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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

JAAL

Innocence trapped in a Web of Lies!!

PROLOGUE~~~~~~~~~~~~

It is said that Marriages are made in Heaven and Performed on Earth!
But is this really TRUE?

Its probably every girl's dream that one day her Prince Charming will come and whisk her away in the World of Love!

Life will be like a bed of roses! ... A journey of togetherness! ... Unconditional love! ... A loving Family!... A dream Home!

PERFECT!!!!!

But what happens when DREAMS turn into NIGHTMARES!

What happens when your MARRIAGE ... is just a PLOY to accomplish selfish motives!

What happens when your SOULMATE ... rips your SOUL APART!

What happens when your LIFE PARTNER ... has IMPRISONED YOU in a MAZE of DECEIT !

What happens when your so called FAMILY treats you ... just as a piece of TRASH!

And your DREAM HOME is nothing but... a DUNGEON of TREACHERY and YOU are trapped in it!!

She opened her tired and weary eyes and looked around in the darkness ... a dimly lit night lamp illumined the huge portrait of that man ... making her realize that she was back in her hell!

This man's hard and emotionless face in the portrait totally justified his merciless being!

She had trusted him and he betrayed her!

She thought he was her knight in shinning armor but he turned out to be a dreaded demon!

She thought this relation will give her a family ... a home but ... all she earned was hatred ... humiliation and pain!!

She was already troubled but his betrayal destroyed her beyond repair!!And now when life gave her some hope he wanted to even snatch that away from her ... Forever!

Gathering her weak self she decided.

"Geet tu kamzor nahi pad sakti! ... Tujhe yahan se bahar nikalna hi hoga ... Har haal mein ... Har kimmat par!!"

Somehow she managed to get up from the bed and taking support of the nearby things she walked out. Grabbing a sword from an artifact she slowly tried to make her way towards the main door.

But to her bad luck today ... all her so called family members were back home and Vicky saw her while she was trying to sneak out.

"Aap kya kar rahi? ... Kahan jaa rahi hain?... BRO..." He shouted scaring her for a moment.

But this was not a time to fall weak ... she needed to fight ... she needed to get out of here!

But in an instance she was surrounded by the entire family ... clutching the sword tightly she fought for herself.

"Paas mat aana mere ... door raho!"

"Geet ... relax ... dekho meri baat suno ... We can talk!" Maan tried to convince her but ...

"Baat karne ke liye ab kuch nahi bacha ... Tumhara asli chehra main pehchaan chuki hoon Maan Singh Khurana"

" Main tumhe jeetne nahi doongi ...Door hat jao warna main apne aap ko hi maar doongi!"

"Kuch nahi haath aayega tumhare!" She threatened holding the sword near her neck.

Geet knew Maan would not let her die because he needed Geet to fulfill his disgusting plan!

But little did she know that her innocent mind could never match the cold and calculating mind of The Maan Singh Khurana!!

When she was so lost in fighting her battle, trying to safeguard herself. Geet failed to realize that Maan had already signaled Dev and Vicky to surround Geet.

When Geet realized that she had been cordoned by the Khurana brothers.

Geet on a reflex to escape... moved swiftly only to trip over!

Geet banged her head on the nearby pillar and the sword in her hand pierced through her.

"GEET!!!"

She collapsed but Maan was quick enough to hold her in his arms.

"Tum ...bahot ... ghatiyaan insaan ho ..."

"...nafrat ...karti hoon ... main tumse ... Maan Singh Khurana!!" She somehow uttered these words before darkness enveloped her in her embrace!!

What happens when a ruthless man enters the world of a helpless girl?
Breaks her beyond repair!
His selfish agenda putting at stake innocent lives!
Weaving a web of deceit and betraying her trust!
Leaving no room for Liberation!!!

JAAL

Innocence trapped in a Web of Lies!!

Author's Note~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay this is my surprise for all of you'll!Hope you guys like it
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And I know I'm struggling with Allured and here coming up with a new one
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Allured will be finishing in a couple of updates and only then will start
JAAL

Just posting this Prologue
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This FF is more emotional and intense, quite different from my other stories
Trying something new

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If you people are interested then I will continue.

Please post your views

Eagerly waiting for your response!
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Love you all

Heytal

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Character Sketch~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm just posting the pics of the charactersOther details will update later
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Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Handa

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The Khurana's

Jeet Singh Khurana - Maan's Dadaji

Savitri Devi Khurana - Dadimaa

Viraj Singh Khurana - Maan's Dad

Sakshi Singh Khurana - Maan's Mom

Shweta Tiwari at STAR Parivaar Awards 2010

Dev Singh Khurana & Naintara Rathod Singh Khurana

Vikrant Singh Kurana

Anvesha Singh Khurana

Maasimaa

Handa's

( same as in the show)

Veer

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Yash Malhotra - Maan's cousin cum friend

Jay Bhanushali

Meera Shergill - Geet's friend

Perneet Chauhan

Pari Singhania - Geet's friend

Neha Jhulka

Aditya Sehgal & Pinky Manchanda
Aadi -Maan's right hand manPinky - Geet's friend

Rathod's

Maya Rathod - Naintara's Mom
Shilpa Agnihotri

Arjun Rathod - Naintara's brother

Piyush sahdev

Daaisa - Naintara's nanny

Mehru Chachi in Maat Pitaah Ke Charnon Mein Swarg

Rajveer Shergill - Meera's Father

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Mona (Rashmi)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for your new story.. Intresting concept and mindblowing prologue yasha lag raha hai maan na apne profit ka liya geet ka innocence ko use kiya hai usa ek jaal ma phasa kar aur ab truth jane ka baad geet wanha sa bhaga na chahti hai lekin kya maan usa jana dega?kya hai maan ka isha jaal ka wajaha?... Waiting for update.. Please pm me when you update this story...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

welcome back! congrats on the new FF! superb banner! Fab intriguing prologue! Wonderfully written! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan married her 4 a motive! she gt to knw n is angry! she wants 2 leave bt he doesn't let her! y did he marry her??? please post cs! update soon