MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

869

Views

72.5k

Users

58

Likes

3.3k

Frequent Posters

NilzStorywriter thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

PART 17

Maan let gaya ankhein band karke trying to find some peace

She leaves

Lekin hospital ke bahar aakar laga ki wapas jaye; bas ek bar pooch le ki how serious they are; but then nahi galat question...

She hopes ki next time she finds ki ye bandi kahan hai; kabhi mill gai to achhe se sunaegi... aise kaise she can let go of him and not look after him. Wo bechara bimaar hospital mein hai and this Tara isn't taking care of him, not feeding him

Geet ko super wala gussa araha hai Tara par par basically she is just plain jealous... gussa to khud ko reasons dene ke liye hai

She goes to back to her home

She couldn't sleep a wink the whole night

Subah hui to taiyar hui , safai khana then off to work

Aur 7 din ho gaye

Maan ki tabiyat bigadti jaa rahi hai and mystically she suffers his suffering

Despite all the proper sleep and food and stuff, she has worse nightmares, sometimes she just can't fall asleep staring at the gate and she feels a weird thirst all the time and pain too. Jab pain uthta hai she and he both can't help crying; and there is this incecent throbbing always, sometimes so intense that she has to sit down, sometimes just there in the background like beating pulse

Geet hotel jaa rahi thi aur trip hoke gir gai aur moch aa gai

Hotel pohonchi limping

Wahan par she got a few sympathetic looks that too from strangers par as usual mostly the staff ignored her

Kam bhi uska continous desk par khada hona, fir animals ke sath ghumna aur chal chal kar har ek ko check karna

The receptionist calls her

Receptionist-Miss Handa????

G-Yeah?

Receptionist-A call for you

Geet is super surprised...

G - Are you sure?

Receptionist-Yes

Phone de diya Geet ko

G- Hello?

M-Why don't you use the mobile! Stupid gal...are you ok?

G- Tum!!!! Of course I am... I don't... why are you asking me if I am ok?

M- I...I just felt

G- Are you a psychic?

M-No, not at all

G- You felt what?

M-I just felt you are in pain

G- You...

Geet grabs a seat to sit down

M-Are you ok?

G- I twisted my ankle. I am fine now...you...you ...how did you...what is going on!!

She says panicking a little, her feeling pain and things from others happened sometimes and from Maan a lot but it's never been other way around

G-You aren't taking care of yourself, are you?

M-You??? Sprained your???? Why are you in the hotel??? Go home; take rest and why the hell you don't have the mobile I gave you! Next time I catch you without a phone...then...I...will...I will..will

G-You will nothing!! You aren't taking care of your health either and you are not supposed to be feeling this anyway! I don't know what is going on; since when have u been having feeling? Why didn't you tell me before?

M-Ufff!!!!!!!! Coz you don't have a phone number! Pata hai kitni mushkil se number nikala hai????????

G-Tumhe kyun takleef ho rai hai!!Why are you getting hurt?!! Aur apni girlfriend ka number do mujhe

M-Kya?????? Tu pehle apna phone apne paas rakho, samjhi?????

G- Aur tum khaan khana kab shuru karoge?

M-Jis din tum karogi

G- I am eating, you idiot! And this isn't supposed to be happening!

M-Don't call me idiot...!

G-To kya bolun? Huh? Khud ka khayal rakha nahi jaata hai, muhe bata rahe ho, na sote ho dhang se na khaate ho

M-Haan tum bada rakh leti ho apna khayal

G- I am fine, perfectly fine. I just had a slip, it's a normal sprain and I'll recover in a day unlike you, smartass! Aur le lungi aaj phone khush!!

M-Le lungi????? Jo diya hai uska kya? Uska number hai mere paas, use that

G-It's too complicated. I can't operate that. I'll buy my own and give you my number

M-What?????? You can't operate a phone??

G-Not that phone

M-You can't operate a...? You are from where...mars?????? You an alien??

She rolls her eyes

G- Isn't it too late to be asking questions? Besides didn't you ever wonder where I got all my incredible abilities from?

She says sarcastically

M-No, I didn't coz many people have that, I have read and researched

G-How many have you met? Coz I haven't met anyone else and why are you researching on me, huh?

M-Just coz...coz...I just did

G-Well you...you give me your girlfriend's number

He hisses

M-I-don't-have-one

G- But you said she was your...look I don't want you break up or anything...I just want it coz I...I just want it so that I can reach you in case you don't pick your phone

M-If I don't pick then know that I am dead

G-Shhh!! Stop saying that!! Why do you keep saying that? Don't say it so lightly. Idiot! Mazaak nahi hai! Mujhse aesi bakwas mat kiya karo, number nahi dena theek hai, main samjh gai, wapas nahi mangugi

M-I only say the truth. I don't have any desire to live

G-Kyun? How can you not want to live? I mean agar nahi jeena hota to tumne suicide kar liya hota; there must be something you aer living for or someone

M-To see how it ends. Khair...tum nahi samjhogi

G-Mujhe samajhna bhi nahi hai ye pagalpann. Tum nahi mar rahe ho; that's all I know!!!!!! I am not letting you die!!!!You get it?????

M-Geet, I am not deaf. Stop shouting

G- I can't help it! Tum kuch bhi keh dete ho and then expect me to take it calmly. Seriously, last time keh rahi hoon as long as I am around you can forget about meeting your maker. Aur tum apna dhyan rakhna shuru kardo to warna main aakar tumhe alcohol ki drip laga dungi! I'd seriously rather have you drunk bothering me than living in constant pain like this, sammjhe?

M-To aa jao

He says in a low inviting tone

M-Phir tum bhugtogi

She is flustered

G- I didn't... oh you... tum pata nahi kya sochne lag gaye ho. Aur main serious hoon and don't think ki main aagai to it would be like last time. I am serious I dint want you suffering anymore

M-Main bhi serious hoon

G-Tum bachche ho tumhe kuch nahi pata hai

M-Huh?

G-Bye.

Kehkar Geet phone kaat deti hai

Sab Geet ko dekh rahe hain, pichle 15 min se dekh rahe hain in fact. Sabko laga thi ki wrong number hoga lekin apparently Geet was talking to someone and showing a whole array of emotion jo kabhi nahi dikhaye. They are all shocked

Geet sab ko ignore karke gets back to her work

Lekin sab kaam baith kar karti hai, she doesn't want Maan suffering

Geet half day lekar goes and gets the feet treated, painkiller kharide, patti bandwai; pehli baar taking care of herself

Even Geet doesn't have much to live for but she didn't want to die ever

Geet ne naya phone kharida sim li

Raat mein around 9 Maan ko call kiya

M-emmm

G-This is my new mobile number

M-ooo Geet

G- Yeah mighty me! Khana khaya tumne?

M-Hmm...tumne?

G-Haan. Tumahri tabiyat kaise hai ab?

M- @#!@!# discharge hi nahi kar rahe hain

G-ummm do you want me to bring you something?

Geet ne keh dia fir puts hand over her mouth

Uh oh kya keh diya!

M-Geet. I was thinking...thinking about you...us

G-Oh...what...were you thinking?

M-That it's so wrong being a Goldilocks and bothering you. I guess if ever I lose control and drink but I shouldn't trouble a girl like this...its better we stay...out of sight out of mind...don't take me otherwise...ok

G-Yeah...no you aver completely right...I mean...that's what I always demanded of you too... I am glad you see my point of view

M-Geet...I love Tara a lot...always loved her...will always love her...love is eternal for me; and for me love happens only once... just once...

G-Yeah your girlfriend...I don't wanna break you two up

M-You asked me that day why am I living; living without her is worse than death

G-What do you mean without her? I thought...you.. where is she?

Geet thought ki ye kya? Sapne mei to wo khud thi ye kaun imposter hai...then thinking ki forget about dreams they are stupid

M-She is married

He says with a sad smirk

G- She didn't die? She left you and married someone else?

She couldn't believe what she was hearing, red rage tinting her vision...

M-Yup. She left me

How dare a girl hurt HIM!!!

M-Left me 8 years ago

Just. how dare. she!!!!

Geet ko mil jaye to abhiii ke abhi uska gala daba de

Nahi mile aur address ho to wahan jaa kar daba de

Geet chup ho gai hai thinking of ways to find her and kill her...no! First make her suffer then kill her

Maan interrupts her thoughts

M-But...it doesnt stop a person from loving your love. Maine jab use pyaar kiya tab ye contract to sign nahi kiya naa that she will also love me and be loyal to me in return

Geet is surprised at her violent thoughts but she isn't regretting any of them

Barely containing anger in her voice she asks-

G-Do you know where she is now?

She doesnt care what the girl felt. If she didn't love she could have pretended or tried to say no in a way that it would hurt him less. She isn't very rational when it comes to Maan ... that's the sad fact

G-Well? Do you know? Her address?

She says clenching her fingers still feeling murderous, so angry that even Maan could have felt a twinge...

M-What? Address? I know your address. You know mine?

G- Her. I want her address.

SheenGcian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update.. I don't understand their relationship 😆 😕
One minute she ignores him and next all worried for him 😲 😳
Geet feels something unusual for Maan but that's a shocking revelation that Maan felt same 😲 😲
Kia scene hai.. Waqai pichle janam ke bichde premi hain kia 😆
Maan told her about Tara... now she is angry on her.. 😲
Waiting to see what she will do to her 😆 😉
deep002 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update dear, they both feel each other pain
nakh5683 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update geet is very restless for maan she is feeling his pain and apparently maan also feeling her pain seems they have a connection maan is worried for geet she scolds him to take care of himself funny she doesn't know how to use his phone geet comes to know any Tara leaving maan still he loves her geet angry at Tara
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail 18th Anniversary Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update, well written! Geet worried abt Maan! she is angry that Tara left Maan!
Risingsun626 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
New twist in the tale is maan too become psychic. He called to check on her and ppl around geet looked at her amazingly like she can talk normally too. Haha this one is most funny scene here. What will be their reaction when all will know she is future mrs msk. Its holiday now u should give double update. I m missing it very much.waiting for next part. Thanks for pm. Update soon.
Edited by Risingsun626 - 9 years ago
Flame_of_Forest thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 17

now Maan is also feeling the mystic connection like her, specially when they are in pain..
I liked her display of emotions when it comes to Maan..anger, concern, jealousy..never before she had done or felt for anyone else like this.
She may or may not have felt bad, when he said to not meet again..but she was more concerned for his current state...Considering Tara responsible for it, she wants to confront her..



Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago
sanum23 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
grt ud
knowing about tara geet want to kill hr fr hurting maan
NilzStorywriter thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

PART 18

M-What? Address? I know your address. You know mine?

G- Her. I want her address.

M-She is happily married somewhere. I don't know. It's been 8 years. It doesnt matter as long as she is happy. She married my best buddy

G- You are still hurting so of course it matters!

M-That pain will stay with me as long as I am alive...I am used to it

G- How dare them both! Find me either address I'll go there and...

M-Geet, what's wrong? I am completely fine

G-This is stupid why should you be miserable. Why areyo u the one always getting hurt?!

M-Always?

G-Stupid dreams

M-Dream?

G-Just...no it would be better you don't give me the address, I don't know what I'll do. We do have this exotic African adder in the hotel right now...he belongs to the ambassador of Zaire. Maybe I can borrow it and...no that would stupid...you better not give me the address

M-Nor do I know

Maan is again laughing

G-I can find some dogs behind on their rabies injection schedule too. That would be ok right? I mean they won't die or anything

Maan is almost rolling on the floor laughing

G- Hey stop laughing. I am seriously angry here

Kuch minutes baad Maan hasna band karta hai

M-oh God my stomach aches!

Geet ka bhi kafi gussa thanda ho gaya

She loves to hear him laugh

G- Maine kaha tha hasna band karo

M-But I like this pain. You are a very cute girl. Your boyfriend would be the luckiest man on earth

G-I don't have boyfriend. People don't...I don't have good people skills

M-Yeah I know. You threaten killing

G-Trust me, that's the first murderous thought in my life. Usually I am the tucking tail between my legs and running away type. I avoid confrontation and people

M-Coward? I don't like cowards...khair chodo

G-Well, you don't... I mean...since we aren't supposed to meet and talk...and liking doesnt matter

M-emm...yeah...emm...take care then...have a good life...it was nice knowing you

G-Yeah you too...umhmm bye

Geet kaat deti hai phone having a very strong feeling this wasn't bye at all

++++++++++++++

3-4 din aur hue

Maan ki aur tabiyat kharab hui

Geet hotel mei thi

She had been having a very bad headache, no dreams for 3 continues nights

She was eating and sleeping and still feeling worst everyday

Geet wahan khadi thi talking to a customer

Achnak she again felt the headache inciting and it came with such a rage that she faints

Hosh aya 10-15 min baad

Logon ne paani-wani chidka, 2-3 chaante maare to wake her up

Usko chuti dedi ki jao first get better then come back

Geet ne socha ki pata nahi ho kya raha hai, it couldn't be coz of Maan, aesa to kabhi nahi hua...nahi something is wrong with her only

Socha ki chalo doctor ko dikha lein

Geet doc ke paas gai, doctor ne as usual stress strain improper food diet sleep kehkar bhaga diya some medicine for nerves and relaxation prescribe karke

Geet ne dawai kharidi taxi wale se kaha ki ghar jaana hai

Taxi-madam address?

G-ABC street XYZ lane XXX house no

Ankhein band karke...she felt as if she was dream walking, things were kind of swirling around in her vision

Wahan pohoche

Geet ne pay kiya phir dekha ki ye kahan aa gaye

Saamne jo gate dikha wahin jaakar ghanti baja di wahin gate par sar tikakar

Ek naukar ne khola

Geet was really looking weak and sick.. ki bas giri

She swayed at the gate stumbling inside naukar ko ignore

Servant-Arre are kisko chahie?

G-Nahi kuch nahi bass .. muhe thoda aaram karna hai .. I'll be fine thank you

Servant-Arre kaun hain app?

She is walking and crossing rooms in daze

Servant-Arre aap aise andar nahi aa sakti

G-Shh don't shout please

Geet ghus gai kisi kamre mei, wahan se kahin aur

Servant-Niklo..saaab aaram kar rahe hain

G- Kahan?

Servant-Jao tum...ho kaun aap?

She is getting a sudden inspiration and she starts climbing the stair

Servant-Arre ruko! Aise khub ladkiyaan aati hain saab ke gale padne; par jao aap, saab ki tabiyat kharab h

G- I know i know

Geet pohonchi Maan ke room ke bahar

Maan bed pe dard se karah raha tha

Servant-Saab? Saab aap thik ho?

Geet goes over to him and sits near him

Maan is tossing and turning in pain, his eyes shut

She keeps her hand on his head

G- Shhh

M-Geet

His lips murmur

G- Nope...I am Goldilocks today...

She giggles while her eyes swim in tears

He opens his eyes, his eyes relieved to see her

His face full of anguish...bearing the pain

She lies down beside him

G- Tell me what you want

She says holding his face

He looks questioningly, forgetting the pain for a moment and feeling her touch

She smiles at him assuringly

G- Go ahead, you can tell me.

She says caressing his face

He purses his lips to make the pain bearable

She exhales a long pain filled sigh

Maan maybe pursing his lips... Geet isn't

G- Tell me what you need please

She says resting her head on his shoulder

He shakes his head

G- Drink?

M-Ahhh...Naahh...Geet...No

G-Ramsingh! Get him a scotch Get him medicine too

M-NO...aaahh..No Geet

G- Shhh I am Goldilocks, my turn

Ramsingh to hairaan...madam ko mera naam kaise pata

deep002 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update dear, I'm confused what is happening here 😕

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart · 2 years ago

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter · 1 years ago

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21 · 2 years ago

Hello everyone i know i already written many stories whi complete nhi ho paa rhi hai and i start one more actually, i written this for OS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

This is the story of Maan Geet . The couple who love each other and married secretly . This story will tell their everlasting love, and...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m · 4 years ago

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".