Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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Gavvvy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

[very beautiful update. like their little romance

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Akku

@akkub.92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Awesome part...loved that they start there life in new way maan in this update was to good...😊

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#503

amazing

so they r together

but how will Geet deal with MSK

Maan had been used by many n MSK won't sit down n take it lightly

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#504

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Geet cannot sleep! Maan in the same boat! she goes 2 speak 2 him! Maan tensed! she wants to give it a chance! Maan happy n teases her! he is indeed shameless! Geet n Maan fall asleep in each other's arms! update soon

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#505

Part 31

The most awaited encounter of Tara and Maaneet... 😛 It was blockbuster 👏

I'm happy that good for nothing creature was shut by Maan...

Maan was thinking right... Geet Maan Singh Khurana sounded very good

Maaneet's first kiss ☺️❤️ Chalo der aaye durust aaye😆 but ab ye scene baar baar aaye🤣

Maan wants to give a chance to this marriage... Hopefully Geet agree ho Jaye !!

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Happy first writing anniversary 😛🥳

Keep writing...

And don't forget I have a request pending in your court writer sahiba😳

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#507

You have updated 2 parts in 5 days 😲 that too in my absence 😭😭 not fair... 🤢

When I was waiting... Tab update nahi kiya😡... ... I'm late

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#508

Part 32

All I can say is beautifully written update...

I didn't expect this... No rona dhona, no emotional atyachaar 😛

Simple beautiful romantic moment of Mr and Mrs Khurana ❤️

Last part was superb 😉😉 ( I want the detail version) but abhi ke liye issi se kaam chala lungi🤣

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#509

Part 30

I like the way she and her words always impact him the most..he had been taking care of the office as per her wish, her absence changed him a lot...
and now, her words made him look at himself, retrospect the changes in him. he has been trying to go back into the old days like before..though it is not easy, but he definitely started making efforts towards it...
Geet was angry with this changed Maan, but he and his life are above everything..she always wanted to trust him but could not..and seeing him putting his life in danger that too to remove her fear and anxiety..she wanted to give that affirmation that she trusts him..and no other words could have made him more happy now she at least did not doubt on his intentions..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#510

Part 31

loved that both decided to walk beside each other..wanted to start a fresh without any remembrance of the bitter things happened in last couple of months..
and conveyed it to Tara by showing the trust on each other regardless of her accuses..ready to give chance to their marriage..

and congratulations for the 1st anniversary of your writing..

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