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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

lovely one dear 😊
how often married couples face this... they take their partners love for granted.. and due to the constant bickering the kids face the trauma
i am glad that Suhana was a sensible kid and that she brought her parents together making them understand what they have missed
i am glad that maan realized this before it was too late 😊

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Beautiful OS. Like real. Sometimes life become roller coaster with family children n work. Couples have no time for each other...bcom so busy...but if u wwant u can make this life still beautiful with this too much workload...whenever u get little time try to spend wth ur lvd ones...in th morning wake up along n shares lv...breakfast together...call each other during work...if u busy then call when eating or driving...dinner together...n sleep together wth each other...life must b beautiful...

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

it was god to you post after a long time...

as about the OS, it was just perfect like every work of yours...

it was very smooth, just a normal flow of events, yet tugging deep at the heart

invoking right emothions

there does come a time in life where priorities change drastically,

the essence of life it not to let your priorities change you.

and only love can protect that

for me, this one also highlights the importance of a child

in today's fast moving life, we can find many couples shying from the responsibility of a child

they find their freedom too much a cost to pay for the bundle of joy,

but how suhanna here reunited her parents in an effortless manner says much more than just words could do.

it is easy to forget your pains in the tears of your child, that happened with geet

though a woman is always expected in our society to make compromises,

but when she does that more out of love than duty, only then she make a house her home.

mostly the ego of a man is big to ignore sometimes the sacrifices his wife makes,

a husband may be ignorant, but not a father.

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

HI Ash..

this is lovely os ! The daughter Suhaana acts as catalyst between her parents ..she was miserable all time watching her parents fighting with each other ..sad to see that maan was not paying attention towards family but this usually happens with men but i happy at the end that maan realised that he was doing wrong to geet otherwise in real things r different for many people ...i really wish u write a sequence to this where by chance geet gets to know that scarf was bought by maan ..

thanku for wonderful story ...

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Wow it's so amazing

I loved it

Depicting a couple who r lacking in expressing their love n how beautifully their child make them realize their mistake is mind blowing

Stupendously fantastic lovely os

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

beautiful os with a realistic touch . nowadays relations are became like this only ..husband and wife both are fighting over each and everything and their little one is suffering because of all this .
little suhana is so much mature in her understanding ...sometimes kids teach us a lot of things. little suhana's innocent questions make maaneet realized their mistakes . great job .

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

awesome n cute story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Wonderful OS

Loved it very much

Loved little suhana and her innocent question to both maan and Geet

Maan realised that because of his busy schedule he couldn't able to give time to his wild cat ... So that's maan who bought that scarf which Geet and suhana made...

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

This os is a true story of our busy life dear ...

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luvu4ever143

@luvu4ever143

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

awsm os. ...loved it
clearly explained d problems a couple face in deir life
suhana understands everything.. somewhere she is the bridge dey both needed...
lovely story
maan buying scarf is perfect n not disclosing it to them is more dan perfect
thanx for pm

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