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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update..
thank u for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ud
maan woke up and went away leaving mob
maan didn't came back geet missing maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely part
geet is missing maan since he didn't arrive for a week.Again she got a dream in which her name was sundara and maan's Anandam.What does this dream indicate?
Waiting eagerly for next part.thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 11

I liked the way Geet said I fear that I will get attached to you..
she is trying all ways to stop these things, but could not help falling for him as well.
but good part is Maan believes in her words about clairvoyance.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 12

Maan ne kaha tha he will not bother her any more, and phirse ends up at her house..yahi haal raha to ek din apne khud ke ghar ka raasta bhul jayega, Geet should charge him like a permanent tenant of her house 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 13

Maan is equally behaving enigmatic here..
first the cheque, the sketch, then gift..and now a mobile..
at least she could sleep without any nightmares except for their dreams..



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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 14

she is used to his craziness at night, now when he did not come for a week, Geet is missing it much..
What are all these dreams for.
every dream has some or other villain, who is trying to separate them with not so happy ending..
will they get a happy ending in this life, if that is what it means..


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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful updates, I feel a little more pace can go for the story.
waiting for the next..
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PART 15

Geet ko ghasitthe ghasitthe le gaye

She is shouting his name

Anandam!!!!!!!! Anandam!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANANDAAAM!!

He is shouting for his Sundara

She doesnt want to die, she wants to live

Maan is struggling with the guards

A spine chilling shrilll cryyy of herrr as the sword is raised

He shouts with all his might

They release him and he crawled towards her...on the blood dripping floor

But she is already dead

She was there she could see him crying like a baby, wailing

But she wasn't in pain...she had left the body

But she can't leave the place as his ties with her were too strong...he wasn't letting her leave

Anandam killed each and every one of them

He was in a mad rage...a priest who had sworn of non-violence

She had never seen him so much rage. He was always calm no matter what

But as he was destroying people...he was destroying his peace and soul too; only emotion he felt was rage

Many years had passed; Anandam was old, silver haired

He had sworn not to marry ever

That day, he had killed every guard and minister

But even when he took revenge, she wasn't happy coz she was a soul

He wasn't letting her go; she was stuck in this world

He wouldn't let her leave, but he doesn't know it makes her suffer more

It makes her die every moment like this, he doesnt understand

She at last reaches heaven with his death

Geet wakes up teary eyed, her hands closing around empty air, just as her spirit had when she had want to hug him, touch him, comfort him...he couldn't feel her just like now...she had to make him understand that...that...

Her mind whirled tying to separate reality from dream; but it felt so real

Geet closes her eyes trying to come back to reality but she can't break away from the dream, not from the need to tell him...tell him something important

Geet khadi hoti hai...samaan idhar udhar gira...grabbing for light switch

Jaakar then she grabs her landline and calls Maan

Par Maan ka phone bajta gaya

Geet ne phir call kya

She keeps calling for a while, maybe if she could just see him, talk to him and just confirm that he is not in any particular pain

As she was calling him she got some intuition

Jaise someone is dragging her in emergency, as if her feet have a life in them

She wants to see him, talk to him and she has this growing sense of urgency to get somewhere. As if she is at wrong place, she shouldn't be there, she should be somewhere else

She gets dressed and quickly grabs her purse...kyunki usse nahi pata kahan jaana hai par jahan bhi, her best guess is Maan's office or home

She takes a taxi and starts directing the driver in an impulse

Her feet take her into a hospital

She directly goes into the private ward

Maan leta hua aih hospital ke kapdon mein

She goes in only focusing on him

She touches his shoulder with a graze of her fingers

G- Utho

He opens his eyes that penetrate and looks at her

Uthke baithta hai

G- Kya hua tumhe?

She helps him sit and keeps her hand on his shoulder very lightly

G-Bolo kya hua hai? Why are you here?

M-Who told you I am here?

She shrugs

G-Why would anyone need to tell me? Who else knows about me?

M-You shouldn't be here

G- What happened to you?

Maan chup

She grabs both his shoulders and shakes as hard as she could, which wasn't much

G- Kya hua hai!!!

M-Tchhh!

He clicks his tongue

M-Kuch nahi

G- To yahan kyun ho?

She says looking miserable and disheveled, her cheeks were tear streaked, hair windblown

G- What happened to you?

M-Tchhh!! Why are you crying?

G- I am not crying I just had a bad dream

She says looking away and stepping away from him

M-I am just sorry about my behavior

G- What are you talking about?

She gives him a blank look

M-I didn't want to cause you any trouble for my Goldilocks behavior after drinking

Geet lowers her eyes looking uncomfortable

G- It wasn't...you still didn't answer me; why are you in a hospital? Are you sick? Do you have some disease? Some scheduled operation?

M-You are a psycho, you should know...I mean psychic or whatever

He says with a mischievous grin

G- I don't want to find out that way... you rather tell me...and it's not like I can control it to find what I want...I just find things wanted or unwanted. Are you ok now?

M-Well...I dint want to cause trouble to you coz of my drinking and barging into your home

G- So what has it got to do with this?

M-I didn't drink for a week

She smiles

G- Good for you. However...what does not drinking have to do with this?

M-See, I can't explain it to you

G- You mean not drinking landed you here?

M-Yes

Geet sits down at the foot of the bed

G-Is it then supposed be some alcohol reaction thing?

M-It's leaving abruptly thing

She nods not getting much but accepting the explanation

G- So why aren't you picking up your cell? Ignoring me altogether?

M-No, I was on sedatives

G- Sorry I woke you up. Are you... do you...do they sedate you coz of pain?

M-Well...it's not pain...it's...ask the doctor

Geet nods

G-I hope you get better soon and...I umm...

M-Say

G-It's really silly thing but...umm...you need to let go...ok...just let go of stuff and you'll be fine...and don't hurt yourself and...It's not like I hate you or anything...but it's probably for best that we don't meet again and I see that you get it and it's just me running silly around here... but you did the right thing...you are right I shouldn't have come here, no business of mine

Geet says abruptly getting up from the bed

M-Listen. Do you always speak in half sentences?

G- N...No...of course not...it is just that I start saying something to you and then I realize that the rest of the sentence doesnt really make sense so I just don't say it. I am not much of a talker... I mean I say stuff and people look at me weirded so I try to keep it shut

Maan hasne lag gaya

Kitne dino ke baad dil kholke hasaa hai ki uski hassi gunj si gai

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update 😃
Aww feeling bad for geet, she had really a bad dream,, is this related to them in real life 😲 😕
Geet was worried about Maan not coming at her home 😳
Wow her intuition landed her at the right place 😃
Maan's in hospital,, aww he's really wants to cure his alcoholic problem 😃
Geet n her funny blabbering.. Maan dil khol ke Hans dya 😆 😃
Only she can do that 😉
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