MG FF - JAAL VERY IMPORTANT NOTE - Pg 32

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Emotional yaar... No need to even start story. Just the lines before the start that is ur introduction and the poster for the story itself told a Lott... U are one amazing writer dear. Will wait for allured and also jaal...

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Thanks so much for your lovely comments

It really means a lot to me!!!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

she is entrapped into the maze of lies and deceits around her.
is it for real or just her perception.

even if it is real, hope he intelligently spins the web around her and she even more intelligently finds a way out.. and amidst all this, hope they still succeed to build a world of love.

interesting prologue..waiting for the start.

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

interesting.. maan is a villain destroying geets life...

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Arushi Chandran

@arushi_93

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

looks really interesting wud love read.. do post soonnn!!

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Interesting Pro..I'm glad u tried something new 😃
Maan deceived her for some motives.. lekin gadbad kuch aur hi lag rhi hai 😕
The way he said "Geet relax we need to talk" is it some my or I'm getting confused lol 😲 😆
Anyways cont soon