Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16 - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

U rocked this story... pheww.. My papers over. . But still practicals on their way...

update was awsome... Love the way geet some clue. .. But shocked ... Why there was drugs. .. And so much money maan ... Has kept for her but from where he get them?? .. Kings men came in search of the drugs and geet followed them... They shot him .. Ouchh... And geet called his name... What will u gonna do with poor them..

all the best for practicals 😊 ..
thanks .. he gambles na , so he got all money from there ...
i am not gonna do anything with poor them 😆 ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

maan aur geet kaha se kaha pahuch gaye!

story shuru huyi thi tab dono kaise the aur ab kaise ban gaye!
dono ne ek dusrein pe bharosa nahi kiya aur ab ek dusrein ko hurt kar rahe hai...
ab goli kisko lagi ...yeh toh aap ataogi nahi toh humein toh sochte hi rehna hai...😆
par story ab bahut achhe mod pe aa gayi hai...
ab thodi dooriyaan bhi kam ho jaayegi...haina??

heheee 😆 .. after reading ur comment i started reading from beginning and realized there is a lot of change 😆😆
socho socho ..dimag ki exercise hoti ha ..achi tarah se 😆
haan ..doorian kam ho jaen gi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
WohoOo... She is claiming him as hers.. Yes's.. At last... Did they shot her ?? Why was blood on her ?? ... Jaldi jaldi type karo .. Mjhe janna hai ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Superb update dear Amna..👏

Geet realizing she can be wrong and she didn't heard Maan saying anything but than she believe
he is behind all this..and Maan got hurt too
Geet saw Maan's feelings written with blood
and she saw drugs too poor Geet and Maan 🥺
hope everything gets fine soon in their life..❤️
oops Maan struggling with King's goons and here Geet worried for him..
but finally she managed to chase them 😛 smart girl ..⭐️
and found her Maan..😳
Maan got shot ???? 😲 and saw Geet too ..
what Geet will do know..
waiting for next update.🤗


🤗 thank u 😉
both ve been blaming each other since a long time now .. but now that they know a bit of truth they must resolve their issue .. i am trying , lets see how its goes 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb part...
Loved how they were just concerned fr each other when they saw each other...it's their love n affection fr each other...layer they did realise what other did to each other...
Dream was too good... so lovely...geet somehow in dream too see him drunk...lolz n then he entered as drunk too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous teasers. Waiting for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part was nice...
They both are so alike that they behave so alike...they have temper...they are illogical sometimes...they behave different...n they hide their feeling too...
Maan first himself bring other guy issue than himself get angry...haha...
Finally geet speak out n told him...she heard his n tara talk...
Waiting fr maan reaction
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...so u bringing all the suspense n thriller material to it...woah...
Geet become detective...lolzz like all bahut of TV...doing all super exciting things themselves...lolzzz
But that's understandable ...how cn she leave him in danger ...she has to go save him...both are fearing fr each other safety...
End is superb intersting...waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb intersting teaser...geet finally confessed her love to him... woahh
Though indirectly...

Waotinv
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting teaser
I loved second one

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