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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

wow lovely omg thud thud update..te way geet accusing my maan but his word have u heard me say anything, tat was enough for geet to know tat she didt trust him and my maan left leaving a guilty geet who was crying thinking abt her mistrust for my maan..omg my maan was kidnapped and geet searching him,her each sec was shell for her..geet heart slitting seeing te room in which my maan living all these days was lovely emotional..te way goons came for drugs and geet following them and omg who was shot geet or my maan..i love te update so much with thud thud heart

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

fabulous update

geet accuse maan which hurt him deep in return maan only ask one question giving geet realisation that maan in not in plan

drug dealer kidnap maan

geet reach wher maan is kept by those men while searching maan

goon shot hope maaneet are safe

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saro

@saro

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Emotional update... But y geet always ... Is she going to die...?

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

emotional update..
waiting for next update..

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Superb update dear Amna..👏

Geet realizing she can be wrong and she didn't heard Maan saying anything but than she believe

he is behind all this..and Maan got hurt too

Geet saw Maan's feelings written with blood

and she saw drugs too poor Geet and Maan 🥺

hope everything gets fine soon in their life..❤️

oops Maan struggling with King's goons and here Geet worried for him..

but finally she managed to chase them 😛 smart girl ..⭐️

and found her Maan..😳

Maan got shot ???? 😲 and saw Geet too ..

what Geet will do know..

waiting for next update.🤗

Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

superb update...
Geet realised that she hurt maan.. Maan is in danger.. but Geet acts smarts & reached to Maan.. but who got shot?

waiting for next update

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Akku

@akkub.92

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Superb part ...poor geet maan facing problems since long time and who is shot by gun..hope maan geet is fine...update soon

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

maan aur geet kaha se kaha pahuch gaye!

story shuru huyi thi tab dono kaise the aur ab kaise ban gaye!

dono ne ek dusrein pe bharosa nahi kiya aur ab ek dusrein ko hurt kar rahe hai...

ab goli kisko lagi ...yeh toh aap ataogi nahi toh humein toh sochte hi rehna hai...😆

par story ab bahut achhe mod pe aa gayi hai...

ab thodi dooriyaan bhi kam ho jaayegi...haina??

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

U rocked this story... pheww.. My papers over. . But still practicals on their way...

update was awsome... Love the way geet some clue. .. But shocked ... Why there was drugs. .. And so much money maan ... Has kept for her but from where he get them?? .. Kings men came in search of the drugs and geet followed them... They shot him .. Ouchh... And geet called his name... What will u gonna do with poor them..