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Posted: 9 years ago
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Always yours
Part. 1.

It was night time a girl was looking at sky and thinking about her life that few months back she was very or say she had every happiness in her life. Her husband her lover always treat her like princes after marriage she didn't know which is her law house and which is her parental house in house she live like a princess but now death of husband changed everything in her, she live her life like machine or to say for her baby Aro for whom she can have her life her otherwise she would have die till now. Her Armaan gave her so much happiness that now she is unable to live without him and bear this pain of separation. She was in her thought but then come to sense when she hear her baby weeping she clear her tears and move towards bed pick her baby and start to feed her and said.

G. My baby I promise to baby mama will fulfill your every wishes which your father had promised (then she pick up the picture of Armaan and said) I promise Armaan I will try to give every happiness to our baby that you have promised her and I love you so much please come back your Geet can't live without you (saying this she again start crying hugging her husband picture also holding tightly to her daughter. This has become routine of Geet that all the day she try to live happily for her family members but in night she can't control herself and cry for the loss of her love.

Other side of the world a man was working continuously but from last few months he was not feeling good that his love is some problems but then he thought that it's just his illusion and then he control himself but now these thoughts are effecting him, he just want to see in love lady for of once but then he closed his eyes then he see tears in her and said

M. Geet (he just open his eyes and his breathing was high also he was called by Adi his right hand man)

A. Maan sir Maan sir (Maan look at him with blank face) sir are you alright (Maan closed his eyes and again tearful come in his eyes and he open his eyes which were red eyes and said to Adi)

M. Adi book our tickets to India we both are your going there as soon as possible. (Adi was shocked as from last 2 and half year Maan is here in Canada and his family is saying him to comeback but then he ignored there call to go back India as they come here to meet him but what happened suddenly that he want to go back but then still he nodded his head.

All the time Maan continue his work but his thoughts were on Geet as now it has been 6 months he is not feeling good that if Geet is some trouble but now he had enough he will go back and see with his own eyes that Geet is fine or not as first he try to avoid but now he can't avoid these thoughts. All the day Maan was working like a machine at night Adi come back to his cabin and said him.

A. Maan sir our tickets are book for next week (saying this he left but then Maan pick up his phone in which there is Geet smiling And kiss her pic then said.

M. Geet I am coming to see you I don't know why I am feeling that you are in some problem, I tried to make myself clear you are happily married to your love but now why I am feeling that you are in some problem and if you are in some problem then your Maan will be always with you. I was and always be yours so what you love someone else but still I love you. (Then he went to again busy in work.

Other side in Delhi next day had arrived where Geet again mask happiness on her face and help her Bhabhi and mother in law in her daily activities but still her heart was crying for Armaan. Every day that was routine but still they try to be happy for Geet as they saw she was working in kitchen and giving every answer of Cahat but then Heer was unable to control herself and said.

H. Mama how much time Geet will live like this she is making hard shell around her and later it will be not good for her what we should that she should live happily like she was living before (Prem saw everyone is there then he said them)

P. Mom dad I have think something if you want we can do that so that Geet can live happily (all look him and Prena asked)

Pr. What is that Prem so that Geet can live happily (Prem closed his eyes than remember Armaan promise which he made before before he die, when he didn't said anything then then Anurag said

A. Prem what is that tell us we all are waiting and also you are makes us tense (listening to then he open his eyes and said)

P. I think we should remarry Geet so that she can live her again and also Aro can get father love it's not that we don't love her but some span of time she will insecurities that she will not demand or tell us in proper way as child demand from their father also Geet is only 22 and how will she live all her life alone as she need someone (all were shocked but before they could say anything they were interrupted by Geet.

G. Kya howa mam dad bhaiya and Bhabhi why are you all looking at each other if something had happened and why all are you not eating breakfast.

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Edited by T.Peru - 8 years ago
T.Peru thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Hello friends here is the part 1
Thank you who like & commented on teaser
Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Feeling bad for Geet and Aro 😭
Maan could feel geet's pain though he is miles away from her...true love 😊
Maan coming back to India. ..
Here Prem too suggested that geet should remarry...but will Geet accept?
Can't wait for the nxt part di :)
Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
awesome concept..
waiting for next :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start .
geet is lost her husband arman and she is living her life just for her baby aro . she is just 22 ..feeling bad for her ..even for maan also that he could not get her love . but he still love her and can feel his love's pain .
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start

Maan is in love with Geet now he has been in Canada while Geet married the love of her life Armaan and has a baby too but Armaan died recently and Geet is in pain and grief and it seems like Maan feels restless as if Geet is in some pain now that he'll be coming to India while Prem has asked the family to get Geet remarried
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice but sad pt
geet lost hr husband
maan not feeling gud he loved hr truly hr pain and happiness mattershim a lot he coming back to see his self y he senses something bad happened with geet
geet family also loved hr too much they wants hr happiness so prem told his suggestion to his family geet will not accept it but fr hr daughter's happiness she will agree
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start..
so maan loves geet..
geet is just 22 ,her husband was died.
she lives only for her daughter..
early waiting for next updates..
thanks for pm
Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Feeling sad for geet and aro,both lost imp person of thier life.
From 6 months maan was feeling miserable,but atlast decided to visit India just for geet.
Poor maan still in love with geet even knowing she never loved him.
Prem was remembering about promise!? Did armaan knew maan too loves geet.
Thanks for pm
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start. Geet lost her husband Armaan, living with her daughter with her in laws. Maan loves Geet but staying far away, could feel that she is in pain, decided to come back to see her even after knowing that she never loved him. Geet's in-laws thinking of re marrying her. Waiting for next.

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