Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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vandy28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: abba12
done with update 😉

done with comment to...unres my post...go check...

this time ek hi comment se kaam chalo fr last 3 updates too...but from next time just send me pm so that i can keep check on update n my comment too

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vandy28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: abba12
😆rose chalay ga

aww...thank u ...

i love rose😳😳

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: vandy28
aww...thank u ...
i love rose😳😳

me too 😆😉

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: vandy28
done with comment to...unres my post...go check...
this time ek hi comment se kaam chalo fr last 3 updates too...but from next time just send me pm so that i can keep check on update n my comment too

wahh i will check ...aik comment kafi ha 😉 ..

aap to bass a hi jaya karo utna kafi ha ( ziada nai ho gya 😆) ... chalo kabi kabi chalta ha 😆

i will send u buddy req😉

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: vandy28
oh god...seriously sometime i wonder how can u write such part...n look like u r expert in such scenes😆😆
sorry dear but seriously this part come was not what i was excepted...haha...i was thinking some confrontation or something emotional...but ur story is always lighted n it does make people smile...i did smile after reading this spclly ur note😆😆 bachi badi ho gayi h 🤣

part was too good...geet was right for taking time but woh toh pyaar mn andhi h kitni der tak bhav khati...raat ko hi chali gayi...whole thing was cute...how she confessed indirectly and maan giving back his dialgue

chalo giving last update comment here only...last three part was superb ...how geet reached to save maan n than maan n geet going to maan old home...geet told him that she heard tara n maan talk but when maan question back did she listen whole talk...than she realise may b there is something more...maan came drunk n geet feel bad n angry too ...thinking what happen to her maan...how he get involve in illegal activity n how easily he can kill people n by mistake she also did...but than maan bring that man back n he is alive too...finally they decided to come mansion n where tara appeared n shocked to see geet alive...n loved how geet said i m mrs khurana...finally she took stand fr herself but again gone back in her shell n kept silent and maan give best reply to tara n finally asked geet to give their marriage a chance...😃😃

uff done...big comment😉

surprising comment 😆 ,,, long long one

haha !! I always lag to put on right emotions and confessions so i thought to make it this way 😆 .. and while re reading it gave a good feel 😆 ... and note hehe main shareef bachi 😳😆

last few parts were sad sad types so now moving on .😆😉 .. lets see what comes in my mind next 😆

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Wow ! now that was an awesome part

I could see Maan's possessive side coming through when he was thinking Geet is his wife and he'll let her go that alone says that he will stand by her side , he is there to stay

both could not sleep and it was cute actually Geet coming to Maan and telling him what type of husband he is leaving his wife in the mansion

those words were almost an indication that she too wants him in her life

the teasing was awesome loved it