved maan but he thought she's with that gang too but inspector told him who she is and told about wat happened to his car
maan was drank wen driving so he make story to b clean in front of police
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 3

He said that he and Geet are acquainted, he was at her place and they were drinking. They heard a car passing, dekha ki someone has stolen his car and well that's all. He wasn't drinking and driving or planning to drive

Since he was feeling benevolent to khud par bhi thoda ehsaan kar diya

Police asks few rude questions about their relationship but Maan maintains the stoic blank, hit me I'll enjoy it face and just says ki Geet had fainted. He only brought her along coz she needs a doctor to look at her

Lady police were trying to wake her up and ek phatka maara gaal pe to wake her up but she was out like a light bulb fainted, she isn't registering anyhitng

M-She should be taken to a hospital, she fainted. There is no need to hit her

Hi own reaction to stop them from slapping her was annoying him, usse kya koi iss ladki ko chata marea, kuch bhi kare

Police says ki fine we will talk to your car insurer that it was stolen. You take away your girlfriend

Maan ka to mann tha to let police take care of her and get be rid of her lekin can't help

Another police car escorted to them to the hospital

Geet to admit kiya

Policed constable ruka to saath mein Maan ko bhi rukna pada

Doctor ne kaha ki stress and skipped meals, thats all, drip laga di hai she will be fine. Overnight rokenge, fill in the forms

Maan ko Geet ka kuch pata nahi hai, pura naam tak nahi pata. First name bhi bas isiliye ki police operator ne phone par mention kiya tha

Maan ne form pe kuch bhi kuch bhi bhar kar paid the bill in advance aur nikal gaya, not wanting anything more to do with her

Waise bhi next day uski important meeting thi

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Maan meeting ke beech mein tha ki call aayi hospital se ki the patient is fine and ready to be released, please come and collect her

Maan ne kaha ki taxi mein bithao or bhej do

Sir aapka contact and address hai, wahin bhej de kyunki patient is still a bit saddled and has been given sedatives coz she did not have proper rest due to improper sleep and there are some medicines too"

Maan ne kaha fine fine

Bakwas level kam hai uska

Waise bhi meeting se zyada kal ke incident par uska dhyan tha

He left the meeting

Wahan bhi log shocked ki aese kaise

Maan gaya hospital

Wahan she was at the outgoing patient room. Geet ko change karaake ready kar dia tha

She sitting in a wheelchair looking frail

He noticed now ki she was a bit weak and uske dark circle bhi the; kal to kuch notice nahi kiya uske ke bare mein, aaj register ho raha hai

A nurse helps Geet to Maan's car and puts her inside

Seat belt bhi nahi lagai and he starts driving

Address toMaan ko bhi pata nahi tha, but she had said nearby to socha ki sunsan sadak par ghar to dikh hi jayega

He drives occasionally glancing at her

She was slumped in the seat

Geet is having another of her dreams where the lady was serving her a red colored drink in a gothic disco

Geet look around

She is in this dark club with meat music and people dancing

She looks down

She is in tight leather corset top and short tight black vinyl skirt

Her hand reaches out to take the drink inspite of her minds warning and he knocks back the drink in one gulp

A hand comes... a big storm manly hand, clean biffed nails, and warm looking hand

A deep baritone voice comes from some distance- "let's dance"

The lady says, take the hand and you will know

Geet jumps awake now and a man's face leaning very close over her

Seconds later she registers that the face is moving its lips and so she should be hearing voices

Pop goes in her ears and the white voice disappears replaced by the voice she had very recently heard...an arrogant irritated emotionless accusatory voice yet a deep baritone voice

He was shaking her by her shoulder once again

M- Finally!!!!!!!! Get up and get the hell out of my car

Geet chup blank sensing, waiting for some feeling...anything

Abhi she is ignoring Maan

She is waiting ki generally lady ke appearance ke baad kuch hota hai

Par kuch nahi hua, koi feeling nahi aayi, koi strange urge nahi hua

She opens her mouth licks her dry lips

She didn't even utter any strange phrase

Finally Geet smiles ki haan sab theek hai kuch nahi hoga, badi wali full joyful smile, spreads her hand knocking him away

To realize hua ki oh my ye to kal wala banda hai and wo uss bande ki gadi mein kya kar rahi hai

With an eye blink she is back to her guarded blank face

She realizes ki uske haath halka sa shake kar rahe hhain but its normal after her dream

G- Why am I here?

She asks very calmly as if she is used to waking up at strange places with strangers hovering over her

She is Ms Cool, itne saal ki prctice hai poker face ki.. .she lose it in tension and mounting feeling but when nothing is pressing her sixth sense she is in total control

Right now sea can give Maan run for his money for coldblooded logic

M- You fainted and I am dropping you home

G- But your car was in the accident. Whose car is this? Are you a thief?

She didn't save a thief last night, did she? She thinks. All that effort to save a criminal, she hopped not

Maan is grim faced, lips drawn in a tight sneer

M-Get. OUT

She scrambles for the lock

Geet is like khul ja khulja, aankhen Maan par, haath gate par...not having much success, rather panic

She doesn't like being around people and Maan ke aorund jo uska ka reaction tha utna weird kabhi nahi hua and she would rather not got through that again.

Usse dheere dheere recollection ho rah ahai last night ki

Maan curses and leans towards her

Geet shrinks back

Maan avoiding any contacts gives her disgusted look as if he would even want to even think of raping her or anything

He reaches for the door lock and click gate khula

Geet giri

As she was leaning against the door he knew she was going to fall. He didn't know whether to stop her from falling or not

As she was falling, in the impulse he puts his arm round her waist to save her and leaves her instantly as if she is burning cracker

She scrambles out but she has to know who he is so she would avoid him better this way in future

G- What's your name?

He closes the door and vrooms away not bothering to answer

Maan ne Geet ko uske ghar ke smane hi choda hai as he looked round aas paas hi hona chaiye tha

Geet walks into her home

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Geet ghar chali gai

Sahi rest-vest liya

Raat hui,

Raat ko aaram se khana-wana bana rahi thi aur book padh rahi thi

Kaafi raat ho gai khana khane baithi ki bohot zor se knock hua

Geet baukhla gai ki uske ghar kaun ayega, wo bhi itni raat ko and generally she is never surprised

She is getting some weird feeling

Aur ye achanak kais eho gaya. Aaj to wo sab acha-acha bhi feel kar rahi thi

She asks from the door ki kaun hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start geet has some power thats quiet interesting hmm maan arrogant businessman doesnt care about emotion
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Maaneet meeting geet came out of nowhere infront of his car but saved him from accident police also know her maan thinks her asa thief both r in police station
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice part maan wanted badly to get rid of her but had to admit her hospital geet is having strang dream who is at her door
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice update
maan is very rude to geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Maan took geet to hospital as he had no option in front of police.later he drops her home next day.Again geet gets a dream of that old woman but she feels everything is normal.She asked maan his name but he went away without telling anything.Maan is so rude here.Now someone came to her house late at night,wondering if its maan!

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