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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#511

Part 32

a cheezy weezy update..like a dream..😆

it was like a glimpse of how they would be once everything is settled..
loved the way Maan was provoking her to speak..and she too blurted it out..

wonderful updates..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago

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umaa

@uluvmg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

lovely dovely cheezy weezy update.. 😆 both wanted tobe with eachother..wow, Geet on foot at midnight when he was thinking about her & her answer made him more happy, both share some cosy moment..you wrote it so well...enjoyed the dialog, what kind of Husband.. and Wife you are..❤️❤️ greedy for some more teasing from naughty maan..enjoyed reading ur awesome update..excited for next...thanks for pm..!!

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Loved this cheezy wizzy ..lissy bissy ..update so much.😳😆😛😉

superb update Amna ..👏

awesome Maaneet moments ⭐️ ☺️

and loved how Maan and Geet both wanted to be with each other 😃

and how both couldn't able to sleep ..😉

feeling restless and waiting for response of other..❤️

all in all a great update ...b'fully written..⭐️

waitng for next..😛

thanks for pm dear.🤗

Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana
Happy first writing anniversary 😛🥳
Keep writing...
And don't forget I have a request pending in your court writer sahiba😳

g janab ..I know 😆😉 ..

U can give me concept so that I start thinking about it 😆

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana
You have updated 2 parts in 5 days 😲 that too in my absence 😭😭 not fair... 🤢
When I was waiting... Tab update nahi kiya😡... ... I'm late

😆 I had off from college and had free time so I updated 😉 ..

Late ho to kya hua .. Update to yahan hi ha😆

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: uluvmg
lovely dovely cheezy weezy update.. 😆 both wanted tobe with eachother..wow, Geet on foot at midnight when he was thinking about her & her answer made him more happy, both share some cosy moment..you wrote it so well...enjoyed the dialog, what kind of Husband.. and Wife you are..❤️❤️ greedy for some more teasing from naughty maan..enjoyed reading ur awesome update..excited for next...thanks for pm..!!

thank u for liking it 😆😉 .. More teasing will come along :-P ..

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana
Part 32
All I can say is beautifully written update...
I didn't expect this... No rona dhona, no emotional atyachaar 😛
Simple beautiful romantic moment of Mr and Mrs Khurana ❤️
Last part was superb 😉😉 ( I want the detail version) but abhi ke liye issi se kaam chala lungi🤣

hahahaha ...

I really don't like rona dhona .. I like such updates 😆 .. Don't know how I chose sad story 😆 ..I used to write fun fun only 😆

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 32

a cheezy weezy update..like a dream..😆

it was like a glimpse of how they would be once everything is settled..
loved the way Maan was provoking her to speak..and she too blurted it out..

wonderful updates..

😃😉😉

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#519

Lovely part

Geet asked maan to give her some time to think about giving second chance to their marriage..maan was sad but agreed ...both were thinking about each other and couldn't sleep Geet came to OH and maan was shocked to see her at that hour ...Geet decided to give second chance to their relation and maan was on cloud nine...both spent some lovey dovey moments and slept in each other arms...eagerly waiting for the next part