Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16 - Page 27

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Teaser # 1

"Leave her !!! " maan yelled ..

" ahh !! dard usse ha , aur takleef tuje ho rahi ha ??"

Maan could see blood flowing from geet's arm as the goon still held her arm tightly ...

" I said leave her , or I will knock ur bloody life out of ur body "

Teaser # 2

" what have u done to my maan ?? ... I don't love u ... I love my maan .. bring him back ... my maan was not drug smuggler , he never got drunk .. he hated drinks ... where is he ??? where is my maan ?? " she was mad at him , and her words hit him like tornado ... Did she just say ,she loved old him ? did she just claim him to be hers ?

enjoy :) .. i am typing ... will update as soon as it is typed and i found it ok to post 😆😉

Nice treasure!! Waiting for my Maan.,

Love it waiting for the update

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Update fast

posted teaser ..will update soon 😛

Originally posted by: uluvmg

Awesome update...maan hurt to know geet not trust him..went alone & Kidnapped by King's Men...geet waited as she felt maan not at fault ... after some time not finding him she worried & went to outhouse ...search his cupboard & found some cash & drugs..she heard some people entered in the room.. they found drugs & left... but as daringly she followed them & found maan tied up by king's man... bullet shoot with geet's screaming Maan & he sensed his geet's voice.. tara's entry?? hope maaneet well safe...love ur twists & turns always...excited for next... thanks for pm...!!

i literally forgot tara from few updates 😆 ... will think of bringing her back 😆

Originally posted by: DivineBlessings

U r an amazing writer 🤗 ...plz pm me your stories 😳 ...

thanks ..

Originally posted by: mlaran852

awesome!!!
maan finally learns that geet heard tara and him and of course he is hurt...he is a little bit right but can he really blame her?? her best friend and the man she loves talk about her death and their gain who wouldn't react ...well even in a more hard way...

maan is kidnapped and geet is really worried..she finds out the money he has stored and the drugs too...did he really believe that she would accept any of it ???

geet manages to follow the kidnappers and tries to save maan will she manage??

waiting!!!!!!

both cant blame each other , one hid about disease ..and other played big game .. 😛

Nice teaser geet confessed and is shocked

Originally posted by: gbhat

Superb update Maan is hurt that Geet doesn't trust him But I was surprised that Maan is a drug dealer an d he is kidnapped. Geet has reached there but now who is shot. Update soon

he joined gangsters and bad company led him into this 😛