MG FF - JAAL VERY IMPORTANT NOTE - Pg 32

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cutical

@cutical

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

nice fff plz continue soon want to know why maan betrayed geet nice continue soon

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metromasti

@metromasti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

congrats for new story Heytal 😊
interesting concept & super duper prologue ... so geet think ki maan trapped her in the name of marriage , he has some other plan .
eagerly waiting for update 😉

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sonaly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome beginning. Please continue soon. Can't wait for next part.

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congratz 4 d new story

intrstng prolouge

geet is fightng 4 herself 4m maan his family

waitng 4 d updates

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saadi88

@saadi88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wow such a nice concept..totally different..loved it.wuld like to read it.add me in..do cont. Soon.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Congo 4 new story very nice concept

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zida

@zida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

interesting pro
I will love to read more

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sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

This sounds very interesting... cant wait 4 it

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

in real sounds like differant story, Jaal-mane has created web of decit around geet and now geet wants to escape from this when she realise truth, is she will successfull? will wait for the Jaal.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

congo on the new story dera couldnt help ur self could u dear really interesting maan trapped get but his whole family isnt letti g her go geet hates him but seems to care for her