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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 16

G- N...No...of course not...it is just that I start saying something to you and then I realize that the rest of the sentence doesnt really make sense so I just don't say it. I am not much of a talker... I mean I say stuff and people look at me weirded so I try to keep it shut

Maan hasne lag gaya

Kitne dino ke baad dil kholke hasaa hai ki uski hassi gunj si gai

G- Its not funny...

Geet mumbles getting red in face squirming with embarrassment

M-You are funny! No; comic. Miss Comic

Geet gives Maan a mini cute glare

She didn't like being made fun of but she really couldn't even mind Maan laughing at her. It was a treat watching him laugh and right now she was enjoying that

His laugh...his smile...the way his face transformed

She was staring at him like a dim witted idiot

M-I am sorry again. I don't know what happens to me after I get drunk. It hasn't happened ever; I have met so many people but never happened

She snaps out of drool mode

G- Uh it's nothing to apologize...I came here and demanded answers...and I am not even drunk...sometimes things just happen

M-But it's so weird and it's the only way and I determine to succeed; assure you it won't happen again

G- Yeah...

She gives him a close lipped smile filled with sadness

G-All the best. I am sure you will succeed

Geet notices he looks so sick and pale. She goes near to him again and notices his dark circle and sunken eyes. He appears thinner too

G-But if it's just giving up drinking, you shouldn't be getting this sick. I don't like this...I mean I don't like you being sick like this

She looks troubled

M-I will manage. Don't worry

After a pause he says

G- Isn't there some other way to do this? So that you don't have to suffer like this...I mean would little drinking help... ?

Maan has a side smile

M-Geet. It's not about me, it's about you

G- What? No, it's got nothing to do with me

M-I am doing this for you

G- No, you don't have to do this for me. I dent need it. I am fine with every thing

She babbles

G-You should ...why do you think I would want to see you suffering?

M-Geet, you are a very kind girl but this can't get on like this

G- No. I am mean and selfish and I am asking you to stop this. I mean...I don't want you to be drunkard, that couldn't be good for your health but I don't want this...you like this...its... even worse

M-Geet, don't look miserable please

G-I am miserable? You are in a hospital bed!! I think i can handle little misery

M-Its ok-ay. Ok-ay. All right

G- It's not and don't you eat any more? Huh? Why have you lost so much weight?

She says poking his chest

G-You look worse than me on my worst day

He smiles

M-But you always look beautiful

G- Huh yeah right.

She snorts

M-Don't you belive Maan Singh Khurana?

G-I... you aren't the paragon of virtue...are you saying you have never lied?

M-I never lie in these matters and I am not lying now. I can't help if you can't see clearly in a mirror

G- I can see very well, you are the one who needs glasses; and my looks are not the topic of discussion any way

Geet says again getting slightly red. First time in life someone has ever complemented her...

M-Now you leave, you look badly in need of food

She looks at him astonished; mouth open then closes her mouth looking angry

G- You look like a cat dragged in after a stormy night not me!!

She goes and kicks his bed then grabs her leg ow ow owow

G-Damn you! And I will go wherever whenever I want; I don't need your permission or order

Maan ne elbow pakda aur khincha aur bed pe bithaya

She falls easily loosing balance waise hi ek pair pad kund rahi thi

She falls on top of him

G-Ooofff!!

He grabs her tightly

G- What are you- let go!

He holds her knee pulling her leg towards him

G- I am fine! Fine! Let go!

She tries to get away but even on his worst day he is much stronger than her

He pulls her feet towards him, keeping it on his thigh

M-Let's see

He gets some water from the jug

G- I really am fine

Maan Geet ke feet pe thanda paani daalta hai

She wriggles trying to get away

Maan to pure concentration se laga hua h

G -Stop it...

She says giggling a little now

G-Really its fine... let go. It tickles, ok! Let go!!

She tries uselessly to pull away

Maan to laga hai massage mein

Geet is still a bit giggly

M-O my! You have pillowish soft feet! My girlfriend also----

He stops abruptly...

Haath hatatha hai

M-emm...is it ok now?

G- Its fine. Thank you. Your girlfriend...Tara?

Geet asks, knowing she shouldn't but she has to know

Maan looks at her with murderous glare

M-How do you know?????

He frowns; really bad frown

G- You come drunk to my house, remember? Drunk people babble stuff

Maan hides his face in his hands

M-I shouldn't...I shouldn't...

He sighs

G-...oh...oh!!!

She explains jumping out of bed, moving around jaise achanak se mole concept samjh aa gaya

G-You shouldn't coz of her...of course what must she be thinking!! Why didn't I think of that!!

She says slapping her head

He frowns more

M-What are you saying...

He says in a low mumble

G- I...uh...should go... if she finds me here...I understand...umm bye...just take care ok and tell her to take care of you too or--just bye!

Geet apna joota pehenti hai jo Maan ne utaara tha to check out her foot, grabs her purse; all in fast speed

Maan let gaya ankhein band karke trying to find some peace

She leaves

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update Maan really enjoys her company she sad seeing him so sick but maan is doing it for her good atleast his this bad habit would be gone hmm geet said about tara but maan didnt clear that she is his ex thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting chapter

Maan still refers to Tara as his girlfriend and now when he speaks of her Geet realizes she must leave maybe that's the reason Maan stopped with her feet
both seem to care about each other Maan telling her he giving up on drinking because of her he even compliments her
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's gud ud
geet visited him and maan told he doing its fr hr geet said its gud he leaving it's bad habit but she can't see him so sick y he have to suffer this much geet mentioned about his gf tara but maan didn't said anything geet left
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update..
thank u for pm..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update maan is laughing at geets cute answer he has laughed like this after a long time geet drooling on him maan tells he is leaving his drunk habit for her geet dosent want him to suffer for her but maan wants to get rid of his habit geet wotrried for his health maan complimenting geet making her blush geet hurts her leg maan pulled her in his arms inorder to help her he unknowingly mentions his gf geet also talsk abt tara making maan angry she tells how he mentioned her in his sleep
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. They both are trying to comfort each other even in their worst phase. Their communication is something heart soothing type. Waiting for next part. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 16

both have become quite comfortable in talking with each other like friends..
Geet is slightly disappointed as he may not come to her home again..but at the same time concerned for his health.
Maan unknowingly refers about Tara..did not Geet know about his break up with Tara, I remember, she had asked him to let go of his past..


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update, wonderfully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet started caring for Maan a lot😳
Maan's complement made her blush😉
Superb update!!
Thanks for the PM :)

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