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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 14

Geet being mentally half asleep raises her lips and places a kiss wherever it may land, blissfully happy

Generally nightmares left her in a bad case of nerves but this was so fine, so nice to be soothed like this

Although a dull warning was beginning to sound in her mind but she ignored it

It was first time she was feeling so comfy... why doubt it? Why question it? Why let it be taken away?

She is quite determined to not open her eyes and face reality and seek questions

Maan ne achanak ankh kholi

He jumps a few steps and moves away

M-em...oh...I am sorry...oh...I am so sorry miss

Geet frowns, hands trying to grasp on empty air; it was all missing- the presence, the warmth and the comfort

G- Noo...

He quickly gets upshirt thik kari baal jaldi thik kare

Geet bhi uth gai, looking around ki kahan gaya kahan gay

Maanl ne jaldi se apna mobile uthaya aur pocket se ek aur mobile nikala

M-This was for you

Uthke nikal gaya

She looks at him hurrying up...thinking wo raha and then goes red... ki agar wo; wo hai to Geet kya kar rahi hai and and Geet kuch kar rahi thi to wo kyun bhaag gaya...pretty shy for a village chief

She thinks then gasps

Stupid Stupid! Stop linking! It's different. Doesn't matter what dreams are, its different separate

Maan chala gaya par mobile chod gaya

Geet ne wo mobile freezer mein daal diya

Geet ab gai apne hotel

In the night she couldn't come home as koi emergency aa gait hi islie raat bhar hotel mein rehna pada

She comes home around 5 in the morning

Ghar jaisa chodke gai thi waisa hi hai

Ab agla din bhi Geet ka normal gaya

Geet ko laga ki kal Maan aaya ki nahi aya , aaya ki nahi aya. Poora din aur pichli raat isi khayal mein nikli

Agli raat 7 baje ghar aai Geet saaman kharidke. Take out se burger and french fries le aayi bade shauk se.

Par kuch bhi nahi khaaya, bass aake so gai

She doesn't take much good care of herself. Adhe time she is too busy to eat aur baaki kabhi if she has a bad dream she skips breakfast. If she has weird feeling, she loses her food. That's why she is a bit skinny and underweight. Uske generally dak circles rehte hain kyunki she doesnt sleep soundly; all the dreams and nightmares and that lady in her dreams

But she is beautiful naturally, great bone structure. You feed her for a day, she looks great. She smiles, she lights up the room. She gets angry and her eyes sparkle to light dry forests. She looks like wanting you to take care of her, handle her delicately as if she would break if you are rough. But she's tough from inside

Ab Geet to so gai

Ankh khuli subah hui, as usual normal usual boring morning. Aj koi laundry nahi, koi safai nahi, koi dishes nahi to clean up. It feels empty

There is just usual going to hotel

Although she is bit better as no dark circles today

Full 12 hours of sleep does wonders to her. Aisa lag raha hai jaise ek din ka spa treatment le kar ayi ho

1 pura din nikal gaya

Agla din bhi nikla

Doosre din Geet fridge ke samne baithe freezer ko evil looks de rahi thi, lekin mobile nahi nikaala

Par raat ke 2 baj gaye aur usko neend nahi aayi

Geet ki haalat hi kuch aesi hai ki she thought of 100 reasons ki Maan kyun nahi aaya. The best one she likes is that he didn't drink therefore didn't feel compelled to follow his lowered senses here. He is well sober and fighting whatever foolish feeling he may be having. Her second favorite guess is that he is out of town

Ek hafta hua, agla sunday aaya

Geet ka bohot mann kiya ki aaye aaye. She misses him but she didn't feel anything, any twinge in his direction so she didn't call. Mann to bohot kiya but she didn't have reason. Waise hi wo pagal samajhta hai, pata nahi yun hi call kiya to aur kya kya sochega

Geet soyi to ek aur dream

Its ancient India

She is in a saree, running to see him

She is in a white saree with red border, wrapp wali sari without blouse adorned her hair with flowers plus some fresh flower jewelry

She runs into a temple

She can hear his deep voice chanting the shlokas

She smiles and runs faster

He is in front of life size idol, bare chested in a white dhoti wearing a janeu (white string worn by Brahmins)

He seriously chanting his shlokas putting the ghee on fire, fruits and sweets offered on plate, hands folded, straight back

Geet sits and crawls towards him

His eyes are closed

She is looking at him mischievously

Saamne ek twig tha, Maan ke kaan pe tickle kiya

Maan ne pehle kuch nahi kiya then he flinched

Geet ne Maan ko prick kiya

Maan ne haath jhatak diya

G-Chalo naa

M-Shhh

G-Baad mein karlena puja...chalo mere saath

M-Shhh..puja karne do

G-Kya bekaar hai..chalo sair karte hain bahar chalke

M-Pehle puja..baaki sab baad mein

Maan ne concentrate kiya puja mein

She pouts ki ye to maanega nahi

Geet leke bhagwan ka prasad khane lag gai, mithai and all

Maan ek baar stops her hand phir karne deta hai

Some foot steps are heard

He suddenly opens his eyes

M-Jao!!

Par tab tak wahan head priest aur royal guards aa gaye

The priest looks evil

Geet hides behind Maan

Maan is standing like an imposing mountain covering her

The priest, who is Maan's father, roars at him ki; iss untouchable ko temple mein ghusne dia, uske upar let her have bhagwan ka prasad

Maan says-I am sorry...it's my entire fault, but it's not her fault. She doesnt know. Leave her

Geet is shivering with fear

Maan is one and they are about 50 armed guards

There is the royal chief too. He says its adharm. The kingdom will be doomed

They order Maan to kill her...and to do his kartavya, save the kingdom farm wrath of deity

Maan's voice is shaking with anger

M-Nahiii. Tumhe kya lagta hai tum kahoge to main apni Sundara ko maar dungaaa???

Geet is like a trapped prey, shaking

Maan aage aaya, signaling her ki peeche raho

Geet to kaanp rahi thi

They said thik hai..tum nahi karoge to ye dharm hum kar denge

Kuch guards ne Maan ko pakda kuch ne Geet ko khincha

Geet ko ghasitthe ghasitthe le gaye

She is shouting his name

Anandam!!!!!!!! Anandam!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANANDAAAM!!

He is shouting for his Sundara

She doesnt want to die, she wants to live

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow me FIRST 😃
Awesome Update.. oh no Maan ekdum hosh me kyu agayaagaya 😆 😳
Mobile de kar chala bhi gya 😭
Geet is missing him like hell.. but not accepting 😉
Where is he.. why didn't he come back 😕
Oh another dream 😲
Anandaam and sundara.. is it some new twist 😳 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan didn't come too see Geet for sm days!!
Oh no..Dreams are indicating that big danger is stored for them!!
Why sm pleasant dreams are not coming?😒
Loved this part!!
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
geet is missing maan

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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! Maan hasn't seen her in days! Geet misses him! update soon, well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan when he woke up did he not realize it's Geet as he calls her Ms he has not been to Geet's house and she misses him but she also does not get any bad feelings
Her dream is it just a dream or an indication of something that would happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update geet was kissing maan get rid of all her inhabitions when maan woke up he got scared and left his mobile running away scared geet realsied what she did and cursed herself maan didnt come after that get was missing him she was thinking either he left drinking or have gone out she didnt eat or sleep properly she was very weak geet saw a dream wher maan is some priest son and geet is an untouchable she and maan r lovers and its considered a sin where maans family killing geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
maan gave her phone then vanish for week geet is missing him
hmm her dream seems like its there past life and their love story was unfinished
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm. From dream sequences it looks like they are couple from every birth and before getting united they had faced so many problems. If this will continue in this birth too. Geet is missing maan and want to contact him but dont have any excuse to communicate. Its funny. In all a wonderfull update. Waiting for next part. Update soon and some long part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear, where is maan

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