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-Halima

@-Halima

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Wow, so many updates I get to read in one go.

I am gonna comment on the chapters in one post.

Chapter 2:

I like the way the story is going.

I know Vicky is gonna be paired with Meera, but I loved the way he wouldn't take anything about Geet. Like a true friend even though he doesn't love her, I love their bond.

Pari is seemingly interested in Maan.

Chapter 3

Meera is in love with Vicky. I knew it was gonna happen, but still I don't like it 😆

Maan warning Meera about Geet was the best part

Loved Maan and Geet small interactions

Chapter 4

I love the way you handled their breakup, I can feel Geet is still attached to Vicky but letting hum go for his own sake.

Geet and Pari are friendship goals, love them together.

Chapter 5

Finally we are getting more MaaNeet interactions.

I love their bonding already.

Pari is starting to like Maan

Chapter 6

I like Daniel and Jake's interactions with Geet, they are fun.

To be honest I like Geet's interactions with everyone .

Maan the virgin Lol. Vicky has a loud mouth.😆

I like the fact that Geet can't deceive and fool Maan to get a drink.

I am intrigued about Geets past, she seems like a troubled kid with some childhood trauma.

Chapter 7

I liked Meera for once when she suggested Maan to go for Geet.

I feel like Maan already likes Geet though,

I would love for him to take Meera's wise advice.

Meera is falling hard for Vicky, hope he feels the same about her as long as that doesn't affect Geet.

I would love to get Geet's inner monologue to know more about her and her past.

Waiting for your update,

Edited by -Halima - 8 years ago

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Nice update
very well written loved it

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Next target Kane..i dont know why but im imaging kane from wwf 🤣

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@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

When Dave suggested maan to give pari lift I thought the lovestory now begans

But maan didn't speak at all :O

Well I still wonder he is virgin ;) :P

Geet got someone new ;) :v

Meer hinting geet for maan but he's nonchalant as usual :|

Well do mark her words maan ;)

Ah meer officially fallen for Vick :P

Well Vick brought flower bracelet for her!! :O

Ah entry of Aryan :|

What's is his actual purpose?? :/

I don't think that's because he loves his children :/

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

You are marvellous the as you write about everyone point of view is splendid. Loved the bonding between Mia and sir if geet and maneet were not in picture I would have wanted them to pair up. If maan is attracted to geet why not be befriend geet and try his luck.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

hi thanks 4 updating! Ahh Dave's plan flopped as Maan didn't even give Pari a glance! Sid n Mia share a wonderful bond! Pari's thoughts were hilarious! Meera has fallen 4 Vicky! Meera advises Maan 2 go after Geet who seems 2 b after the new guy! Hope Maan will have some courage n ask her out! Love Geet n her dad's relationship! he is a cool friendly dad! Wt does Aryan want??? update soon

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

wonderful update...read all in one go...very well written...meera loved vicky & she suggested maan for geet...but doubt about geet to follow??? excited for next...!!

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Part 7 - Maan dropping pari as dave told him to. Pari checked him and found him hot. She wanted to talk but don't know what virgins do talk' lol...it cracked me. Both didn't say a word during car ride.

So sid informed mia that Aryan is back and doing job as vicky's instructor. She was tensed if he came back for her sons. Sid explained her to first see what he want and then let maan & Vicky take decision about him. Sid & mia were cute together. Liked their selfless bond and geet teasing them as love birds.

Meera found Vicky far diff as he was showing. He gave her self made flower bracelet. She was falling more for him. maan meera were good together also.

Geet already claimed her stake over new guy. How she took revenge from Rachel. Lol. Even kate also warned her to stay away from jake.

Meera asking maan to go for geet but he flatly refused.

He even refused to come to geet's house to eat as mia asked. Why he was keeping himself away from her. has he got attracted towards her..?