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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the chapteršŸ‘

Maan getting some more clues of his past, leading to some clearance and also some confusion.
Eager for the next part😃

Thanks for commenting.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: leena63

Very nice & exiting update
So maan got some clues about his past & met Raj who was mohi's friend
When will Geet remember her past & recognise maan ?
Pls update soon

Geet? Remember Maan? Hmmm... no comments. If I open my mouth, the plot would come tumbling out.
I will update now directly next month. Will updating faster once I get used to a regular writing routine.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the pm!


Chapter 12

wonderful update! greatly written!

can understand that Geet was upset! seems like she is falling for Maan! great that Maan met Khosla who told him about Mohi!

Maan has vision and faints! he sees a lady... Mahi...

Maan's dilemma well portrayed! wow Geet is his respite!

update soon

Thank you for commenting. I am glad you liked the way I wrote Maan.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_KaCy

Geet? Remember Maan? Hmmm... no comments. If I open my mouth, the plot would come tumbling out.
I will update now directly next month. Will updating faster once I get used to a regular writing routine.

sorry but I assumed that this Raj is the villain of the story
May be he liked mahi and so...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: leena63

sorry but I assumed that this Raj is the villain of the story
May be he liked mahi and so...

Won't deny or confirm your assumptions. All I can say is you will like where I take this story!
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Posted: 6 years ago
very nice update
maan got flashes of past after reaching badi haveli
owner of haveli provide some information of mohi proving that what ever maan visualizing is not imagination

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

maan got flashes of past after reaching badi haveli
owner of haveli provide some information of mohi proving that what ever maan visualizing is not imagination

Glad you liked the update. Keep reading!
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Posted: 6 years ago



Amazing, lovely n wonderful updates
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Posted: 6 years ago


Read last 3 parts now only
Maan got flashes of his past while he was in badi haveli
He is completely stressed cause of his past memories
Geet is completely unaware of this
Waiting for Geet to remember her past
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree



Read last 3 parts now only
Maan got flashes of his past while he was in badi haveli
He is completely stressed cause of his past memories
Geet is completely unaware of this
Waiting for Geet to remember her past

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